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Chapter 10
by marvelfan
Who does she go to? Does she stay?
Sue Goes to Jail!!
Johnny Storm woke up with a yawn, it was 10 am. “Damn...I must be getting old,” he told himself, “getting home early, going to bed early, and now waking up early.” He went to the bathroom to take a piss, for the playboy Human Torch, every-time it didn't burn when he peed was a good thing. As he walked through the living quarters of the Baxter Building, he felt it oddly empty. He knew Ben was still on vacation, and Reed was god-knows where with Pym, and some other eggheads. Where was is sister though?
“SUE!” He yelled out, “SUE! How about some pancakes!” No answer. He turned on the television to his favorite morning show, Morning Express with Mary Jane Watson. She sure was gorgeous. Wonder who she's dating, he muttered. Something didn't feel right to Johnny. He finally realized Sue had not been home last night as far as he could remember, and was absent now. In fact, it didn't sound or look like she had been home in a bit, there was still a box of Chinese food on the table he pulled out for a late night snack when he woke up and watched another Horror movie. That wasn't like Sue at all. The hairs on his neck stood up, and Johnny reached for his communicator.
“JOHNATHAN STORM! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU ABOUT TRASH!” he heard the voice call from behind him, and looked up to see his older sister Susan Storm-Richards. She walked around and picked up the box.
“Sorry sis,” he said, “My bad.” He looked in her hands, and saw the bags which included some McDonald's food. “Gimme...gimme...gimme!”
Sue threw the bags of food onto the table, “Rude,” she stated and walked towards the kitchen.
A happy Johnny Storm munched the morning away. Sue had bought him some breakfast sandwiches AND pancakes. “Thanks Sis!” He called to her.
“Aren't you going to say anything,” she finally stated nervously.
The Human Torch looked back at her from the couch, “About what?”
Sue grabbed the bottom of her shoulder length blonde hair. “I got my haircut!” She hrumpphed about men and not paying attention, but as she turned to wash dishes she smiled. So close....
The Invisible Woman had only returned from the Negative Zone an hour ago. She had spent close to TEN WHOLE MONTHS in the Negative Zone with Sluggo. It all went by so fast and furious, that she could barely believe it. As time went on she regrew her hair, took out the piercings and removed the tattoos. She had lost so much weight, she actually had to “pig” out with Sluggo towards the end. Everything had to go back to normal.
Sluggo was not so happy, and he had claimed he would never let her leave. Yet, Sue had more than enough credits to have the collar removed, which she had even before Sluggo became belligerent. She finally escaped one night, without saying goodbye, which made her feel bad, but he wasn't about to just “let her go”. She was surprised as the S-Sluts: Blink, Dusk and Quicksand chased her through the space of the Negative Zone. They were under orders from their “leader” Sluggo to return her. How much had this fat beast changed. A low-life to a big time criminal.
She had managed to use her powers of invisibility to easily sneak into the Shadow City's N-Portal lab, and return to the Baxter Building. When she entered the Baxter Building’s low lab finally after ten months she sighed, and looked back. It was over. Still Sue enjoyed her time in the Zone. It was truly a sexually liberating vacation. Urges pent up for years were now long behind her, and she could get back to a normal life.
Right now she was happy to get back to normal life. Cleaning, cooking, and the like. If she was being honest, she was having a difficult time already. While she was at McDonald's she was about two dollars short, and didn't want to use her card. “Gilty” would have just blown the guy at the counter, and been comped the whole meal. Susan Storm-Richards had to use a credit card. She wasn't sure what method she preferred right now.
It was also hard after her shower, since Sluggo would have fucked her, and before her shower for that matter. She had gotten used to regular, if not overly abundant sex. And like Pavlov's dog's her precious flower blossomed and bloomed with wetness as it expected the normal routine of a huge cock inside it.
It was actually a pretty fun game, she found out as she went about her day. What Would Gilty Do? The answer was everything of course. Wait in line at the Grocery Store, nope. Gilty would just show her tits. Wait for drinks at a restaurant where she had lunch with Janet Van Dyne, nope. Gilty would give the bartender a handjob and get served free drinks all day.
