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Chapter 3
by marvelfan
What does she see
Sue's POV: “Swords, Porn, and Sorcery” in the Negative Zone.....
The Invisible Woman floated in Space as she watched the ship. It apparently saw her as it slowly approached. She felt a beam of light hit her. Years of being married to Reed Richards, and being a member of the Fantastic Four told her that she was being scanned. As if to confirm this, a loud booming voice came over a loudspeaker.
“Susan Storm-Richards, you are a wanted fugitive of the Negative Zone Collective. Please make no actions while you are secured for transport!”
Sue didn't wait, she raised an arm and blocked the ships progress, then she immediately went invisible. The heroine wasted not time moving towards the uninhabited planet, and looked over her shoulder as more beams of light scanned the now empty space she had occupied. That was close, she thought, realizing their were many interested parties in this place that would love to see her captured. She shuddered at the thought and descended sharply into the planets atmosphere. It took all he powers to avoid being torn apart by the G-**** of a planet re-entry. The Invisible Woman had never done this with such modest equipment, but her strength was amazing.
Her feet hit the ground with barely a thud, and she took off running, as she saw the ship approach the planet in the sky. There was a near-by mountainous range, and she quickly found a large opening. Something strange gripped her as she entered the massive opening. She felt electricity in the air, and sensed a heavy pressure around her. As she moved through the cave, it came to an opening. To her amazement, a large blue swirling sphere of energy appeared before her, through it she could see a desert. “Impossible,” she muttered, “It must be a wormhole!” She knew they were out there, and was sure the Four had gone through a few. This was Reed's world, of science and physics. Still, she could here the ship's loud landing. They were probably miles away, but there scanners were pretty advanced.
With a deep breath, she entered the shimmering blue of the worm-hole. “Here goes nothing,” she said and walked through. There was surge of energy around her, and then she felt her body propelled like a whiplash forward, until she rolled out on the other side, still in a cavernous opening. Her eyes adjusted, and she turned back to see the worm-hole had remained open. She'd have to remember where this was.
Sue walked slowly out of this new cave, and into the desert. She saw a large Sun, and moon. Hell, it almost looked like the deserts back home on Earth. Could it be? She checked the computer on her wrist. The air was breathable, but this was not Earth. It was hot, so she pulled her helmet off, and set it outside the cave opening. A good marker to remember the place of the wormhole.
It didn't take long for Sue to spot sentient beings. She knew this from the carts they rode upon. There were men with helmets and spears. To her shock, these red-skinned men were BUCK naked. That's when she noted the cage of red-skinned women. “Typical,” she huffed and thought about walking away. Reed would tell her not to interfere here, to avoid influencing a possible primitive species. Sue wasn't Reed, she wasn't the kind of person to let oppression take hold anywhere. Besides, she saw the structure of the caravan, and strange gadgets. These people weren't entirely primitive.
She moved through the desert slowly towards the caravan.
“Halt,” one of the guards cried, “who are you female...and what is it you wear?”
The Invisible Woman stopped, looked at the caravan, taking in these funny nude people. It was rather comical. “Uh...yeah, my name is Susan....any of you have a phone?”she rtwaited for a response that never came. Sue tried to make the “international” or hopefully “interspacial” sign for phone and put her hand to her ear. “You know. Phone? Radio? Talkie?” She shrugged, “I don't even know why I try!”
The guard came up to her and pulled out a large spear. “Stop, identify yourself!”
She had already been through a lot and was not amused by these strange nude men. “I'm not really in the mood!” She lifted her arm and sent out a forcefield to push the men back. Not to hurt them, just to stun them. Yet, nothing occurred. Something was wrong. “Uhh....shit...” the gorgeous woman muttered.
Other guards came up to the scene, they seemed perplexed with her actions. “Maybe she is a witch?” One of them uttered.
Quite embarrassed finally by the whole display of nudity, Sue's face went red, as the men approached. She heard the woman gasp. “Are you guys not wearing pants...or underwear?” She put her hands over her eyes and turned her head away.
A larger man with a spear came up from the cart. “What manner of garb do you wear? Are you a warrior or a witch?” The guard pushed his spear to poke her blue suit. It didn't even penetrate the strange shiny blue garb.
