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Chapter 2 by Corgi
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NeuroGrid Security Systems
Caleb Holloway sat at the far end of the dining room table, slightly hunched, a hoodie pulled over his wiry frame like a shield. His plate was untouched, his fork twirling idly in mashed potatoes that had already begun to congeal. The overhead light was too bright, washing everyone in a sterile glow that made their smiles look sharper than they should have. He didn’t belong here. He never had.
Across from him sat his younger twin sisters, Lana and Sophie, both eighteen, both radiating different brands of effortless confidence. Lana, the prom queen type, had hair so blonde it bordered on silver under the LED glare. She was stacked, sculpted, and smug, every movement calibrated for maximum attention. She knew exactly how hot she was, and used it to get anything she wanted, without having to work for it. Tonight, she wore a crop top that showed just enough to scandalize the room if anyone cared, not that their parents noticed. Next to her, Sophie was her athletic foil. Tanned, lean, all muscle and athleticism. Her hair was tied back in a practical ponytail, and her posture was that of someone always half-ready to bolt. They were opposites in style, but united in purpose: they lived to tear Caleb down. It was their favorite sport.
“You could try not to spill sauce on yourself this time,” their mother said sharply, setting the last dish on the table with a clatter that bordered on aggression. Melissa Holloway was forty, still attractive in that “I want to pass as one of my daughters friends” way. Her hair was always perfectly dyed, her clothes pressed like she was going to a PTA meeting even on weekends. She looked at Caleb the way one might look at mold creeping up bathroom tile, tired of pretending it wasn’t there.
“I didn’t spill anything,” Caleb muttered without lifting his eyes.
Sophie let out a laugh. “Sure, bro. Like we’d confuse you for someone else. Not that you can tell on that shirt. Just another stain on that unwashed rag.”
Lana joined in with a pitying smile. “Don’t bully him. He’s just... delicate. Like a baby bird. One that never left the nest. Or got a job.”
Caleb’s face burned, but he kept quiet. He was used to this, had learned that speaking only extended the humiliation. He chewed instead, slowly, focusing on the scrape of fork against porcelain.
“Did you apply anywhere this week?” asked Dan, their father, in his usual gravel-and-nails tone. He didn’t look up from his food. He never bothered to look at Caleb. Dan, also 40, was one of those “peaked in high school” types. Or at least that was what Caleb wished he could say. Because Dan hadn’t peaked. He’d kept rising, effortlessly. The hometown quarterback turned successful car dealership owner, who turned that into him owning more than a handful of businesses in their local town.
“No,” Caleb said. “I’ve been working on something else.”
Melissa arched a penciled brow. “Oh, let me guess…another ‘project’ for your little online dungeon game? What’s this one? An incel perk tree? A self-respect patch?”
The twins giggled. Across the table, Rachel, the eldest sibling at 23, finally looked up from her phone, although not in Caleb’s defense.
She wore her usual outfit of contempt: high-waisted jeans, a feminist slogan tee, and a permanent sneer. Her dark hair was pulled back in a side shave undercut, one hoop earring swinging slightly as she tilted her head to glare at him. Rachel, a college student nearing her bachelors degree was in and out of the house as one would expect from a 23 year old who on one hand didn’t want to pay for rent but on the other wanted the freedom not being under her parent’s thumb. She majored in Gender Studies and Feminist theory, and was planning on going for a master’s degree.
“Amazing,” she said, voice sharp with disdain. “A grown man playing digital **** chambers in his basement. And you wonder why no one takes you seriously.”
Caleb glanced at her, jaw tight. He’d long stopped trying to win her approval. Once she’d taken her first Intro to Gender Politics course three years ago she had decided he was a walking case study in everything wrong with contemporary masculinity.
“I’m building an AI environment for second life,” he muttered. “Not that you’d understand anything that isn’t on a picket sign.”
Rachel smirked, tossing a napkin onto her plate. “Right. Your AI. Sure. Let me guess…another simulation where you get to be powerful and all the girls are **** to like you. Real empowering, bro.”
“That’s not what it…” He started. Not that she was wrong. His work on the digital strip club in second life was promising.
