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Chapter 5
by guzhead2003
Does Sue fall further under the spell of Sauron?
Sauron discovers that he has the power to change Sue's body as well as her mind!
Sauron smiled to himself, as he watched Sue rub down her body. "Are you going to watch me all day or are you getting us some food?" She grinned devilshly. He noted the tuft of hair covering her otherwise exposed pussy. He hated that he couldn't see it in all it's glory. He began to realize that he admired the human female's body more than he ever imagined. However, a problem would arise, as he planned on keeping her here a long time. Her pussy hair would grow, as well as leg hair and underarm hair. This would not do, especially since he had no tools that human's used to remove such unsightly hair.
Sauron thought long and hard. He knew his powers would allow him to manipulate the mind, but could he take it a step further, did his powers over her mind hold so much sway, that he could **** her body to change as he pleased. It theoretically could be simple to cause her mind to release certain signals and chemicals to change her as he saw fit. Did his powers really work that well?
He made his move, he held Sue's gaze for a long time. She felt her mind drift to the place of utter nirvana. He spoke softly, "I'm sorry my mate, I was just noticing how terrible it is that your pubic hair, leg hair and underarm hair have been falling oout recently. It's truly a shame. You are such a beauty. And I know how you hate it."
The young blonde heroine's eyes lulled softly at his words. She nodded in her trance-like state. She sighed softly, and looked down at her pubic hair. "I know, it sucks!" She ran her hands along her taught stomach and through her pubic bush. Sauron's heart lept with glee when small blonde strands could be seen in her hands. "It's just so weird!" She put her hands over her face in embarrasment.
Sauron smiled at his triumph. His powers were vast. He walked to her in the small pool and rubbed her shoulder length blonde hair. "There, there, my mate," he soothed her, "at least your the long flowing hair on you're head continues to shine so lovely in the sun."
Sue smiled, and kissed his cheek. "You're so kind!" She playfully slapped his broad green chest, "now go get us some food!" She walked to the rocky bank and laid out in the afternoon sun.
Sauron flew away reluctantly. He wanted to mate her there and then, but it was not time. He had to ensure she would be the one to engage him. Her mind would truly believe she wanted to mate.
He returned several minutes later with a plethora of fruits and nuts from the Savage Land. He handed Susan what looked like an apple. Part of her was still unsure of all of this, but she bit into it. The sweet fruit hit her tongue, causing her knees to almost buckle under the delicious taste. "MMMMMM!" she cooed shooting Sauron a glance.
He took this time to hold her gaze again. His eyes lit up. "Such a simple life, is it not. Much better than constantly battling monsters, aliens and villains!"
Sue nodded, back in a daze, "It truly is," she responded, her mind telling her to fully agree with this villainous creature. She finished her meal and stretched out her naked body in the warm sun. "Why do we have to be so far up, why can't we go down to some of the villages?" She again made the mistake of looking into his eyes.
The evil dinosaur thought for a second, he looked at her with his hypnotic stare. "They do not except us," he seeded something new inside her, "ever since you took your place at my side and assumed the name Suzie the She-Devil, Shanna and Kazar have fought us to banishment!" He bit into his own fruit, "soon my dear we will strike at the imposter Shanna and her foolish mate!"
The girl's teeth began to chatter at the names. "I fucking hate them." She stood up and shouted at the sun. "I AM SUZIE THE SHE-DEVIL OF THE SAVAGE LAND! NOT THAT BITCH!"
"Excellent!" Sauron muttered to himself. He forgot that she was within ears shot.
"What?" Sue looked over.
Sauron thought quick, "I love your enthusiasm, and anger, is all."
The taught beauty went back to sunbathing in the nude. "I have a right to be!"
The villain looked over her body, thinking that a tan would be nice. He got Sue's attention by tapping her on the shoulder. She looked up into his hypnotic eyes. "You're tan is coming along greatly!"
It seemed almost instantaneous as Sue's skin took on a darker hue. Her brain was sending signals to release melatonin to her system. "Thank you Sauron!" She blushed.
Sauron took a seat next to her. Sue's eyes caught his muscular green body. Something was wrong to her. "Hey!" She called to him, "Why do I have to be nude but you have that tunic?"
The green dino stood up and smiled down to his new mate. "You're right, it's not fair!" He pulled the straps on the sides of his small brown tunic and released. His humongous green cock came into Sue's view. It must have been thirteen inches long and three inches wide, the biggest she had ever seen. Much bigger than even Reed could stretch. She stared at it long and hard.
"It's as if you've never seen it before!" Sauron laughed.
The mind control hadn't planted such a memory. Sue thought long and hard, but for the life of her, couldn't remember seeing such a monstrous green cock. How could she forget something so strange.
Sauron grabbed her face and pulled her gaze up locking in hypnosis. "Why, this is your favorite part of me!" He could tell Sue's mind was attempting to come to terms with this new information. "We have mated for several seasons now my darling!"
He watched as the blonde bombshell shook her head. "Of...Of course," she stumbled with her words. He seemed right, but she couldn't quite remember. She giggled, "it just shocks me every time!" She turned her form back to sunbathing, her skin now taking on a glow.
Sauron petted her hair, he noticed it's length had grown. "You do love mating season don't you!" He didn't hold her gaze this time, wanting to see her reaction.
He was pleasantly surprised, when Sue responded. "I really do," she couldn't quite remember some things though. "When is the next season."
Sauron rested his hands on her shoulders. She felt his cock on her back. "You humans," he chuckled. "Always trying to mate out of season." He rubbed her shoulders, and she cooed. "It is the problem with interspecies mating! You must be a good girl and wait!"
Her face looked up into his eyes, her head resting on his stomach. "I have been a good girl!"
The pteron continued his massage as his eyes met hers. The next step would take all of his powers. "I know you have, and I know you want an egg, but..."
Her haze briefly cut short at the word "egg". "Huh? An egg?"
"Silly girl," he chided her. "You're so forgetful today." He began his ruse, hoping it would work. "You're incident with the cosmic storm changed you in so many ways. You're womb is no good for a human child. It is what brought you to me and attracted you to me in the first place. You need the seed of a Pterosaurus!" Sauron took note of her face. It grimaced in something resembling pain. She gripped her stomach. No doubt, her mind was now actually changing the DNA in her womb, allowing for acceptance of his seed. He helped ease her pain by grabbing her hand and holding it over her stomach. "You will have your egg in time, my love! You deserve one!"
The twister of chemicals rushing through Sue seemed to die down. "I do deserve an egg!" She looked up at him eagerly. "Let's mate right now!"
Sauron lied, "I cannot," he patted her stomach, "only during mating season!" He laughed, "Though you do love to try and entice me to mate! But...."
Sue's eyes were as emerald as Sauron's, "But, what?"
He sighed, "It won't work!"
Sue nodded, "It will! I can do it!"
He laughed, "You try every day, but it's of no use!"
Sue chuffed and pulled her gaze away. "We'll see about that!"
Soon, the pair drifted off into a blissful nap in the sun. Sue's head resting near Sauron's crotch. A content smile cut across Sauron's face.
Does Sue "trick" Sauron into mating?
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Updated on Feb 19, 2025
by madmaniac
Created on Jul 22, 2006
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