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Chapter 13
by
nasexjay
How does Sarah respond to her current situation?
Chapter 12 - Detained
Sarah's refusal seemed to amuse rather than anger them. The taller guard chuckled again, that dry rustling sound like wind through brittle leaves. “Stubborn,” he murmured, more to himself than to her. He raised a thick eyebrow at his companion who merely nodded in agreement.
“Suit yourself then, little bird,” the shorter one said, stepping forward with surprising agility for such a stocky man. One hand shot out and grasped Sarah’s arm above the elbow, its calloused grip like iron around her slender limb. Before she could protest, he pulled her into a rough hug, effectively pinning her against his chest so that her head tilted back involuntarily at an awkward angle.
The other guard chuckled again, this time with a deeper rumble in his chest as he reached out to unlace the simple leather straps securing Sarah’s pouch around her waist. It hit the dusty ground with a dull thud before being scooped up and unceremoniously tossed into a nearby crate overflowing with mismatched boots and worn saddlebags.
Then came the bindings. They moved with practiced efficiency, those two stoic figures flanking her like guardian wolves circling a trapped deer. Her wrists were bound tightly behind her back with rough leather strips that bit into her flesh despite the guards’ obvious effort to avoid squeezing too hard. It was then she realized they had already untied her tunic – at least, that was what she assumed from the way one of them patted down the fabric beneath her breasts as if making sure it hung correctly, a gesture both unnecessarily intimate and infuriatingly indifferent.
"A shame," the taller guard murmured, glancing over his shoulder at some unseen point behind Sarah. "Fine stock."
"She’s yours for the taking,” the shorter one rasped, nudging her forward with his shoulder as if she were nothing more than a stray goat to be led off for shearing.
Sarah managed a choked indignation, but it was lost against the backdrop of dust and sunbaked stone as they marched her towards the small wooden shack that had loomed so menacingly when she first saw it. The door creaked open with a protesting groan, revealing a cramped interior smelling faintly of stale sweat and drying dung. Sarah shuffled inside, bumping unceremoniously into a rough-hewn stool before being shoved forward onto a floor strewn with straw as brittle and dry as dead leaves. The door slammed shut behind her, leaving her alone in the dust-filled gloom.
The sun climbed high in the sky, bathing the desert village in an oppressive heat that seemed to penetrate even the thick walls of the shack. Sarah huddled on the stool, knees drawn tight to her chest, trying to conserve what little energy she had left from her fruitless attempts to escape her predicament.
Hours crawled by, measured only by the shifting patterns of light filtering through the single grimy window and the relentless rasping of thirst against the back of her throat. She was given no water, no food, just a growing sense of despair that settled like a stone in her stomach. Had she been robbed not just of her possessions but also of any right to decency?
By the time the first hint of orange bled across the horizon, signaling the beginning of the desert twilight, Sarah had long since resigned herself to her fate. She was hungry enough to eat almost anything – even the stale straw that littered the floor of her prison.
The door creaked open once more, spilling a flood of light and sound into the small space. Sarah’s eyes stung with unshed tears, blurring the figures standing before her.
One she recognized as the shorter guard; his face was shadowed by the setting sun, making it difficult to read his expression. The taller one, however, stood behind him, holding aloft a rough-hewn lantern that cast dancing shadows across their weathered faces.
“Come,” he commanded gruffly, offering her a hand to help her rise. Sarah accepted it gratefully, allowing herself to be pulled upright. They led her out of the shack and into the heart of the village square where she was promptly guided towards a crude wooden platform carved with simple geometric patterns. It stood in the center of the plaza, dwarfed only by the towering ancient fig tree that dominated one side of the open space.
Two sturdy planks of wood formed a rough cross shape protruding from the platform, their edges polished smooth by years of hands pressed against them. Sarah was ushered towards these planks with an efficiency born of repetition, and guided onto her knees before they were roughly yanked apart – forcing her to bend forward until her head and wrists were nestled comfortably within the rectangular openings created by the diverging wood.
The guards stood back, their hands resting lightly on the staffs that leaned against their shoulders like silent sentries.
“Behold!” The shorter guard called out, his voice booming across the square despite its gruffness. A murmur rippled through a small gathering of villagers who were already starting to drift towards her platform – drawn from the surrounding stalls and workshops by the familiar chime of village bells announcing an unexpected public spectacle.
Sarah’s gaze swept over them – women with faces weathered like cracked clay pots, their dark eyes watchful and curious behind intricately woven head scarves; children clinging to skirts or standing wide-eyed on tiptoe, their mouths open in silent gasps of surprise; men leaning against each other, arms crossed, brows furrowed as they surveyed her with a mixture of amusement and disapproval.
“It appears that we have a visitor who forgot to remember her manners!” The taller guard proclaimed, drawing out the words for emphasis while he leaned casually against his staff.
He gestured towards her with a sweep of his free hand. “She owes a debt,” he announced, his voice laced with an amusement that grated on Sarah’s frayed nerves, "a debt to Maeva and her husband."
The murmurings grew louder. Sarah strained to hear the individual fragments – something about hospitality, about refusing payment, about stubbornness and pride - but it was all a jumbled chorus of disapproval against a backdrop of hot wind whipping through the square.
"By custom," the taller guard continued, stepping closer to her so that his shadow fell over her like a dark cloak, "the wronged party decides how long such debts shall be settled.” He paused for dramatic effect, letting the silence stretch taut across the gathering crowd before finally announcing in a booming voice that left Sarah feeling exposed and fragile as a young bird caught in a spider’s web: “Maeva and her husband have spoken. The settlement will continue until their demands are met.”
A chorus of agreement rose from the gathered villagers, punctuated by the occasional sharp clap or grunt of approval. Sarah's heart sank. It seemed she wouldn't be leaving this dusty town anytime soon – not until Maeva decided that her debt was fully paid.
And she had a gnawing feeling, deep in her belly like a scorpion stinging its prey, that those demands would likely be quite specific.
What is Sarah's punishment?
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The Pilgrimage
of a A Holy Knight in Training
Sarah has trained for years within the temple, preparing to become a Holy Knight. Now she faces her final trial: a pilgrimage to the Holy City. As she stands on the precipice of becoming a fully recognized Holy Knight, you will join her journey – choosing her path shaping her destiny with every decision you make. It is up to you to decide whether she makes the journey or betrays her oaths and beliefs along the way.
Updated on Jul 31, 2025
by nasexjay
Created on Jul 30, 2025
by nasexjay
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