Chapter 2 by Progenitor
Add in the comments below if you want to see a small emergency team dispatched or the reconnaissance team recalled to check it out!
Author's Notes on Comments and Story Progression
This story will be directly effected by your comments. I really like reader/writer interaction and I believe the comments will help create a better story that everyone enjoys. Think of yourselves more as the survivors/colonists/leadership in the story when you make decisions; I already know how our creature behaves and what it will do next. The more you work to keep the colonists safe (spoiler, it won't work), the more effort I'll put into the writing.
If you needlessly put them in danger with comments like "oh dude fuck her bhole yo knock dat beyotch up" then my response won't be as well written as if your comment is "Dude, have them seal the doors with welders and fall back to (random location)". These are just examples, of course.
Also, don't be shy about making suggestions that aren't outlined as options at the bottom of the chapter! I' flexible and know a general direction for the story, so the more you change it up the more interesting it becomes for everyone!
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In Space, Everyone Will See You Breed
The space colony at LV-1412 has encountered a derelict alien vessel containing a highly intelligent, extremely dangerous parasitic organism that uses female hosts to procreate its species. Use comments to help decide the course of the story and decide the ultimate fate of the colonists at the mercy of their alien aggressors!
Updated on Jan 18, 2021
by Progenitor
Created on Feb 21, 2018
by Progenitor
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