“Hey, that hurts,” she grabbed the wooden portion of the spear and yanked it. She lifted the guard holding the spear in the air with ease. Gasps came from the girls in the cage. Holy shit, something is REALLY wrong, her strength was out of control. She was attempting to do a spin kick when she lept, and found herself flying through the air. Holy shit! She thought again. Sue came down with a thud, causing the guards to fall. “Holy shit!” The huffing beauty murmured.
She made mince-meat out of the guards. She was untouchable, jumping around, throwing the men around like small rocks. Eventually the fight was over, and the guards ran off into the desert. Screaming about re-enforcements.
Sue walked over to the cage, gave the lock a quick look, and held it in both her hands, she ripped it in two like it was helium paper. “This must be what Ben feels like!” She laughed.
The woman all ran for there freedom, as the blonde watched them confused. A pair of woman stood, even though one attempted to pull the other away. “This woman saved us,” The young red-skinned girl stated. She bowed her head, “My name is Lan Vasa, and this is my sister Zee!”
“I'm Susan Storm-Richards! Glad to meet you!” The proper greeting of a handshake went unreceived and Sue took her hand back to her side. “Does anyone know where there is like a city, or something? Maybe some technology somewhere?”
Lan nodded, “You will find it in Helium, I will help you!”
She didn't know where she was, so she had to trust these two. They escorted Susan Storm Richards to the palace which the called Helium. The city looked like something out of a history book, half Egyptian, yet far more advanced. As they walked through the streets of Helium, people gawked and pointed at Susan. Her knew BFF told her, “It is your garb, it is disrespectful for a woman to be covered so!”
Susan's eyes went to Lan, scanning her up and down. “So I'm just supposed to be naked then?”
The palace was a buzz with this new female. The Jed of Helium, Zar Zek, a strong middle aged warrior, and ruler of the city received them.
The young red-skinned woman chuckled. “We are not savages Sue The Storm” She bought two gold nipple covers and handed them to Sue.
“Are you kidding me?” Susan laughed.
Lan insisted, and stated the palace would not receive her in such garb. So she watched as Susan “The Storm” walked into a tent. She came out with the blue skin in her arms, and the covers on her nipples. Sue felt insecure as Lan's eyes went wide. It was clear she was WAY more endowed than the people of this planet. Funny, a place were large breasts are weird.
The sisters escorted Sue to the palace. It was agreed that they would pose as Susan's slaves, as they held the marks of slaves on there backs. They explained they had been slaves since youth, which made Sue feel sympathy. She had been enslaved for short periods, and dared not think what a life like that would be. While they walked, Lan explained that the Jed, or King, of Helium was not truly in charge. The Queen was the one in power, but she had gone against her duties, had violated a ritual for too long, and brought about war. She was being held prisoner until a new queen was chosen.
“Strange,” Susan stated as she looked at her ample bosom, and pointed to the small nipple covers.“It doesn't seem like woman are in charge!”
The palace became abuzz with this white-skinned woman from the desert. The name “Susan The Storm” was uttered on every lip. In time, Lan was allowed to bring Susan before Zad Zek, the Jed.
The middle aged dark haired muscular man Zad Zek was handsome, Susan could see that. The Jed bowed to the young blonde. “Welcome to Helium Susan of The Storm.” As he bowed, Sue noted his penis grew, his eyes on Susan's bosom. Hard it was at least five to six inches, massive for a red-man.
“Really,” Susan gasp. She looked around the court in confusion after looking down at Zad's member. “Is this happening right now?”
“I'm afraid I don't understand my dear,” Zad Zek said and walked around Susan, “I have never seen anyone like you, thought I had heard legends of the fair skinned one.”
A large boom could be heard in the distance, and a guard entered the chamber “Sire, the Warhoon are attacking!”
“TO ARMS!” He called out. “Ladies, please stay safe in this court, it is heavily fortified!” He ran to his sky speeder and took off with a battalion. For the first time, Sue saw the technology of this people. They had sky gliders. Amazing, she thought as she stared at the sky speeder.