The next day Susan and Johnny had to assist the Avengers with the Mole-Man. An easy battle, but Sue wondered if all the destruction could be avoided by her and the Wasp going down on the Mole-man. Sex can solve a lot of problems brought about by stress, frustration and anger. This was something Sue had found out in her time over in the Zone.
The days past, and Ben returned home, as finally, did Reed. When he came upstairs to the bedroom, he was shocked when Sue jumped in his arms and kissed him passionately. The pair made love for hours as husband and wife do, and Reed used his powers to help Sue begin to forget “Gilty”.
That was a nice night, but like clock-work, life went back to normal, and Sue's access to Reed's stretching ability in the sack began to dwindle. The next great “threat” had to be stopped. Reed was back in the lab, and Sue was den mother. Ho-hum, it was life.
Everything was fine until six months later, when a distress signal came from Shadow City. Sue watched as Reed talked with Lock-down and Rosetta Stone. Annihilus was attacking. The four prepared to assist, and Sue moved slowly as they put on their Negative Zone gear. “You alright hon,” Reed said adjusting straps on his jet propelled pack.
Sue nodded, “I'm fine.” She wasn't. This was her first time back in the Zone. The Fantastic Four flew into the Negative Zone through the portal. Susan's heart raced. When they arrived to Shadow City the Four helped stave of the invasion. This version of Annihilus was captured, and was to be taken to a special prison called “Prison 42” where super-powered villains were kept in the Zone. Reed would have to go eventually and ensure the facility he designed during the “Civil War” of heroes could harbor Annihilus. Luckily, Reed and Sue were able to get the Cosmic Rod from his neck. At least this rod, from this Annihilus. No one was sure how many there were or if they were all somehow one being.
The Fantastic Four were lauded again as heroes, and Sue and Ben watched Annihilus and his army shackled and chained and placed into a transporter. Reed was tending to some issues with the tech for the transport.
“Well...if it isn't the Fantastic Fuckfaces!” Sue heard from behind. It was a familiar voice and it gave Sue's heart a pause. She turned to see Quicksand, Blink, Dusk, and another female that Sue recognized as Big Bertha being put on a separate transport.
The Invisible Woman gasped. It was her former team. “Where are they being taken,” Sue asked.
A guard looked her body over and smiled. “Haven't you heard, they caught the S-Sluts, and we are gonna get that pig Sluggo real soon!” He walked away, and Sue heard him mutter about what he'd do to her if given the chance.
The team returned to Earth. Things appeared normal. Ben and Johnny to the couch, Reed to his lab. But Susan was in turmoil. Quicksand was a defiant and brash villain, but Dusk? Blink? They were young girls, heroines even who were corrupted by Sluggo, and well....Susan Richards. She couldn't let this stand. But she knew she couldn't break them out. They had all committed crimes. ALL of them. Even if Sue categorized them as small time.
A week later, Ben and Reed were asked by Doctor Strange to accompany them to a newly discovered dimension. Sue declined, and remained at home. Johnny sat on the couch, waiting to go out. He noticed his sister pacing back and forth. “What's up sis?”
“Nothing,” Sue said nervously, “Don't you have a date with Firestar or something?”
Johnny nodded, “Yup.” He checked his watch. “I guess I should get going. Don't wait up for me.”
Sue waved. She wasn't going to. She quickly changed into loose fitting clothes and a cloak with a hoodie. One of the many made with unstable molecules. She had to move fast. She didn't have much time.
Negative Zone.....in a city on a plabet near the Crossroad of Infinity.
Rhodan, the ratman worked about his shop. Once he was a great assassin, and “master of the hounds of hell”. He had plenty of adventures in his day. More like schemes, and had tussled with the likes of Adam Warlock and the Guardians of the Galaxy. Long ago he had escaped the hunt for him, and arrived here in the Zone. Those heroes rarely came here. Now old and fat, he just tended his shop. He was about to return home to his old fat rat wife, when a figure in a tunic entered the shop.
