Chapter 41 by Vain

But for how long is Jack willing to let this continue...?

It looks like he's aiming for the top score

{if Desire > 49}Sorry, this chapter hasn't been written yet.{else}Sorry, you can only read this thread in play mode.{endif}

Currently this thread is just a placeholder to test the score system. Text will be added eventually.

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Girls of Jack

One man's world has been turned upside down, but he may find hope in the most unexpected places.

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A story which I hope to work on when I have the time for it. For now it's closed for others, but I'll gladly accept ideas and suggestions for how to improve or continue the story! I've now started adding conditions, which is how I planned it from the start. So far it's recommended to read without activating the play function, but please try it out if you want, and let me know if you find something odd about the scoring.