Chapters tagged twins

Modest Skirt → Mature Dress by Ai-R

Chapter 16

Let's see... I think that, for a pair(?) of Queens, the twins seem kind of... childish? Like, they're still dressed like Princesses instead of 'Queens' so I want to try and change that. I replace 'Modest Skirt' with '_**Mature Dress.**_' The corridor races away behind the twins,...

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Braided Hair → Royal Ponytail by Ai-R

Chapter 17

Next, let's try changing up the hairstyle. The braids are neat, but kind of subtle, so what if I have them pull their hair up? And throw in another adjective to reinforce the other changes so... 'Braided Hair' becomes '_**Royal Ponytail**_' and... The corridor bends a bit and th...

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Plate Armor → Black Leather Dress by Ai-R

Chapter 17

I suppose it could use some clarity - and the armor's kind of in the way of that at the moment so... Let's exchange 'Plate Armor' for '**Black Leather Dress**.' The corridor broadens and is lit a rich warm golden hue as candles, lamps, and chandeliers dot themselves all over the...

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