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Chapter 29
by crimsonbeans
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Beneath the surface
The evening had begun to wind down, the buzz of wine, laughter, and lively exchanges slowly giving way to a gentle lull. Jack, seated comfortably in a corner of his living room, found himself observing the scene with a sense of quiet satisfaction. Leah, Nikki, and Rachel had all grown more relaxed, lounging lazily in their spots, the earlier tension between them almost completely dissolved. The evening's casual intimacy felt surreal—three beautiful, half-dressed, unguarded women happily hanging around his apartment. Like something out of a dream.
Jack’s eyes roamed the room as his gaze caught on Leah’s sundress, which had ridden up her thigh, revealing a black cotton thong that disappeared enticingly between her smooth, round buttocks. Leah noticed his glance and didn’t seem to mind, simply offering him a playful smile as she shifted, almost teasingly. Across from her, Nikki was draped lazily over the arm of the couch, her legs slightly parted, apparently oblivious to Jack's unobstructed view of her crotch—a single piece of fabric tightly stretched over the soft outlines of her pussy, and a tiny tuft of hair peeking out at the top. Even Rachel had shamelessly allowed her blouse to fall open a little too far, the lace of her bra visibly matching the bottom part of her lingerie set.
As Jack’s excitement slumbered in his own briefs, much to his own frustration, his mind began to drift. However tantalizing the scene in front of him was, something kept nagging at him. It felt like he was losing focus. The paranoid whisper in the back of his head told him it was all too easy. These women, his increasing influence over them, everything just falling into place—it felt too perfect. And if things were too perfect, there had to be a catch. The thought of the Zhou sisters—dangerous, unpredictable—crossed his mind. Or maybe Samuel, who had always been a wildcard, lurking in the background like a ticking time bomb. It was only a matter of time before one of them would appear and ruin this fun. He needed to do something, he had already achieved what he needed from the evening with Leah and Nikki pledging to help him at Nuvola Palace—and now he was just sitting around, wasting time.
But he managed to shake off the thought, for now, forcing himself back to the moment. After all, weren't moments like these the whole point of what he was working for? He faintly smiled to himself, just as Leah was standing up, her movement ****.
“Well, I hate to be the first one to say it, but I should probably head out,” she announced, stretching her arms above her head and giving Jack one last, teasing glimpse as her dress shifted.
Jack stood up, offering her a warm smile as he led her to the door. Leah glanced back at the other two, then at Jack, a flicker of something—uncertainty, perhaps—crossing her face. Her otherwise playful attitude wavered for a second, but before Jack could comment, she gave him a kiss on the cheek, her lips lingering just a little longer than necessary.
“Thanks for tonight,” she whispered softly. “Send me the details about your project. I’m in.”
Jack nodded, his eyes searching hers for a moment as she turned and left, the faintest shadow of doubt still lingering in her expression. He frowned slightly, but let it go. We're all just tired, he thought, convincing himself that the flicker of uncertainty wasn’t anything to worry about.
When Jack returned to the living room, Nikki and Rachel were sitting closer than before, laughing together over a shared story. There was something intimate about their posture, a kind of bonding that had happened over the course of the evening. Rachel's hand was on Nikki's leg as they giggled. Nikki's edge had softened, her frozen exterior melting as the night wore on. She had reconnected with Rachel in a way neither of them anticipated—****, even emotional, in contrast to her usual guarded self.
“I think I’m going to get some rest too,” Nikki said eventually, standing up. “It’s been a nice evening. I'm... glad Rachel was here.” Her smile was genuine as she glanced between Jack and Rachel, but Jack didn’t miss the quiet gratitude in her eyes as she gave him a soft, almost lovely look.
“Goodnight, Veronica,” Rachel said, offering her friend a warm smile. “It was great hanging out like this.”