The girls heard about the heavy casualties, and it wasn't long before Sue could watch and wait no longer. She would use these new powers to help these people. It seemed the right thing to do.
With a leap she flew in the air, her legs flailing as she flew, still new to the sensation. She hit the tan rock city walls with a thud. That's when Sue saw the large green creatures. They were massive, long and lean, with four arms, and horns or were they tusks. Their eyes were large, and bug-like. The heads of these beings were bald, and shined green in the sun. To her utter horror, they were nude as well, but the “members” of these beings were massive. Sue could only scream “HOLY FUCK LOOK AT THAT THING!” As a large Thark approached her position.
The Invisible Woman had arrived on this strange world, and seen the rampant nudity, but the red-skinned men had penises like you would see in Greek statutes on Earth, almost child-like. It was rather amusing. These creatures did not have such penises. Sue kept putting her hand over her eyes as she swung her sword wildly at the advancing creature. Susan kept saying “HOLY SHIT IT'S BIG! HOLY SHIT! KEEP IT AWAY!” She took a breath, realizing she was panicking and for the wrong reasons. She had to fight. Forget about the green “thing”, she told herself, even as it began to move when the creature approached, upward toward the sky.
Her battle skills were primed and ready always, and she knew calm was key. She put both hands on the sword, and the fight turned quickly. Sue mowed down the beasts one after another, jumping to and fro, taking out entire units single-highhandedly. She heard them cry out “witch” as she slew them.
That was the day the legend of Susan of the Storm was born.
After the battle, Susan agreed to stay and help the red-men. These “Warhoon” as they were called, were Tharks, a dangerous and warlike species who attempted to wipe out the red-skinned men. Sue needed their help as much as they needed her. She had to return to the cave. She had no idea what the time difference here was on this world, or if she was even in the Negative Zone.
Sue explained that she hailed from Earth. She was shocked to find out that people here knew of Earth, though they called it Jarsoom. It was merely a legend. The deal was struck, and Susan fought with Helium, taking her new handmaidens, Zee and Lan with her everywhere. They were no longer slaves, but well cared for friends of Susan. In turn, she was well cared for as well. Susan set out with a party the first week to find the cave. Sadly, when the cave was found, Susan's magical entrance to Jarsoom was not. For the first time, Sue broke down and cried, she'd be here for some time.
Susan's fighting became legend as weeks past. For the first time a woman became a padwar, or lieutenant, and then a Dwar, or captain. Many men were angry at her place, but they dared not cross the Storm. Soon she was a Odwar, or general, commanding 10,000 men, she was as intelligent as she was crafty, strong, skilled and somewhat ruthless with the Thark she fought.
It was said she hated the Thark more than the red-man. The truth was, their cocks disgusted her. Each battle she fought through hordes of erect assailants, small driblets of blue came out of their tips, even as she slashed them to pieces. Their blood was a darker blue.
Soon she rose to the ranks of Jedwar, the right hand of Zad Zek after six months. He was handsome, and on this planet, Sue had plenty of indications that this man “fancied” her. A small glance down would confirm that. He was nice, kind and strong, and had she not been married, his advances would maybe take hold on her.
Her strength and leadership carried far on this world. The women of Helium gain confidence again, as a strong female leader was rising before them. Sue “The Storm” as she was called made speeches about equality of men and women, and how how women had a place of strength in the red-men society. She had initially tried to change at least the garb of the culture but soon accepted it. Lan became one of her most trusted advisers.
Then, Zad Zek offered to make Sue his wife, to which she refused. There was a commotion among the city. Sue turned to Lan for advice. “I am married to another,” she answered.
“Not by Barsoom law, and not here my lady,” Lan stated. “Besides,” Lan blushed, “he has a remarkable asset,” she winked at Sue.
This made Sue's eyes role. This girl hadn't seen much big cock beyond this world that wasn't green. “Trust me, that's not remarkable and its barely an asset.” She laughed.
Yet, Sue knew custom was key, she didn't want to upset the people. She still needed their aid. Daily she sent out parties to find the “blue wave of shimmering light” as she called it. So she agreed to be his concubine, and assume the role of Queen, but not his wife or mate. She made sure to have a seperate bedroom, in the royal chambers, though she kept the appearance that they slept together as husband and wife. There were nights when it was hard, when they drank Helium wine and laughed. Zad had kissed her, and Sue had responded momentarily, but she moved away. She was married. This was wrong.