“Save it. You reek of Reddit. If you say the word ‘female’ one more time, I swear to God I’ll throw this wine in your face.”
Melissa didn’t step in. Neither did Dan. In fact, Lana looked like she was enjoying the show, and Sophie was already leaning in, waiting for the next punchline. Caleb felt like a deer in the middle of a family of predators, only they weren’t even hungry. They were just bored.
Rachel’s verbal dissection of him hung in the air like smoke, curling through the room, acrid and lingering. Caleb stared down at his plate, appetite extinguished.
But his parents weren’t finished.
Melissa exhaled through her nose, the same sound she made when checking bank statements or finding Caleb’s cereal bowls crusted and forgotten behind the couch. “You know what the worst part is?” she said, not even trying to lower her voice. “It’s not just that you’re lazy. It’s that you think you’re better than everyone.”
Caleb didn’t respond. He knew the script. She’d rehearsed it in her head a hundred times.
“You float around this house like some misunderstood genius,” she went on, wiping her hands on a cloth napkin she wasn’t even using. “But you dropped out of college in one semester. You haven’t worked a day since high school. You sleep all day, game all night, and leave the whole basement smelling like BO and instant ramen. Meanwhile, your sisters are making something of themselves. Sophie and Lana are both top of their class. Lana also has her athletic scholarships while Sophie is class president. And Rachel is getting ready to start her Masters program.”
Dan finally looked up. His eyes were small and bloodshot, the beer beside his plate half-empty, his tie still on even though he hadn’t gone to the office today. “We’re not running a charity, Caleb,” he said flatly. “You’re twenty-three. This isn’t a fuckin’ halfway house.”
“Dan,” Melissa scolded mildly, but there was no correction in her tone, just ritual.
“He needs to hear it.” Dan leaned forward slightly. “We gave you a year. One full year to get your shit together. That year’s up, son. I don’t care if you’re still figuring it out. You’re either paying rent by the first of next month or you’re out.”
Lana made a low whistle, dragging her fork through her food. “Oof. Guess the spare room’s finally going on Airbnb.”
“Can’t say I’ll miss the late-night cackling,” Sophie added, stretching her arms overhead. “I swear, you scream louder over video games than I do at practice.”
Rachel didn’t speak, but her eyes were locked on him with something colder than hate…disinterest. She’d already written him off as a lost cause.
Caleb’s fork clattered against his plate as he stood, chair scraping hard against the floor. No one flinched. No one apologized. No one cared.
“I didn’t ask to be born into this goddamn freak show,” he said, voice trembling not with volume but with suppressed fury. “But don’t worry. I’ll be out of your perfect little lives soon enough.”
Dan leaned back in his chair, unimpressed. “We’ll believe it when we see it.”
Caleb didn’t reply. He just turned and walked out of the room.
Behind him, the voices resumed. Laughter. Jokes. But he didn’t hear any of it. His ears were ringing too loud with shame. He slammed the door to the basement, descending into his own little area, the smell of body order and artificial cheese dust pervasive. “A month…I can figure something out in a month.” He didn’t sound convincing, even to himself.
The house smelled like dust, ozone, wiring, plaster. Like new tech being forcefully integrated into old walls. Melissa hovered in the living room like a restless supervisor, arms crossed, watching two uniformed techs from NeuroCorp Systems install black glass panels near the entryways and motion-sensitive nodes in the corners. A sleek central hub, not much bigger than a shoebox, sat on the console table near the stairs, already humming with quiet intelligence.
“The system integrates through the HVAC, the WIFI, and meshes with all your other smart appliances” one of the workers explained, a short man with a tablet. “Voice control, facial recognition, motion tracking, biometric temperature adjustment. You’ve got the full package here, ma’am. It’s more than just a security system.”
Melissa nodded, eyes tired. “So it works with our existing smart home systems? Our climate control? The home surround system?”
“All pre-configured to your specifications. We’ll walk you through them before we leave. Even better, it’ll mark each family members preferences. You walk into the living room, and it’ll set the temperature to your preferred setting…lets say 82 degrees. You leave and your husband comes in and it’ll adjust to his preferred 78. You can set it to turn on your favorite play lists that follow you room to room also. And, as the admin, you can override other users if the kids get a bit too loud.”