“It was,” Nikki replied, her voice softer than usual. When she turned to Jack, something unspoken passed between them. The dynamic of agreed control they shared was still there, simmering beneath the surface, but for now, it was wrapped in something warmer, more human. “See you tomorrow, Jack.” She gave him one last smile before retreating to the spare room, the door clicking shut behind her.
Now it was just Jack and Rachel.
Jack was wondering if he could still tweak the girls' playlists tonight after Rachel would leave, when he faintly registered the moment inexplicably being a little charged. Rachel’s eyes were on him, her usual confidence laced with something else—something more intimate. She slowly stood and moved toward him, her movements deliberate, sensual, as if she were testing the boundaries between them.
“You’re pretty incredible, you know,” Rachel teased, her voice low. “I mean, how do manage to get three smoking hot, half-naked women hanging out in your apartment all night, and also keep your cool about it?” Her tone was light, but the look in her eyes was far more serious. She was testing him—gauging his reaction, pushing to see what he would say.
Jack chuckled, his tipsy mind still half-focused on the other things swirling around in his brain. “It’s not easy, believe me, but I like to think I'm good under pressure,” he said, though even as the words left his mouth, he found himself mentally elsewhere. The Zhou sisters. Samuel. Nuvola Palace. Greg. A hundred different things competing for his attention. He needed to continue preparing a trap, lay the groundwork for the next steps in his plan.
Rachel, meanwhile, was moving closer, her eyes searching his face. “I shouldn’t feel jealous, should I,” she said, her voice a little softer now. “I mean, as your friend, I don’t have any right to. But I kind of have been.” Her voice wavered on the last phrase, and Jack could see some uncertainty in her eyes—raw, exposed.
Jack, still half-listening, tried to appease her. He had gotten so used to their platonic relationship, playing the supportive friend, that he had stopped waiting for her to notice him. Ironically, now, he barely noticed her. “Rachel, you don’t need to be jealous. You’ve always been important to me,” he offered generically.
But Rachel wasn’t interested in his platitudes. She wanted more. She stepped closer, her voice more insistent. “I know that... I’ve been thinking about you and me. How I’ve taken our friendship for granted in the past.” She paused, her eyes locking with his. “But lately, I’ve been realizing how special it is.”
Jack paused, genuinely wanting to comfort her, thinking she might leave him to his work if he'd just appease her doubts a little. As Rachel spoke, his brain was still dissecting audio frequencies, plotting, calculating. He nodded at her words, entirely oblivious to the non-platonic signals Rachel was sending. “Of course, Rach. You—”
Rachel’s eyes narrowed, a flicker of frustration passing over her features. Then, suddenly, without warning, Rachel leaned in and kissed him, cutting him off mid-sentence.
It took Jack a moment to realize what was happening, scrambling to catch up with the reality of the situation. But then, he felt her warmth, the softness of her lips, and something clicked. Before he knew it, he was kissing her back, the weight of everything else suddenly falling away. His hand instinctively moved to her waist as the tension between them finally snapped, releasing everything they had been holding back.
Rachel’s hands cupped his jaw, her breath hot against his skin as the kiss lingered, her earlier possessiveness now fully on display. She wasn’t going to let him ignore her, not tonight. And Jack, realizing what he had been missing, gave in completely. In that moment, work, threats, and everything else faded into the background. There was only Rachel, her lips on his, and the fire that had explosively ignited between them, burning too brightly to be ignored.
He slightly parted his lips as the kiss deepened, the tip of his tongue darting out to touch hers, while his hands on her waist pulled her body closer until there was no space between them. Forgetting his earlier distractions, Jack relished the warmth of her breath and the soft curves of her barely-dressed body against his. A wave of desire surged through him, further fueled by all the tantalizing sights he'd seen that evening. He was all too aware of the way her firm chest pressed against his, the way her hands had started to explore his shirtless back, passionately pulling him further into their embrace.
Then, finally, they pulled apart, both of them breathless, staring at each other with wide, disbelieving eyes.