A month later, the emissary of the Warhoon came to Helium. “Since there is a new Queen, the ritual of peace MUST be done!”
The entire court agreed, including Susan. Confused, the Invisible Woman asked her handmaiden Lan what “The ritual of peace” was. Lan had no idea. Only the Queens of Helium knew, not even the Jed, who was actually below the Queen in rank. But it was the root of the war, as the last queen did not complete the ritual.
“We ride for the Temple of Issus in the morning!” Susan stated to Lan. The young girl was elated, she knew her queen wouldn't let her down.
So the Queen of the Storm and her two handmaidens, Zee and Lan rode with a cadre of an army towards the immense citadel in the dessert. Both Helium guards and Warhoon Thark guards stood at its gates on either side. Throughout history, only the Queen of Helium and the Jeddak of the Thark where allowed to enter the sacred halls.
Sue dismounted and took of her robe handing it to Zee. “Girls, remain out here, and wait for me.” She motioned for the girls to take their place. Sue sighed and walked through the large doors which closed behind her. There was a long sandy hallway, and Sue walked slowly taking in all the ornate hieroglyphs on the walls. This was a language she didn't recognize, different than both red-man and Thark.
A loud booming voice, that Sue recognized as Dak Kovo's spoke “That is the language of the ancients,” the leader of the Warhoon stated. Sue came into the opening, and was met with breathtaking beauty. There was a large groto were water flowed down into a hot-spring. To the left was a full bed, and shower, and bathroom. Fruits, meats, and other delicacies adorned the tables to the right.
The Invisible Woman saw the large broad back of her enemy, as he poured a drink. This Thark scared her to no end, he was massive, far larger than any Warhoon, which made sense, because the culture prided themselves on strong warriors. She knew his story, he rose to power with ruthlessness and ****, killing any who stood in the way. She took a step back when he turned, she knew his face, it was scarred, and mean, but it was his “sword” that made her cringe. The thing between his legs was like a fifth arm, green, bulbous, veiny and pulsing, like the others it moved when he spoke with her.
“Have a drink my Queen,” he bowed his head holding a goblet.
“I'm not thirsty,” Sue answered looking at the walls.
Dak corrected her, “This is the ritual's start, you must!” He handed her the gold goblet after taking a sip. Sue sighed and grabbed it. She had her share of Barsoom wine by now. Her eyes became transfixed on the walls. The mighty Warhoon King began to speak slowly, “This is a sacred place, and what you might not know, is that when Thark and Red-man first emerged on this planet things were a lot better. You see Susan of the Storm, early on, it became apparent that Thark men and Red women were more “compatible”. Sue gasped as the images on the walls appeared to move. The beauty of the walls turned into something far stranger, as red-women and green male Tharks began to mate before her very eyes. “You must have known that something wasn't right about the red-men's members, and the small genitals of the Thark females. They cannot even receive a Thark cock, the men must seed the eggs at a later date.” Sue took in all that he said, as the images moved with his words. She felt two of his hands rest on his shoulders, but she couldn't move, utterly taken aback by the dancing images. “There was a time when it was actually weird to see a red-man and a red-woman mating, as if it was wrong.” She saw his lower hand point to the wall. “That is when he came, your Edgar Rice Burroughs!” The images began moving even faster than his words, and Sue could see the story play out. Burroughs had stumbled into a wormhole on Earth. She watched him emerge in this land. Then she saw the land expand out, and realized it was a planet in the corner of the Negative Zone, with a Sun like Earth's, even if the Thark didn't realize this. The fact gave Sue some comfort, the timeline was still in play. She had only been here a few Earth hours.
Sue felt like she was floating as the story continued. Though she heard Dak's loud voice, all she saw now was the images play out like a dream. Burroughs had come here and shamed the women for lying with the Thark. Before his arrival, a race of beautiful beings known as the Warhooman had rose, strong and skilled in battle. It was the union of red-women and Thark. The other race, the Tharman, were jealous, and it was clear why. Their race came about by the redmen spilling seed on female Thark eggs. That is no fun, Sue heard Dak's voice in the distance as she floated.
