Chapter 88
by
menoetes
The end of this branch anyway, thanks for reading!
Afterword, credits and musings
Wow, it’s done. My first ever completed story on Chyoa.
It’s 109,631 words long (that’s 60 words more than The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain and that’s the ONLY comparison I’m going to make to that classic) filled with countless spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, filthy language, weird story choices and rookie mistakes. Oh and let's not forget the over-the-top silly smut.
It has been a very fun story to write.
It was one of the first erotic stories I ever wrote in homage to “The Seige” by XXXecil over on Literotica. A big thank you to him for the inspiration and for giving me permission to write this.
It reads like progression chart of me learning to write. It started out back in 2007 with short, fairly base chapters but kinda grew into something I came to love writing again. I'm over the moon with the happy reception the ending recieved, I was nervous about that never having written one before.
A huge thank you to you, my dear readers. You have all given me great feedback, pointed out my mistakes, given me inspiration when I was bogged down and lots of encouragement with I really value. You are all a lot of fun to interact with and I probably wouldn't have finished it without you, You have all made my return to writing feel very rewarding.
So... what's next?
Well I've always got a few new story ideas bouncing around my empty noggin as well as few older stories I could dust off and try to finish.
My threads in Faeophobia (another XXXecil spin-off but not my own) and Wanted: Prince for Wildly Implausible Fuckfest will still get additions as they are fun and I enjoy a lot of the characters in them.
I've been considering unearthing my old thread in 2869: Lust in Space because I like the space opera feel of it. Plus it's just more mind-control, transformation/bimbofication, **** shtick which is where my strengths generally lie and is easy for me to write.
...but for my regular Saturday posting schedule maybe something new? Here's a couple of new story ideas that have been maturing in my sick and twisted mind like moldy cheeses:
- Bimbo Bakery: An Anthology Series. A fancy new bakery has opened in the Midwestern college town of New Billington, selling sweet confections with a spicy secret ingredient. What is it about these tasty treats that is turning women in smoking hot, brainless, eager to please Bimbos **** to kneel down for the strong, hard men in their lives? When did so many of the men grow so big, muscle-bound and thick membered? A series of sizzling short stories about the strange events surrounding this new pâtisserie and it's charming mysterious owner.
Each chapter will be it's own self contained story probably across 3 posts as it'll be good practice at the three act structure writing. I've been rolling this idea around for months now and is inspired by serialized stories I read on Literotica and Kindle.
- Alec in Wonderland: A reverse gender harem retelling. Alec thought his family trip to England was going to be a dull, monotonous waste of his summer. He was correct, right up until he gets lost looking for the bathroom on a guided tour of Lewis Carroll's Christ Church home and stumbles into a strange world right out of the story books. Now Alec will need to enlist the help of grinning Cheshire cat girls, pedantic white bunny chicks, florid flower ladies, Tweedle Dumb bimbos, hookah puffing butterfly babes and haughty playing-card Queens to find his way home... if he can even return.
Plenty of possible material to work with there and the absurdist nature of Wonderland is really attractive to me. This one would attempt to be one of my lighter, comical sexy romps. I can see it being a lot of fun.
Anyway, let me know what you think and thanks again for reading my silly smutty story! I couldn't have done it without your support.
Cheers,
Menoetes
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The women in your town are changing, becoming busty hot and horny. But what is happening to the men?
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