“Wow,” Rachel whispered, her cheeks flushed, her body still pressed against his.
Jack swallowed, his heart pounding in his chest. “Yeah,” he breathed, his voice husky. “Wow.”
For a moment, Jack hesitated, his mind flashing briefly to the other women in his life—the delicate game he was playing, the control he had painstakingly maintained so far, and the risks of letting go in the moment. But as Rachel continued, her lips tracing along his jawline, trailing soft, heated kisses down his neck, his restraint faltered.
“Rachel…” he murmured, his voice low, but he didn’t stop her. Instead, his hands found the buttons of her blouse, slowly removing it as he backed her toward his bedroom door. He threw the blouse in the general direction of the couch, and reached around her to open the door to his room. Rachel’s breathing quickened, her hands running over the strained front of his pants, her fingers sending sparks of electricity with every move.
Jack pushed the door to his room open with a soft thud, and in a fluid movement, pulled Rachel inside. The shift in space—the quiet intimacy of the bedroom, the dim lighting from the doorway casting soft shadows over them—changed the atmosphere. It felt more real now, more intense, as they found themselves realizing what was about to happen.
Rachel was quick to respond, pushing Jack back toward the bed with a playful, teasing smile on her lips. “You’ve been so distracted tonight,” she whispered, her voice laced with both vulnerability and desire, as she reached around her back to unhook her bra. “But now, you’re all mine.” She let the lacy piece of lingerie fall to the floor as her generous, perfectly round breasts came into full view.
Jack was momentarily stunned, staring as he took a mental picture of the boobs he had wanted to get his eyes on since college, trying to focus on as many details as he could under the soft, indirect lighting. He was mesmerized by the sudden, unmistakable sparks between him and his best friend, the way his body reacted to her touch, her words. He let himself be guided backwards, falling onto the bed as Rachel followed, straddling him without hesitation. The intensity in her eyes, that earlier possessiveness he’d noticed... she wasn’t just testing him anymore; she was claiming him.
Her hands slid down his stomach and started undoing his belt, unzipping his pants. Jack’s breath caught in his throat as she leaned forward to kiss him again, her lips hot and demanding. He could feel the hunger in her movements, the way her body shifted against his. The friction of her skin against his was intoxicating, her hard nipples pressing insistently into his chest. Jack’s hands roamed her body from her shoulders, past her waist, to her hips, fingers toying with the flimsy elastic that held her last remaining piece of clothing in place.
The tension between them was thick, the air around them charged with an electricity that neither of them could ignore any longer.
“I’ve been thinking about this for some time now,” Rachel confessed breathlessly, her hands exploring his body as she moved further down, planting warm, wet kisses along the way. “And I don’t want to wait any longer,” she said, as her fingers hooked behind the waistbands of both his pants and his boxers, and she smoothly pulled them right off his legs, her eyes glued to his dick as it sprung up. She let out an involuntary gasp, briefly dazed by the potent sight of his now rock-hard penis.
Taking back the initiative, Jack sat up and took hold of her, gently but firmly guiding her sideways onto the bed next to him, before climbing on top and pinning her down on her back. Their positions now reversed, he mirrored her earlier choreography as his lips found her neck, trailing hot, open-mouthed kisses along her skin. He planted kisses down past her breasts, and, after a brief detour around one of her pointy nipples, her belly button, her pelvic area, and finally a lingering kiss on her lace-covered vulva. Rachel let out a soft moan, her head tilting back as she let herself get lost in the sensation of his mouth, his hands, his attention.
Time seemed to slow as they moved together, the intensity building with every kiss, every touch. Jack’s mind was now consumed entirely by Rachel, her body, his burning desire. His usual control, the careful manipulation of the women in his life, was slipping, and he found himself letting go in a way that he hadn’t anticipated.