“There is a legend,” Dak continued, and the images changed, “Of a fair skinned woman with the hair of the sun coming to this world, and a mighty King of the Tharks, who will bring about the return of the Warhooman.” The image of a blonde woman and a large Thark came into Sue's view, the woman was being held up at the waist by his lower arms, while the upper arms held her shoulders. He was impaling his large cock in the woman.
“That is the ritual of peace, Susan of the Storm!” Dak's voice whispered in Sue's ears as she floated further up.”And it has been done for ages.” She felt something strange down in her nether regions as Dak continued, “I believe that YOU AND I are the ones the prophecy speaks of,” he said, and Sue looked down to see what was happening, he had lifted her in the air, and was lowering her right onto his “spear”.
“No,” Sue muttered, but simply couldn't move, something had to be in the drink.
“Yes...it is destiny,” he said and entered her. His tip sinking into her surprisingly wet folds.
In her state, she couldn't fight, couldn't speak, couldn't move, all she could do was watch as his cock pushed up into her filling her. She felt the heat of the massive member enter her. She had fought off the advances of Rama-tut, Namor, Black Panther, even Doom in a mad state of lust to get a Reed. Yet here she was fully impaled with a foot of green alien cock. She wanted to scream, but all that came out was a moan that reverberated off the walls. Something was opening inside her, deep down there, he was reaching a place no man, not even Reed had found. But why? It was as if she was a virgin once again, losing her most prized possession.
The Invisible Woman's eyes went back to the walls, and a new image appeared, that of Dak and Sue fucking as they were now. Her mouth went open in the glowing appearing image, and Sue's own mouth opened in kind as she had a mind shattering orgasm. She felt the hot blast of his seed splash deep inside her and it caused another orgasm. Then the floating stopped, and she was on the ground, panting in a heap.
After a minute, she regained her composure, asking herself, “What just happened?”
She must had said it out loud, because Dak answered. “The ritual is complete, join me in the bed!”
Sue stood up, as torrents of blue semen poured from her pussy down her legs. “I must go,” she said over and over trying to wipe away the filthy cum.
A minute later, Susan the Storm came out, stumbling, and sweating as if she'd been in a fight. She was having trouble waking.
“What happened my Queen?” her handmaiden Lan asked?
Sue didn't look at the girl, she just got on her Thoat. “It is done. There will be peace!”
Lan helped her Queen to her horse, and noticed she seemed distraught. “Was it tough,” she asked.
“What,” her Queen answered, “What, uh...yeah...but its over.” The Storm repeated to herself.
“Well,” Zee stated as she mounted her horse, “We have to come back every three weeks!”
“WHAT!” Susan's eyes went wide. Her hear beat fast. “Where is the old Queen take me to her!”
Lan and Zee escorted their Queen to the jails of Helium.
Sue entered the jail cell and saw the red-skinned imprisoned Queen. “You knew this would happen?” She seethed at the elderly woman.
The former Queen nodded, “I see you have made peace,” she said looking at Sue's covered pussy.
“FUCK YOU! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME!” She spat.
“You are the Queen now, it is your duty. Refuse as I did, and you can join me. But it seems you rather enjoyed making peace”, she laughed. T
Sue all but hissed as she left. Telling the guards to ensure she was kept here.
When Sue came back out, Lan asked about the blue substance on her saddle
“It is blood,” Sue lied without looking at her. The other maiden, Zee, laughed. “Blood, turned blue by the atmosphere, same as what gives me powers!” Sue explained.
For three weeks Sue was scared to sleep, her dreams were vivid as if real. The world took on a green hue, and Sue was running from something. Something large, something green. She hated how she woke in sweat, and the sheets below her pussy were soaked.
Three weeks later, Sue entered the citadel. Dak noted a grim determination on her face. “Do what you must,” she said and grabbed the cup taking a drink. Before long, Sue was on all fours, being mounted by the Thark King. His hands kneaded her breasts, and his other hands grabbed her hips, pulling her back onto his cock. Sue found herself ashamed at how her body reacted, but this was her duty. She was Queen, there was a custom. She had to, she told herself. She merely watched the walls, as new images appeared, documenting the “peace accord”. She found herself lifting her leg, to see it appear on the wall, which actually made her chuckle.