“Can I help you,” he weezed. He watched as the figure pulled the hoodie back revealing the gorgeous face of the blonde beauty Susan Storm-Richards, who had once stood in this very shop and showed him her tits. “Ms. Invisible, I see you've come back?” He winked, “I knew you would.”
Susan took a deep breath. This was something she had to do. Only this one other creature besides Sluggo even remotely knew of her time in this place. “I need your help!”
Rhodan's head turned to the side, “And what can I do for you? Last I heard the Fantastic Four whooped some bug butt in Shadow City? Seems you're doing fine!”
Sue looked to the stack of what were essentially Negative Zone DVDs, all were porn. In fact, all were porn starring Gilty. “Classy,” Sue said, “Must be a fan.”
The ratman nodded, “I do like the little minx.”
Sue stood strong and gulped down her pride. “I need you to help me loo EXACTLY like her! Right down to piercings and tattoos.” This was the only thing she could think of. He was a lowlife but she figured he knew who she was, and could get these tings done quickly if enticed.
“What's in it for me?” Rhodan stated.
Susan Storm-Richards nodded, then walked over to the shop keeper's desk, lifted the board that separated the back area from the public area, and advanced on the rat. He was like four feet tall, and she towered over him. The rat moved back against the wall frightened. Sue grabbed a high stool and told him to sit, more of a command than a question.
The ratman Rhodan thought his time was up, he wasn't sure what this woman was doing or why she wanted the things she did, but he was sure she was going to beat him within an inch of his life. Or worse, use one of them witch powers of hers. Instead, he watched as she began to undo the ties on his pants. “What are you doing?” The shocked little beast man shouted when he felt her hands reach in his pants.
“I want you to make me look like the pornstar Gilty, because I AM Gilty. Susan Storm-Richards IS Gilty!” She got on her hands and knees, and for the first time in months had the smell of cock hit her nose. A small furry cock, but a cock no less, and it cause the flower to bloom down low. “And I'm going to make it worth you while!” She said and engulfed his cock into her mouth.
“SKREEEE!” The ratman shouted as the most intense sexual experience of his life began. He heard the door to the shop begin to open and he threw a shoe through the window. “WE ARE CLOSED!” He screamed, as Sue laughed on his cock. “MY GOD THIS IS A DREAM!”
Sue pulled up and licked his shaft, “It's real, and if you help me and keep quite, this won't be the last one!”
Rhodan sat in that chair, day in and out for five days. He pledged and vowed to get all the piercings and tattoos and what not, and had the people come to his shop. The first thing was the hair, dyed and cut. He watched the changes first hand from that chair, as she blew him each night when the shop closed. She stayed in the back when he went home, and boy did he return to work early. No sex. For some reason she said she doesn't give her flower to any man but her husband, and maybe one other guy. The hair, then the tatoos, then the piercings. From his chair, with his cock in her mouth, Rhodan watched her turn slowly from Sue Storm to Gilty withint a manner of days.
Sure enough, he begged her to stay. Sue promised to return on his birthday at least, to suck him off. He helped her after all.
Prison 42....a day later....
Truman Marsh, the corrupt warden of the prison couldn't believe it. The villain, pornstar, and all around sex kitten “Gilty” had all but walked up to the prison and gave herself up. She was the last of the S-Sluts, or Sluggo's Girl Gang as they were called. A band of gun runners, **** dealers and all around shit people.
The Warden in the Zone had broad powers, and if a villain was brought by a bounty hunter, then he could stand in as a magistrate. The girl actually asked to see the old Warden and plead her case privately. “What brings you here missy?” The man said and looked the young girl up and down, such a gorgeous body on this dark haired vixen. The girl was wearing a pink vinyl skirt, and long white stripper heels. She kept crossing and uncrossing her legs.
“I am giving myself up, and throwing myself before the court.” Susan, nee Gilty, stated. “I want to be with my girls, and if you can help me out, I'll make it worth your while!” She walked around the desk, and the two guards in the corners moved to stop her, but the Warden waved them off. She began rubbing his cock in his slacks.
“Let's make a deal,” he smiled.