Rachel’s breath hitched as Jack’s hands slid lower, fingers tracing the curve of her waist before gripping the waistband of the last lacy barrier between his kisses and her second pair of lips. She lifted her hips off the bed to help him, and he didn't waste any time discarding her panties. There she was, lying on her back on his bed, fully naked, gazing up at him expectantly with an eager, horny look in her eyes. Jack took in the sight for a short moment—a sight he had previously **** himself to stop dreaming about, now reality—before diving in. He grabbed her ankle, planting kisses down her calf, then her inner thigh.
He put his hands on both her knees to spread her thighs and positioned himself between her legs, confidently moving his lips to her pussy. Rachel arched her back and let out a moan as his tongue flicked in between her labia, tasting the lightly salty remnants of her work day mixed with the earthily sweet flavor of her growing excitement. The bedroom was filled with the sounds of their heavy breathing, soft moans, and the rustling of fabric as Jack consumed her with mixture of urgency and deliberate slowness, both savoring the moment and pushing it forward.
Finally, Rachel lost her patience, gently pulling Jack back up over her by his head. “Please... I need to feel you... inside,” she softly begged, out of breath. They suddenly were skin to skin, the weight of the moment settling over them as the bottom of Jack's erection pressed against Rachel's vulva, the warmth of her bare skin igniting something deep within him. She was beautiful—her hair falling messily around her face, her lips swollen from kissing and excitement, her eyes filled with a desire that mirrored his own.
Jack held himself over her with one hand as his other gripped her thigh, guiding her open as she spread for him, Rachel biting her lip in anticipation. As the tip of his cock pressed against her entrance, she let out a soft moan, her fingers tangling in his hair as pulled him down to kiss him again. Then, their movements synchronized, her hips thrust upwards as he thrust himself inside her. Fireworks exploded in Jack's mind as he finally felt his shaft getting fully enveloped by Rachel's notably tight, warm vagina.
He broke off the kiss with her for a short moment, to look her in the eyes, while he motionlessly remained deep inside her. Rachel's lips parted slightly as she looked at him with burning passion, adoration, desire. As though giving a nonverbal sign for him to continue, she took one of his hands and guided it to her breast. Jack squeezed eagerly, taking the hint, and started slowly moving his hips.
Every thought of work, of control, of the women in his life, faded completely as Jack gave in, his hands roaming freely over Rachel’s body, pulling her closer, entering deeper, their hips bucking in synchrony as they lost themselves in each other. There was only Rachel, her softness, her warmth, and the overwhelming desire that consumed them both.
Jack completely lost his sense of time, it could have been a minute, or an hour, of him fucking her energetically, both her knees now pushed up towards her shoulders, her wet cunt making soft, soppy noises with every thrust. Eventually, Rachel pushed him back with her legs, and guided him to flip over again. He had barely laid down as she mounted him, a crazed, hungry look in her eyes. Straddling him, her juices dripping onto his pubes, she grabbed his dick to guide it into her. Jack gazed at her magnificent boobs, nipples standing at attention, as Rachel arched her back and let out a heartfelt moan, lowering herself onto his dick.
Her movement built slowly, up and down, tits gently swaying along, until it became an intense rhythm that left them both breathless. Every inch of their bodies seemed to hum with a shared anticipation, a physical tension coiling tighter and tighter until it could no longer be contained. Jack’s grip on Rachel’s hips tightened as her movements became more ****, more frenzied, driven by the primal need for release.
Rachel’s body arched again above him, her back curving as her breath caught in her throat. She let out a soft cry, the sound raw and unfiltered, as the pleasure overtook her. Her body suddenly shuddered as the waves of climax hit. Jack felt her vagina's muscles tighten around his fully-inserted shaft, then pulsating, practically milking him. He watched her face, her parted lips and closed eyes, her expression of deep pleasure, her femininity laid completely bare in that fleeting moment.
It was enough to push him over the edge too. Jack’s own release surged through him, and he groaned deeply, his hands holding Rachel close as his entire body tensed. The world around them seemed to blur, shrinking until there was nothing left but the sensation of their bodies entwined. The intensity of it left him dizzy, his mind momentarily blanking out, lost in the overwhelming wave of pleasure.