This time, she left with her head high, and a sleeping Dak. Green, Red, White, all men were the same. Sue came out the citadel of her own accord stronger than last time. A Queen must stay strong.
But as the days past, the “nightmares” got worse. At first she was chased by Namor, then a Skrull, even Reed. Each time she would lose her footing and be mounted. It didn't matter who, when she turned, the face she saw was the Warhoon leader Dak Kovo. The dreams would end with no relief for Susan, in fact, it was as if a scratch was building that couldn’t be itched. Each morning she would wake frustrated.
Then, she decided enough is enough. The frustration and anxiety were merely too much to bear. She found herself drinking a whole bottle of wine. She crept into bed with a surprised Zad Zek. He had no time to react, when her mouth crushed his in a passionate kiss. He felt her hand begin to rub his cock. He had waited months for his concubine to come to him, and didn't care what brought her here. Sue mounted him and began grinding waiting to feel anything other than the “green” inferno. Cheating on her husband was far from her mind, she needed this. Besides, she had already given herself to Dak.
“You feel magnificent my love,” Zad Zek moaned as his hands gripped her waist.
Susan stopped, and looked down at him with a quizical look.
“Is something wrong my Queen?” he asked.
The Invisible Woman was brought out of her heats of passion and looked down to see his tiny red member inside her. She bucked and bounced on it. Nothing. She hadn't even felt him enter her.
Zad Zek was in heaven, sure she felt looser than most of his concubines, but that was to be expected. She was different. “As you can see red-men are skilled lovers, do not fear it if it is different than your world's men.” He humped up at her watching his love. It was too much to take in as she smiled down at him. His cock fell out of her pussy from the wetness and he came on his own chest. “Wonderful!” He said rubbing her back.
Sue just got up, her face flush red. “Is that it then,” she stated. Seeing his confusion, she became more tender. “You were wonderful my king,” she smiled, and got off him and walked away, “Fucking red-men...useless...” she muttered.
An hour later, Susan, who had on a tunic, covering her face pleaded with Zee and Lan to get ready as she needed to meet with Dak Kova of the Warhoon to talk peace.
Lan was worried, but soon she found herself with her sister waiting outside the citadel, alone but for the two Warhoon guards.
Her Queen came out pulling on a large brown tunic around herself and mounted her Thoat. “Peace is assured Lan, where is Zee?”
“Coming my queen,” Zee emerged from the rocks, and jumped on her thoat. The three took off and Lan turned to see the other guard come from Zee's same area.
BACK TO LAN'S POV (MOSTLY)
Only a week later, they were back again, and Zee went off once again, with the guard disappearing soon after. To be honest, Lan began to look forward to coming again, as she got to see Jars. They spoke the entire time the “peace ritual” was being conducted.
It became a weekly thing, and Lan began to feel odd towards Jars, as she had never felt for a redman. That is when she felt his large green right upper hand grab her chin and pull her up for a kiss, her first kiss, and she melted. Then she pulled away and ran, Jars begging her to return, apologizing.
Lan found herself in the ravine off to the side of the temple. She heard a strange noise of grunting and then she heard her sister. “She is in distress,” Lan thought, and ran to look over a large rock. Lan gasped at what she saw. The other guard, the smaller Thark was on top of his sister and pushing his enormous green cock inside her. At first she worried her sister was being killed, but then she saw her sister kiss the Thark, deeply and passionately. It made her have mixed emotions. Such unions were against the law, and her sister could be put to ****.
For the entire next few days Lan was torn about telling her queen about what she saw. If she did, the two Thark guards would be killed or at least taken off the temple detail. Then she couldn't see Jars. She felt shame at how the kiss made her feel.
The next trip to the temple was in the daytime. Susan emerged strong and ready for her afternoon speech. “My Queen,” she said grabbing a towel, “You have a nosebleed,” she reached up to blot the blue blood pouring from Sue's nose. “And I believe you have a head wound,” she pointed to the blue blood on Sue's forehead.
