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Chapter 5
by
rockyboy150
Who do you meet ?
You meet Crystal Minx
The next twenty-four hours passed in a blur of fitful sleep, bland hospital food, and a low, thrumming anxiety that felt like a physical weight on my chest. Dad visited, his face pale and etched with lines I’d never seen before. He tried to be strong, squeezing my shoulder and telling me everything was going to be okay, but his eyes were hollow. He didn’t mention Mom. Not once. He just asked about my stitches and if I needed anything. It was the most terrifying conversation of my life.
Finally, Dr. Saunders gave the okay. My legs felt like jelly as a nurse helped me into a wheelchair, my body still protesting every movement. The journey down the hall to the private recovery room felt endless. The antiseptic smell was stronger here, mixed with something else… a faint, floral perfume that was entirely unfamiliar.
Dad was standing outside the room, leaning against the wall as if holding it up. He saw me and pushed himself upright, forcing a tight smile. “Hey, champ. She’s… awake. The doctors say it’s a good time.”
“Is it her?” I asked, my voice barely a whisper.
He looked at the floor, then back at me, his jaw working. “Just… go on in, Tim.”
The nurse pushed the door open and guided my wheelchair inside before quietly slipping back out, closing the door with a soft click.
The room was dim, the blinds half-closed. And there she was. My mom. Propped up in the hospital bed, her left arm in a cast, her blonde hair slightly tousled against the white pillow. She was staring out the window, her profile so familiar it made my heart ache. She turned her head as I entered.
For a second, it was her. Just Mom. Her green eyes found mine, and a small, weary smile touched her lips. “Timmy,” she said, and her voice was her voice, a little hoarse, but hers.
Relief, warm and ****, flooded through me. “Mom,” I choked out, trying to get up from the wheelchair.
Then, it happened. The smile on her face changed. It didn’t fade; it transformed. It widened, becoming sharper, more knowing. The weariness in her eyes evaporated, replaced by a bright, assessing glint that traveled over me in a way that was utterly, profoundly alien. Her posture shifted subtly against the pillows, a lazy, almost theatrical grace entering her movements.
“Well, hello there,” she said, and the voice was different. It was lower, huskier, each word dripping with a smoky, playful confidence that was nothing like my mother’s gentle cadence. “Aren’t you a tall drink of water?”
I froze, half-out of the chair. The relief curdled into ice in my veins. This wasn’t my mom.
“I… Mom?” I tried again, a pathetic plea.
She laughed—a soft, throaty sound that seemed to vibrate in the quiet room. “Oh, honey, let’s not get confused, okay? The ‘Mom’ software is running in the background right now. I’m sure she’s fretting about something.” She waved her good hand dismissively. “I’m Crystal. And you must be Timothy. Jennifer’s told me all about you.” Her eyes raked over me again, and I felt myself blush hotly, a confusing mix of horror and something else I refused to name. “Though her descriptions didn’t really do you justice. You’re much cuter.”
I sank back into the wheelchair, my strength gone. This was a nightmare. The woman in the bed had my mother’s face, my mother’s hair, my mother’s body in the stupid hospital gown. But the person looking out through her eyes was a complete stranger. A stranger who was looking at me, her own son, with an appraising, flirtatious gaze.
“Where’s my mother?” I demanded, my fists clenching in my lap.
“Right here, silly,” Crystal purred, tapping her temple with a finger. “She’s listening. Probably screaming. It’s adorable.” She sighed, a dramatic, put-upon sound. “Look, kid, this is as weird for me as it is for you. One minute I’m popping champagne backstage at the Vixen Awards, the next I’m waking up in Suburbia, USA, with a cracked arm and a head full of PTA meetings and casserole recipes.” She shuddered delicately. “Talk about a downgrade.”
I just stared, my mind blank with shock. The crude reality of it, the sheer vulgarity of her words coming from my mother’s mouth, was paralyzing.
She seemed to enjoy my speechlessness. “The docs gave me the rundown. Shared real estate. Blah, blah. Personally, I think I got the raw end of the deal. No offense to your mom’s… wholesome vibe, but the wardrobe possibilities alone are giving me hives.” She plucked at the hospital gown with disdain.
“Don’t talk about her like that,” I snapped, finding my voice.
Crystal’s eyebrows—my mother’s eyebrows—rose in amusement. “Ooh, protective. I like that. Don’t worry, Timmy. I’ll be good. Well,” she smirked, “good is a relative term. But I’ll play nice. For now. We’re gonna be seeing a lot of each other, after all.”
The door opened and Dad stepped in, his face like stone. “Tim,” he said, his voice gruff. “That’s enough for now.”
Crystal’s demeanor shifted instantly at the sight of him. The predatory glint softened, replaced by something more calculating, but no less unnerving. “Donny,” she cooed, drawing out the nickname. “Come to rescue your boy? How sweet.”
Dad didn’t look at her. He just gripped the handles of my wheelchair and turned me around. “Come on, son.”
As he wheeled me out, I glanced back. Crystal—occupying my mother’s face—was watching us go, that strange, sharp smile still on her lips. She gave me a slow, deliberate wink.
In the hallway, under the harsh fluorescent lights, I started to shake. Dad’s hand came down on my shoulder, heavy and firm. He didn’t say anything. He didn’t need to. The look in his eyes said it all. The woman in that room was my mother. And she wasn’t. And from the terrifying, captivating glint in her eye, Crystal Minx had no intention of being a quiet roommate.
What is Crystal planning ?
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The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
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