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Chapter 8 by ThorMcBalbo ThorMcBalbo

Who's at the door?

Author's side note

I wanted to put out the first actual naughty scene before writing this to give you something consistent to read before sharing some tough with you guys and I did (https://chyoa.com/chapter/Breakfast.876365).

First of all, I'd like you to comment to help me fix grammar mistakes, I'm not a native & sometimes the phrase construction is not perfect, I know and I'll try to get better.

Seconds, I've put the bare minimum tags cause I'd like add them as the story proceed & are actually in the story & not only planned for the future. As you already figured out, the story will revolve mostly around Kelly, slut herself around the party for the joy of the people attending and mostly with Chuck oblivious about it but, there will be some space for Chuck too. He will be mostly pushed around by the events & end up, humiliated, dominated, cucked, cheated on, "****" fucked, sissyfied, a combination of those or all of them

The Chapter "Getting Dressed" is where the story start to branch and is where thing start to get more "complex" and I want to know what would you like to read first & how you would like me to move foward.

The Idea is to procede with all the branches together, I made some Tyrone story line, now I will introduce the other Kelly till she gets naughty, then stop and move to Chuck's boss etc... etc... every person will have a role to play.

Every comment will be important to me, I just hope that you will not write just "you suck!" but share, what you really think, with me. The destination is set but I can make a few stops on the road with you, so we can all enjoy the travel together.

P.s. Did you like the visuals? should I keep going with them?

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