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Chapter 4
by VixxTheLover
You want to add something, at least one more sex scene is needed.
You wonder what kind of screen creation power you have.
It turns out you have a lot, all you have to do is visualize the actors where you would like them to be it seems.
As you watch the film move along, as the husband realizes his wife fucked the crewman, and as tensions rise.
Billy Zane doesn’t put it together like in the movie. After her husband is found, he is not at full strength and Kelly Brook nurses him back to health gently.
But you show her sexual affair with the crewman doesn’t end, it barely slows down. After what happened on the beach, Kelly Brook goes back to fucking the young crewman.
You show a few quick scenes, maybe a minute each, of Kelly Brook fucking the crewman on other parts of the island as her husband rests. You see a beautiful doggy style scene, one where she fucks the crewman hard cowgirl style, and another where the crewman eats out her pussy as her husband sleeps beside her.
Her husband still being weak tends to sleep hard through the night, and she and her lover become more and more bold. You show a quick scene where the crewman is kneeling beside her. She is lying right beside her husband with her lover’s dick in her mouth.
The crewman pumps his hips gently as he fucks her mouth, and Kelly Brook appears to enjoy the cock in her mouth quite a lot.
In the moonlight you show her take the crew man’s cock out of her mouth and smile, then give the tip of his cock a gentle kiss before putting it back into her mouth.
You show the crewman stiffen up and then quietly cum into her mouth, spasming as she takes his cum in her mouth without hesitation. Her husband begins to stir, and the crewman slips away quietly, leaving Kelly Brook with a mouth full of cum. She turns to look at her husband, who is waking up, and swallows, smiling as she looks at him.
Billy Zane goes for a kiss and she returns it, having just swallowed cum, and you show their reactions. A reaction of disgust for the husband, and a devious smile for the wife.
Billy Zane finds out in your version when he wakes up deep into the night and finds his wife isn’t beside him, only her clothing, her white bikini and wrap are laying there where she slept.
The crewman is not camped far away in another makeshift tent, and as Billy Zane slowly approaches, he starts to hear a familiar sucking sound, and her light moans. And he looks and sees that she is laying down with her head between the crewman’s legs, her head bobbing up and down slowly on his cock.
Zane is shocked, speechless. She pulls up and smiles at the crewman and blows him a kiss, and you give the viewers a slow motion view of her putting his cock back into her mouth, slowly working her tongue around the tip, kissing it lovingly.
He hears her speak in a hushed tone, in her beautiful British accent. “Hurry up and cum, you need to finish before my husband wakes up.”
You have the crewman respond, less quietly, “You didn’t make me hurry last night, or the night before. You sucked my big cock till I came in your mouth, and then you sucked me till I was hard again. Or the night before, or many nights before that…mama likes her midnight snack.”
“Please, not tonight, he is getting stronger. You need to cum soon.” She replies softly, before speeding her pace.
“Tell me how much bigger my cock is than your weakling husband baby, tell me and I will give you my cum.”
She stops and looks at him, “I won’t say it, you know...you know it is that way baby,” before going back to sucking his cock.
“No, you cheating whore I want to hear you say it,” he replies harshly but quietly.
“I want to hear you say it, or you will not taste my cum tonight, tell how much bigger my cock is. Tell me how much better my long cock is baby...” he is whispering louder now. “Tell me how much you need the taste of my cum, how much better my cum tastes than your weakling husband’s.”
She relents, “your cock is huge, much bigger than my husband’s. I love this big fat cock.” Kelly Brook says while his cock rests against her face. “And I love the taste of your cum, I want it, every day. I need it every day, I am going to suck it out of your balls every day my lover.”
“When we are rescued I will stay with you and taste this cock for the rest of my life,” she says while licking the tip of his cock. “Just please give me your cum baby…”
She then goes back to sucking his cock and goes to town on it, sucking it furiously. The sounds she makes while sucking carry through the clear evening on the quiet little island. And her husband watches as the crewman cums in her mouth, and hears his wife moan in pleasure.
“Let me see my cum you whore…” the crewman whispers harshly.
Kelly Brook smiles and opens her mouth, showing him his load of cum.