She smiled a brittle, professional smile. “Great. I want my house secure, but I still want to be able to live in it.”
The taller tech, currently wiring a ceiling node, gave a low chuckle. “You’ll barely know it’s there, I promise. Smart home, smarter boundaries.”
The basement door creaked open. Caleb emerged, blinking in the brighter upstairs light. His hoodie sleeves were pushed up, fingers smudged with something, ink, or maybe thermal paste. He looked like he’d crawled out of a server farm.
“What’s all this?” he asked, voice flat.
Melissa turned slowly, as if she’d forgotten he lived here.
“We’re installing the new security system,” she said. “Should’ve been done years ago, but your father finally stopped dragging his feet.”
Caleb stepped farther into the room, eyeing the black interface on the wall like it was some alien artifact. “Doesn’t look like just a security system. That’s a neural grid interface.”
The shorter tech blinked, surprised. “You’ve heard about NeuroCorp?”
Caleb shrugged. “Read about it online. It’s modular AI. It doesn’t just monitor, it learns patterns. Tracks behaviors. Isn’t it used primarily in prisons?”
Melissa shot him a look. “Don’t start.”
“I’m just saying,” Caleb said, now walking a slow circle around the hub. “This thing’s overkill for a McMansion in the suburbs. What are we expecting, militant squirrels?”
Melissa exhaled sharply. “I wanted something that works. With Lana and Sophie coming home late, and Rachel bouncing in and out, I need to know who’s where, when, and why.”
“Right,” Caleb said, voice dipped in sarcasm. “Because God forbid someone disrupt the sacred Holloway routine.”
The shorter tech awkwardly cleared his throat and retreated to check a panel. Melissa’s smile thinned into a blade.
“Go back downstairs, Caleb. Let the people who do things handle this.”
He hesitated, eyes flicking again to the interface.
“...What’s the admin password?” he asked casually.
Melissa scoffed. “As if I’d tell you. You’d probably use it to reprogram the thermostat to 90 and try to fry us all.”
“Just curious.”
She said nothing, already turning her attention back to the techs. Dismissed.
Caleb lingered a second longer, then retreated back to the basement. But the basement door had barely latched before Caleb eased it open again, just an inch, just enough for him to peak through. From the dark stairwell, he crouched, quiet and still, his breath shallow as the voices drifted back in.
Melissa was still in the living room with the two NeuroCorp techs, who had moved on from wiring to configuration.
“So,” she was saying, “this thing handles locks, lights, temperature, and security footage. What else do I actually need to know?”
The shorter tech chuckled, the sound laced with mild condescension. “Well, it’s more than just your standard smart home system, ma’am. NeuroGrid’s designed to learn. It tracks environmental and behavioral data to optimize comfort and compliance.”
“Compliance?” Melissa asked, frowning slightly.
“Not like that,” the taller tech added quickly, finishing with the ceiling node. “It just means it can build behavioral baselines. Like…if someone’s up past a certain time every night, the system can flag it. Or if someone keeps entering restricted zones, it adjusts how the system reacts. You can fine-tune access levels per person.”
Caleb narrowed his eyes. Access levels.
“It uses biometric markers to profile everyone in the house,” the shorter tech continued. “Heartbeat patterns, body temperature, vocal cadence, gait. It learns your family's patterns so it can predict behaviors. Light preferences, movement cycles, even mood states. If your son’s anxious, for example, it could dim the lights or suppress noise.”
Jesus, Caleb thought, his pulse quickening. It can read moods?
Melissa let out a polite but glazed-over “Mhm,” clearly not grasping the implications.
“Now,” the taller tech said, “Once it has all the baselines of the family living here, it will note when someone who isn’t part of the established baseline enters your home, or any off limits areas. For example, if you set your bedroom off to off limits to anyone but you and your husband, the door will lock automatically when someone not authorized even attempts to open it.”
Caleb took this information in and bounced it against what he’d already read about NeuroGrid. This company made a name for itself in prison systems. Prisoner behavior modification routines. Rumor on the message boards he frequented was it was some MKUltra bullshit. “What if…” he half mumbled to himself.