Sue began to unbuckle his pants. “What Would Gilty Do?” She thought. Exactly this. The smell of his cock wafted to her nose. She loved the smell of cock now. Each man, each species smelled so unique. She bent down and licked his tip slowly swirling her tongue around it. This wasn't going to be like the BJs she gave Rhodan, to quick break neck make him cum speedy BJ. This was a slow BJ that was going to last the entire negotiation. She laid out her terms as she licked his shaft and cupped his balls. Place her and her team together, keep them safe. Reduce the sentence to five months and probation on all her girls, and herself (this would only be about 12 hours in the zone). She knew he would counter, and as she sucked his nutsac he did, with 6.5 months and a weekly orgy with the S-Sluts. Susan gulped down his cock and sucked furiously signifying the deal. She took a huge load down her throat, surprised that this man with an average cock had so much. She was used to only the small spurts of Rhodan and hadn't sucked too much cock in months. She coughed it up and puked it out on the floor. This gave the Warden pride to have this pornstar gagging and **** on his cum. Little did he know it just tasted horrible to her. So did his cock. He hadn't washed, but she kept up her role.
Susan was returned to her team. They embraced, and Susan explained the deal. They all agreed it wasn't that bad. That night, Dusk, Susan/Gilty, Big Bertha, and Blink were on all fours as Quicksand pounded them with sand dildos from behind. The girls kissed, fucked and caught up all night. Gilty said she went to ground and shacked up with this “ratman” she knew.
Blink laughed and said “No humans still?”
Sue shook her head, “Guess I have to break that rule here. I sucked the Warden's dick and it was so weird. I really don't know how you guys put human dicks in your mouth!” She thought about it, and realized she hadn't actually sucked a human dick in over a year. She hadn't given Reed a BJ, and the last time was with the Trapster. She really wasn't into human dicks.
Sue got to know Big Bertha, the newest member, who she hadn't recruited herself. Blink was taking Sue's role with Sluggo and they met her on some backwater world.
The team was back together, and Gilty took the leadership role. Un-powered, so they thought, but “REAL SMART” as Quicksand said. They quickly became the **** to be reckoned with on this cell block. Other than Femme Fatales a group of four women, there wasn't even competition.
Their cell block was coincidentally the “S” wing of the female portion of the prison. The females were on a different floating rock altogether than the men. Here they were categorized not by their powers or appearance. Somehow, in the female portion of the prison, they were catergorized by their Male “arch-nemisis” which is something Sue did not know before, and when was all said and done she'd bring it up to Reed. It was sexist.
That isn't even what made Sue the maddest. What angered her was the fact that the “S” wing was for Spider-man Villains. The S-Sluts had only briefly tangled with Spider-man by accident, as he was “transported here” by accident or something, to a planet they were robbing of color changing diamonds. Were it not for the Collective arriving, they would have wiped the floor with the Spider dweeb as Gilty called him. Dusk and Blink had a thing for him. Gilty said he was a nerdy human who annyoed her. This was actually somewhat true. Seeing it from the other side, Sue understood why his dumb jokes irritated villains.
The weekly orgies took place right on Friday's at 9pm. After heavy drinking and spice use, and before the Warden and Billy Bob Rahman the Head Securty Guard went home to their families on Earth. Sue and one girl would suck the cock of one of the guys, while the other girls sucked the other guys cock. Two other guards in the room, sometimes Nova guys like Sameul Alexander and Josh Atwater would “chinese” finger trap the fifth girl. The Nova Corp filled some slots as guards, and more and more they wanted this “easy” duty.
Sue wouldn't give up her pussy. It wasn't for them. They were fine with her expert blowjobs. Her pussy was for her husband, and some other guy maybe. This is what she told herself. She constantly asked about Sluggo. He was caught and being held in the men's prison.
Six and a half Months came and passed. The girls were released, though the Warden and Head of Security both proposed to Sue, and she had to laugh and refuse. The girls went their own ways. For now. The team had there communicators if they needed to assemble.
