Stopping Here

So this story got really held up and I'm stopping here, though as always hope I can come back to it. Unfortunately life got busy which leads to three problems:

1: This story creates large chapters. I'm very much a write everything in one sitting writer, and I haven't had the time to do that with parts these long, so it just ends up with nothing getting done.

2: The math. While it was way more complex then it needed, that isn't the main problem. Because I've had less time to write, when I come back to the story I have to refresh in my mind how everything works. Then if I don't end up getting anything written, I have to come back and refresh everything again.

3: I've mostly forgotten where I was going because of the long time away from it.

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There was a lot about this story I liked. It had strategy elements for reader decisions and there were multiple levels of randomness - would a sex scene happen, who would get hit, what would their reactions be to it? I'd definitely like to something like it again, just not quite as complicated as I made it.

I do also regret not continuing it because Buffy is in a real interesting place. She had hit the highest level of attachment to Dark Maledom and Dark Bimbo, so she's dumb, open to ****, and absolutely loves it.