For a brief, blissful moment, nothing else existed.
But as the wave began to recede, Jack's mind—always working, always calculating—slowly reasserted itself. His breathing slowed, his heart rate settling as he gradually came back to himself. Rachel had collapsed onto his chest, her body still trembling slightly, her breathing rapid and uneven. She nestled into him, burying her face into his neck, her skin warm and slick with sweat.
Jack stared up at the ceiling, the weight of her body against his oddly comforting but also grounding him back in reality. Though physically sated, his mind began to flicker with thoughts again. First, he wondered if Rachel was on birth control. Then, little by little, came back the thoughts of trapping the Zhou sisters, Samuel, the tweaks he wanted to make to the playlists—until he was mentally sifting through his next moves again.
He glanced at the bedside clock. He could still get up after Rachel left, return to his desk, and map out what more needed to be done before his time at the Nuvola Palace began... but he snapped back to the here and now as Rachel stirred on top of him.
His softening penis finally pulled out of her as she rolled onto her side, her arm draped over his chest, demurely glancing up at him once before resting her head just below his shoulder. Her breath was warm and steady now, but he could feel some uncertainty radiating from her in the quiet afterglow. Her fingers lightly traced circles on his skin, and after a few moments of silence, she hesitated before speaking.
“Jack… is it okay if I stay here tonight?” Her voice was soft, almost fragile, as though she wasn’t entirely sure how he’d react. She didn’t lift her head to meet his eyes, and Jack could feel the vulnerability in her request. She had put herself out there tonight, not just physically but emotionally, and now she was waiting for his response, hoping for some sign of reassurance.
Jack’s first instinct was to politely decline. He had things to do—plans to map out, projects to advance. Letting Rachel stay would blur lines even more, would make things messier, and he was already fighting to keep his control intact. Besides, he'd been counting on her leaving, on the chance to return to his solitary work routine, undisturbed by the complexities of all the newly evolved dynamics.
But as he opened his mouth to answer, he saw the way she curled into him, her bare skin radiating heat against his. The side of herself she’d shown tonight, her admission of jealousy, her boldness in making the first move... it had been different from what he’d expected, different from the careful progress he’d orchestrated with the others. She wasn’t just reacting to his subliminals—this was something deeper, something personal.
For the first time in a while, Jack felt something tug at him that wasn’t just part of his grand scheme. It was the echo of genuine affection, a faint reminder that Rachel wasn’t simply another piece in his game, but someone who had trusted him, confided in him, and now wanted to be with him in a way that went beyond friendship.
He sighed inwardly, feeling the plans for the evening slip conclusively from his grasp. “Yeah,” he finally said, his voice softer than he intended. “You can stay.”
Rachel let out a small, relieved sigh and snuggled closer to him, her body relaxing against his. Jack felt a twinge of regret—not for agreeing to let her stay, but for the work he was setting aside, the forward motion he was putting on hold, the careful schemes he was jeopardizing by letting her in so deeply. But for now, with Rachel’s steady breathing lulling him into a sense of temporary peace, he allowed himself relax too.
Maybe, just for tonight, he could let go of the larger game, let her think she had this part of him. Tomorrow, he promised himself, the pieces would fall back into place. He would find a way to rearrange everything.
He always did.
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Subliminal Adjustments
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This story revolves around Jack Dover, an ambitious man who stumbles upon a subliminal messaging device, which allows him to subtly influence the minds of those who listen to its output. What starts as a well-intentioned experiment to "help" his best friend, Rachel, soon spirals into a manipulative scheme targeting other women around him. Work in progress. We're starting slow, but I promise our descent into depravity will go deep. :)
Updated on Oct 1, 2024
by crimsonbeans
Created on Sep 10, 2024
by crimsonbeans
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