“Now be a good cheating slut and don’t swallow it yet,” he continues. “You give your husband a taste, he has been getting stronger, I think your little cum kisses are helping him…you cheating fucking whore.”
Kelly Brook holds his cum in her mouth, her cheeks out just a bit as it is a lot. She then turns to head back to camp with her husband.
Billy Zane stumbles back to his camp without his wife, and you show the world spinning around him, having him pass out.
You show him in his bedding on his back, passed out from the stress, and you show Kelly Brook lean in close over him, open his mouth, and spit her lover’s cum in her husband’s mouth. Giving him a quick peck on the lips afterward.
He confronts her the next day and she doesn’t deny it. “You fucked him!” He says roughly, “you really fucked him. And what, you suck his cock every night now? You blow him every day?”
She frowns, wanting to be honest, “mornings as well, usually three times a day.”
She explains that she does that for the nutrition, for the protein. That the crewman told her there wasn’t enough food for both of them, so she ate less, he ate more and did most of the work, and then she ate his cum a few times a day.
You now show a quick cut of a lot of cumshots, twenty of them, where the crewman fed Kelly Brook his cum, and where she swallowed. After the two minute cumshot compilation, you see her eyes narrow. She had enjoyed it. You could see it on her smiling face as she swallowed.
She explains that it started soon after they found each other, and just didn’t stop. She needed the protein.
“I didn’t mean for you to know!” She says to her husband.
“Well sorry to spoil your fun?” He yells back, striking her with a hard slap. “You stupid whore, any excuse to swallow some cum eh?”
“It wasn’t to hurt you, it was to help keep you alive,” she countered. “You were too weak to fish, to gather supplies, it takes a lot of energy. After we found you we did it far away where you wouldn’t see!”
“You fucking whore,” he replies. He looks more than twice her age. He is fit but balding, he knows he only has someone so young and beautiful because of his wealth.
Soon a scene occurs where Kelly Brook’s character swims naked out to the crewman, and she has a sex scene with him in the ocean, while she sees that her husband is watching.
She is beautiful, but this scene needs more, a lot more.
You decide they should be in much more shallow water when they begin fooling around, so that when she gives her husband a devious look as she realizes she is watching, her actions change.
Instead of kissing the crewman and riding him standing up in the water, you decide she should drop to her knees and let her husband see her suck the man’s dick. This is personal for her, she wants her husband to see her with a cock in her mouth.
You decide to show an erotic hardcore blowjob, where plenty of dick is seen, and where it is obvious that she is enjoying what she is doing.
Instead of having her husband watch her get fucked out in deeper water in the darkness, you have her stand up from giving her lover a blowjob, and get close and tease him while having the talk they do in the movie.
Then she takes the crewman by the hand and walks him back toward shore, stopping in shallow water, and getting on all her hands and knees, presenting herself to her lover doggystyle.
The crewman then gets behind her on her knees, and begins to fuck her from behind. You decide they should depict rough doggy style sex, with Kelly Brook’s beautiful ass shaking as she gets pounded, and for the scene to extend a bit longer than normal, to accent what her husband has chosen to watch.
When the crewman climaxes, you have him and Kelly Brook collapse on the beach, but he is still inside of her after he finishes. And the crewman continues to slowly thrust himself into her body, while groping her breasts, and kissing her neck, and licking the side of her face.
You see that the crewman doesn’t stop thrusting. He slows, but he keeps moving in and out of her, enjoying her body.
She smiles at her husband, with another man cumming inside of her body, and with that man still inside of her and with his tongue running along her beautiful cheek.
Billy Zane flicks his cigarette in anger, but now you feel there is a better reason for his descent into madness as the film progresses.
You now have the crewman start pumping again, having found a second wind. The move up on the beach and he fucks her again, this time knowing her husband is watching, Kelly Brook asks for him to cum on her face, which he does.
And it looks very sexy in the moonlight. Through the second fuck, she watches her husband, a man she is now trying to humiliate.
He had promised to divorce her when they were rescued and leave her penniless. Fuck him.
That was the last of the film’s sex scenes, but you feel like your version needs more.
What else can you add to the movie?
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