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Chapter 200
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Mr Nice Guy
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Cheerios and Choices
The sun pressed through the blinds, thin golden lines spilling across the tangled sheets. Joey stirred, every muscle aching in a way that was equal parts soreness and satisfaction. The warmth of Indira curled against his side, Serena draped across his legs, and Juniper tucked into the crook of his arm told the story of last night. He smiled faintly. It was too much to hold onto—too much pleasure, too much closeness—and yet, he didn't want to let go of any of it.
A sound carried up from downstairs: the muffled clack of heels on hardwood, the low creak of cabinet doors, the rhythmic shuffle of someone moving with purpose. His mother. Donna was already awake, her morning routine unshaken.
Careful not to disturb the girls, Joey slid out of bed, pulled on some boxers, and padded down the stairs. The scent of perfume and coffee hit him as he stepped into the kitchen. His mother stood at the counter, slipping papers into her briefcase, her dark hair twisted neatly, a tailored black suit hugging her figure. She looked like a woman carved from authority, unrecognizable from the woman he'd made out with at the lookout the day before.
"You're up," she said without turning, her voice carrying the softness she now saved for him. "Good. You'll want some breakfast. School day or not, you need to keep your energy up."
Joey poured himself a bowl of cereal and sat at the kitchen table. "School," he echoed, a small laugh slipping out. The word felt strange now, almost quaint.
Donna shut the briefcase with a click and finally looked at him. Her sharp eyes softened, but her tone didn't. "Yes, school. No matter how much fun you had last night, Joey, you still have to go. No excuses, mister."
He ducked his head, a boyish grin tugging at him despite himself. She always knew.
"I'm going to be late tonight," she added, slipping her phone into her bag. "I'm meeting Neha Patel after work. She's asked for some help with her look, so I'm taking her shopping." The corners of her mouth curled up, the very idea amused her.
"Shopping?" Joey asked, spoon halfway to his mouth.
"Of course, sweetheart," Donna's smile grew, and then, as if remembering something, she leaned against the counter. "She wants to be the best mother she can, and so I'll show her what she needs to improve. Obviously I'll have to help her out at first, show her some alternatives to the way she used to think a mother should look, but she's smart. She'll catch on." Then she leaned forward on the table, giving Joey a show of her cleavage, her voice going up a register. "But later, when I get back… I'll make it up to you. I'll dress in something you'll, like, totally enjoy far more than this boring suit."
Joey nearly choked on his cereal, heat flooding his face. She smirked, satisfied, and turned toward the door.
When she left, the house fell into a hush broken only by the faint ticking of the kitchen clock. Joey sat there with his cereal, staring into the swirl of soggy flakes. A strange stillness washed over him, pulling him into thoughts he hadn't allowed himself before.
Everything had changed. Just weeks ago, he had been a nobody—shy, anxious, terrified of his own shadow. The kind of kid who would never speak unless spoken to, who lived in dread of embarrassment. Now… he felt alive. Confident. He didn't just speak; he commanded. The shyness that had once ruled him had evaporated, leaving behind something stronger. Someone he liked being.
It wasn't just the people around him that his power had changed. It had changed him too.
A sharp knock jolted him out of his reverie.
He froze, spoon hovering in midair. At this hour? Slowly, he pushed back from the table and padded to the door, his pulse quickening.
When he opened it, Elorae stood there. Her pale eyes were tight with urgency, her long hair disheveled, as if she'd had the same kind of night Joey had enjoyed. Beside her was a man—tall, broad-shouldered, unfairly handsome, the kind of man who looked like he belonged on a movie screen. Joey blinked. He wasn't the same one she'd been with yesterday.
"I'm sorry to disturb you," Elorae said, her voice low but trembling with conviction. "I promised I'd give you time. Time to think. But things are worse than I feared."
Joey stood there in silence, the morning air curling cool around his bare skin. For a long moment he said nothing, because reality was crashing in hard and fast. This was different. This wasn't about shy smiles in classrooms, or the thrill of seeing someone change under his words. This was bigger. Dangerous. His power had been a gift, an unexpected boon that had changed his life for the better. This woman, this Elorae, could take it all away. Her story of a world being threatened, about the source of his power, meant that what Joey had thought was a gift could mean the end.
And for the first time in his life he realized he had something to lose. Everything to lose.
His throat worked as he **** the words out. "Come in," he said finally, stepping aside.
They crossed the threshold, and the door clicked shut behind them.
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Mansplain
...um, actually...
The day after Joey's eighteenth birthday he discovers that something has changed. He'd been accused of mansplaining before, but now when he does it, women begin to think that he's right! Where did this power come from, and where will it take him? Let's find out! Note: all characters are over eighteen.
Updated on Oct 25, 2025
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