Chapter 47
by
bla12
What does May ask for?
A favor for a member
The day, which had promised to be a sanctuary, turned into a long and agonizing countdown. Each passing hour was a reminder of the accumulating debt. Magi didn't rest. She paced around her small apartment, feeling the anxiety climb up her throat like a poisonous vine. The words resonated in her head.
At 8:45 PM, she found herself standing in front of the aquarium, which at that hour looked like a dark, sleeping monster. She wore nothing but a simple, loose-fitting dress and flip-flops, her daily armor that now felt as fragile as paper. With a knot in her stomach, she went around the building to the discreet staff back door, which was always unlocked for them after hours.
The walk through the deserted corridors was a funeral march. The silence was absolute, broken only by the distant hum of the filters and the pounding of her own heart, which hammered in her ears. When she arrived at May's office, the door was ajar. She pushed it gently.
May was not behind the desk. She was standing by the tropical fish tank, with a glass of red wine in her hand. She was impeccably dressed, as if she had just arrived from a business dinner. Her gaze slid from the lit-up tank to Magi, scanning her from head to toe with a calculated slowness.
"Punctual. I like that. Discipline is the foundation of everything," she said, her voice a silky whisper that cut through the silence. She took a sip of her wine. "Did you enjoy your day off, Magi? I hope you've recharged. You're going to need it."
Magi simply nodded, unable to find the words. Fear dried her mouth.
May placed the glass on the desk and approached her. Not with a threat, but with the absolute certainty of someone who controls every variable.
"The favor is simple. A founding partner has requested a private dinner. Everything is organized. A suite at the Grand Bay. A car is waiting for you outside." Her gaze was impenetrable. "In the suite, you will find everything you need. The clothes you must wear are already there. Consider your current outfit… inadequate for the evening."
Magi felt a new chill. The clothes. Of course. May controlled every last detail.
"May, please…" she managed to articulate, her voice broken.
"Please what, Magi?" May raised an eyebrow. "You asked for a day. I gave it to you. Now it's your turn to deliver. It's a transaction." She turned and took a thick paper envelope from the desk. It didn't contain a key, but a magnetic card. "The suite is Penthouse 4. Dinner is at 10:00 PM. Don't be late. And remember, you represent me. Don't disappoint me."
Magi took the cold, plastic card. She nodded slowly, a solitary tear tracing a path down her cheek. She turned on her heels and left the office, the weight of the "everything you need" and the "clothes you must wear" crushing her more than any direct threat.
What happens when you arrive at the hotel?
Under the Surface
Chronicle of a Humiliation
Magi is a solitary and reserved young woman who prefers the company of books to people's company. With her untamable black hair, faint freckles, and loose-fitting clothes, she projects an image of practicality and comfort. Her large green eyes, though curious, avoid eye contact, revealing her introverted nature. Despite her serene appearance, a deep disquiet haunts her, anticipating an imminent and inevitable change that threatens to shatter the fragile balance of her quiet life.
Updated on Jun 8, 2026
by bla12
Created on Aug 31, 2025
by bla12
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