He glanced down the hall again. The installers were still inside, wrapping up their tablet checklists, talking with his mother. Whisper quiet, he ran to the front door, glancing out. The rear doors of the matte-gray utility truck wide open in the driveway . No one saw him slip out the door and circle around the van like a shadow.
The van was quiet. no radio, just a jumble of electronics, wiring, cameras, and various other sensors. Tools were lined up neatly in foam-cut holders. Cables. Diagnostic pads. Heat sensors. And there, wedged between a zippered pouch and a locked supply case, was a spiral-bound manual, thick and dense, stamped with the NeuroCorp Systems logo and the words “Operator Configuration & Behavioral Calibration - Internal Use Only.”
Bingo.
He darted forward, low and silent, fingers snatching the manual in a practiced, fluid motion. His other hand briefly brushed against a coiled optical cable…he froze…but nothing fell. No noise. Glancing back at the house, he flipped open the manual, and had to stop himself from cheering. This was the version for the systems installed in the prison.
Without another word, he snuck back into his house, and back into the basement.
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Later That Night
Under the low hum of his monitor, Caleb flipped through the manual with trembling fingers. Pages of developer schematics, command protocols, psychological tuning options, and neural feedback loops spilled out in terse engineering language.
Most of it was technical. Some of it was horrifying. And all of it was his now.
The basement was dark except for the blue-white glow of Caleb’s monitors, and the open NeuroCorp operator manual spread out like a relic on his desk. The air was stale, warm from the machines, and buzzing with tension. Caleb had spent hours reading.
The system wasn’t just about security, It was about compliance engineering. That’s what it called it, buried one hundred and twenty-five pages deep: a combination of biometric surveillance, environmental modulation, and adaptive suggestion loops.
He glanced through his notes:
Biometric Tracking:
• Heart rate, perspiration, body temp, gait analysis
• Real-time logging of occupants by location and stress level
• Predictive fatigue modeling (“emotional availability index,” it called it)
He could tell when someone was tired, anxious, or distracted. He could know the exact moment someone was least guarded.
Environmental Controls:
• Full spectrum light modulation (color, brightness, flicker rate)
• Infrasound and ultrasonic audio channels (imperceptible tones)
• HVAC-linked atmospheric control — including release of safe but psychoactive compound blends for stress reduction or compliance increase
“Low-dose aerosol distribution (A-Class: Oxytocin/Epinephrine variants, P-Class: Cortisol mod, D-Class: Sleep priming)”
He sat back, stunned. The System can leak gas. “What the fuck…” he muttered.
He brought up the system on his computer. The UI in front of him was clean, polished, clearly designed for homeowners. Light settings. Security alerts. Thermostat presets.
But the manual told a different story. With admin access, he could toggle the deeper modules. He ran a key hack he’d downloaded to brute **** the system. A new panel unlocked.
BEHAVIORAL CALIBRATION SUITE — CAUTION: NON-CONSUMER MODULE
Caleb exhaled slowly, fingers trembling. Menus unfolded like teeth:
• Emotion-State Mapping
• Looped Suggestion Injection
• Reactive Audio Layering
• Compliance Curve Modeling
• Risk Profile Reinforcement
• Subliminal Compliance Routines
• Consent Gradient Protocols
• Emotion Dampening Gas Control (EDGC) (Prison-Only Hardware)
• Group Role Normalization
• Compliance Cue Pairing
Each linked to biometric thresholds. Fatigue. Stress. Hormonal flux. The system learned when someone was ****. He whistled.
The aerosol dispersal system wasn’t active. He confirmed that. The vents were dumb, not the smart, compound-linked ducts in the correctional version. But the logic was there.
And if the system expected certain chemical triggers, he could mimic them.
He already had ideas. Humidifier rigs. Vaped solutions. Room-specific dispersal. If it just needed to log a trigger, he could fake it. His mind drifted to the humidifiers and air fresheners in every room of the house. God, half of those were “smart systems”, already wifi enabled, already wired into the smart home system.
“Holy shit…” Caleb muttered. This…this was everything he’d hoped for and more.
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