Sue had just spent the past hour upside down with Dak's huge cock in her mouth sawing in and out as he ate her pussy. The image was etched into the walls for eternity. As had all there copulation. In fact, the walls were now largely littered with the story of Susan and Dak's legendary love-making.
“I'm fine,” Sue told her and grabbed the napkin, cleaning herself. Soon, the three were standing on a podium before Helium, with shouts of “Sue the Storm” throughout the crowd.
Before she spoke, Lan cleaned some blue blood off the side of Susan's mouth. Zee laughed each time. The girl was never serious.
Lan, Zad Zek, Zee, and the city of Helium were shocked at Sue's speech. She spoke of equality for not just women and men, but Thark men and women as well. She spoke of an integrated society. Of true peace.
Days past, and some hated the idea, others cheered their queens new turn as a bringer of peace. They had fought no Warhoon, nor any Thark for weeks.
More visits to the temple occurred almost daily now, and Jars and Lan grew close. Zee and her new Crod, the other guard, went off daily into their spot. Sue did away with punishments for trade with the Thark. She made it illegal to discriminate on the basis of species. She even did away with punishments for inter-species relationships and marriage.
The city was broke into two factions, those that embraced it, and those that feared the change. Lan desperately wanted to believe her relationship with Jars would be accepted, but no one took that first step.
Then it happened, Sue stood before the city, and made the proclamation. She would accept the offer to be the Queen of Dak Kova, and the Queen of both Helium and the Warhoon, giving Dak Kovo the title of Jeddak of Jeddak, and take the name Sutar-Kovo of the Warhoon. This would unite the kingdoms. Sue assured people it was only in name, and nothing more.
Following this announcement, Thark men and human woman were seen out together everywhere. Strangely, few human men were seen with Thark women. A groupd of men went underground and disappeared, a rebellion formed even as the wedding was prepared.
Lan was the maid of honor and watched as Susan said “My Chieftan”, and the large green Warhoon Thark answered, “My Princess,” and the two were married. Sue, or Sutar-Kovo was collared and chained with the golden bands of redman's bride, but her body was adorned with the tatoo glyphs of a warhoon bride.
Zad Zek far away in the dead city of Lorthar, slammed his fist. “This is a mockery of our people!” He wanted to make sure this would be stopped. Many men had followed, and almost no women, save for the ones ****.
Lan walked by the royal chambers, she heard commotion, and realized both Sue and Dak Kovo were in the room, which was not like Sue, when Zad Zek was in the palace, she slept in a separate bed.
Lan peered into the candle light of the room, and saw Susan and the large Warhoon Thark....she gasped....
Sue was on her hands and knees impaled by the large Thark, her new husband. She was screaming “I AM SUTAR KOVO MATE AND BRIDE OF THE MIGHTY DAK KOVO! FUCK YOUR QUEEN MY KING!” They were consummating the marriage, which was something Lan had never imagined.
An hour later, Susan emerged and walked into her large bathroom, instructing Lan to join her. “So you saw?” Susan asked.
Lan turned her eyes down, “What do you mean?”
Susan put her hand on her shoulder, “It is ok my maiden, there is nothing wrong.”
“I just saw you and the Warhoon....mating....I don't know what I saw, I won't say anything.” Lan assured her.
Susan looked warmly at her. “What you saw was a mighty Thark and his bride having sex. It is natural and you can say it.”
Lan stammered, “But for so long it was forbidden!”
Sue fixed her hair in the large mirror, “That was the old way. And it is wrong. Red-men's cocks are not for sex. Believe me.” She put her arm on the the girls waist. “Find that guard you like, marry him. Enjoy. You have my blessing.”
Lan's heart rose and she skipped off to find her love. Before she left, Sue called to her. “If you need pointers on your wedding night, your sister and I are more than happy to help!”
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Invisible Woman in the Negative Zone
Trapped Alone in the Zone
Sue responds to a call in the negative zone, only to be cut off from Earth and her team. Alone and without help, what will she do? A companion piece to the Savage Land Story.
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Updated on Jun 14, 2025
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Created on Aug 23, 2016
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