Chapters tagged kiss

Jake is nervous ... but no one is watching by zankoo

Chapter 51

He didn't realize that his eyes were shifting about, or that his head was turning side to side. But Abbie called him out on it. "I'm right here, Jake." "What?" he said, looking back at her. "You keep looking around. Just focus on me." "I do?" "Yeah." He swallowed and focuse...

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yes, Jake wants to see by zankoo

Chapter 52

Jake shrugged. "Sure, if you want to show me." "Sure?" Abbie asked, testing him. Jake laughed. "Well ... it's not like I've never seen you before." Abbie thought about it and then changed her tone. "If you don't want to see it, I don't have to show it to you." Jake looked her...

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they reach the lobby by zankoo

Chapter 53

Jake intentionally stayed a few paces back -- it gave him a better view of Abbie. She had a hand extended toward him, and he knew he should catch up, take her hand, and walk into the hotel with her. But he liked watching her move. He liked watching her legs and the way her dress...

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Jake is nervous ... and thinks someone may be watching by zankoo

Chapter 51

He didn't realize that his eyes were shifting about, or that his head was turning side to side. But Abbie called him out on it. "I'm right here, Jake." "What?" he said, looking back at her. "You keep looking around. Just focus on me." "I do?" "Yeah." He swallowed and focuse...

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the path to the left, getting further from the building by zankoo

Chapter 48

Jake glanced around, trying to assess where each of the path options might go. The fact was, he didn't know anything about the sprawling grounds of the hotel, so it was going to be a random choice no matter what. "This way." With a confident tilt of his head, Jake pointed to the...

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Jake works on Abbie's upper body by zankoo

Chapter 25

Jake reluctantly pulled the sides of her bikini bottom back up again, restoring Abbie to a state of acceptable public attire. The pool deck was beginning to fill a bit. It wasn't chaotic or overwhelming, but with more guests arriving, Jake considered the reality that he and Abbie...

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Rehearsal: Abbie's first stage kiss by zankoo

Chapter 4

Abbie had been in rehearsals for the play for about a week, and had been enjoying it immensely. The theater community was wonderful, very supportive, welcoming, and encouraging. Abbie, who hadn't had a lot of experience in plays, initially felt like she might be in over her head....

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describing the scene by zankoo

Chapter 5

Greg moved to the center of the stage, motioning for Abbie and Nick to join him. "Let's talk about the emotional journey of this kiss," he said, his hands moving expressively as he spoke. "This isn't just any kiss -- it's the culmination of fourteen scenes of teasing and missed...

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staging the first physical contact by zankoo

Chapter 6

Greg positioned himself at the edge of the stage, clipboard in hand. "Alright, let's start with your initial positions. Nick, you'll be standing here," he said, marking an X with his foot. "And Abbie, you'll be about three feet away, over here." They took their positions, script...

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