My script...kinda

Now red eye is simular to its original version i made the movie a little more intresting by one making the bad guy **** in this situation by his brother being kidnaped and he struggles to go through with it. So now i have to sell it to somone. 2DAYS LATER:

I look a the suit i have making sure its right i walk in to the building of the caa to sell my script walking along the marble floor to the front desk i smile at the desk worker. " hello i have apointment with michael ovitz". One moment sir she smiles i wait while she talks to her boss. He will see you now sir see say poing to his office i walk calmly to the door and knock.