Sue true to her word, went back Rhodan on his birthday, and he helped her remove the Tattoos, and piercings as she blew him several times. She even let the little rat villain cum on her face and tits, something she rarely gave anyone. Again, as she dried her now blonde, but still short hair, he begged her to stay. He'd divorce his wife and marry her. Negative Zone marriages don't recognize Earth marriages so there would be no problem on her side. She laughed and refused. And walked out.
Four months later.....
Reed was prepping the N-Portal. “It'll be fine Susan, you need to come, and see the changes.” He asked. “After all, it was you who tipped me off to the sexist nature of the women's prison. I get caught up in the logisitics, so you can catch any other human rights issues.”
Sue nodded, “I don't think you need me Reed. But fine!” She said fidgeting. She looked at the controls, this was happening.
The pair went to through the portal and arrived at the loading area of the N Zone Prison 42, on the men's side. They were greeted by the Warden Tom Magnus, luckily not the same Warden from the female side. He ushered them through to the retinal scan. Reed went first. The computer read him as Reed Richards.
Sue crossed her arms, “Seriously Reed, is this necessary?”
Reed nodded, “If she wasn't my wife, the Baxter Building would have already alerted me, and not let her through the portal. We don't need to go through these protocols. I built this place Magnus.”
The group walked by a small enclave of security guards watching a video. Loud moans emanated from the screen.
“Turn that off,” Magnus yelled. “Sorry sir, these guys get a little bored.”
Reed turned to Sue, “They are men cut off from family for a week, probably watching the conjugal visit feeds.” He began tapping into the computer systems from his hand held and they walked into the room next to the Guard station where many of the central computers and servers were held.
Sue turned to a security guard, “Excuse me sir?” She asked him quielty.
“Scott, Ma'am” the guard said, “Scott Washington, I was the hero Hyrbid I worked with Spider-man, remember you guys had a harity event and I...”
Sue nodded, “Yes, yes, ok,” she pointed to the cameras, “There are cameras in the Conjugal Visit rooms too, isn't that illegal?”
The Warden stepped in, “Due to the nature of the villains and their wives we have to take all precautions. I'm sorry, its a different atmosphere than a normal jail. We try not to watch the feeds, but some bad seeds do bad things.”
Another guard spoke up, “It's just when Gilty comes the guys get riled up?”
Susan turned slowly, “Gilty?”
The guard, a slob of a man nodded. Reed shook his head, “She is a known actress in pornographic movies here in the Negative Zone.”
Sue's face went red, “You know her Reed.”
He nodded, “I've seen pictures.”
“What does she look like,” Sue asked.
The slobbier guard brought out a magazine and showed her. “She's pretty intense. She did her time over in the women's prison and showed up REAL drunk one night asking to see Sluggo! Have you heard of him or the S-Sluts?”
The Invisible Woman shook her head, “No?”
Reed spoke up but looked at his computer, “They were a small time crook gang, nothing more than some lude and prurient women and a Boarian male for a leader. He is actually a male of several hundred pounds, almost a thousand now, he just sits there in the cell.”
Sue gave Reed a look he didn't see.
“Well, I'd sit there too if my wife was Gilty and came to see me for the “visits” all the time.” The guard stated.
The Warden waved him off, “It's all on the up and up, when she first came here she was turned away, only spouses or recognized mates of species are allowed. She was wed to the Pigman and now its all legal.”
Reed finally lifted his head. “Not enough studies have been done on interspecies mating. Its a dangerous game to play. Disease, or abnormalities of offspring come to mind.”
Sue gritted her teeth. “Maybe some people just want to get laid,” she muttered under her breath.
“What Susan?” He asked.
She shrugged, “I just said, this is a different place, it isn't Earth.”
Later that night....
Sue begged Reed to stay home for some “fun”, but he insisted he needed to meet with Tony Stark. After he left, Sue made sure Ben was out with Alicia and Johnny was doing whatever he does. Then she went to the N-Portal. Black wig, High heels, and some henna had the look down. Gilty was going to visit her Negative Zone husband.
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Updated on Jun 14, 2025
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Created on Aug 23, 2016
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