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Chapter 216
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Mr Nice Guy
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Saint Elorae of the Bubble
Elorae's world had always been beige. Beige skies, beige towers, beige robes stitched from fabric that had forgotten what colour was supposed to mean. Even the people seemed muted, like candle flames smothered under a glass.
But not her.
From her earliest memory she had carried a fire that no one else could see. The ether could not touch her, could not feed on her, could not make her doubt. Scholars and scientists had studied her, tested her, whispered about her strange immunity. She was supposed to be dissected by their theories, but none of them ever found the reason. Elorae herself knew the truth. She had always known it.
She believed in Joey.
As a girl she spoke of him openly—her Joey, her radiant one, her beloved who would come for her someday. They called it delusion. Her parents worried. Her teachers spoke of institutions. So she learned silence, masking her certainty behind polite nods and beige robes. But inside, her faith never wavered. She knew she belonged to him. She knew she would serve him. She knew he would come.
And now—now he walked beside her, his hand warm in hers.
The bubble around them shimmered like glass, pushing back the mist. The ether recoiled from her conviction as it always had, but now there was proof, living proof. He was real. Joey was real, and he was here, and he was hers.
Tears threatened as they trudged forward. She wanted to fall to her knees and thank him with every breath of her body. She wanted to be beautiful for him, more beautiful than Serena, than Indira, than any of the others who had touched him. She would change herself if she had to. Her body, her clothes, her voice—anything to please him. Anything to keep him.
He looked nervous. His brow furrowed, his eyes scanning the fog where shadows slouched and writhed. They had been walking for hours now, their bubble a fragile island in an endless sea. Every time the shadows leaned closer, her grip on his hand tightened, and the mist slid back with a hiss. His doubt was dangerous. But she could carry enough belief for both of them.
"It's so far," he muttered once, voice low. "We've been walking forever."
Elorae smiled through her weariness. "My world is vast, my love. There were once transports to carry us, sky-rails and gliders, but the ether has devoured them. We must walk. I would not trust anything else."
He pressed his lips together, unsatisfied. She ached to ease his worry.
"Look," she whispered as a broken tower slid into the bubble, stone jagged but recognisable. "A landmark. We are on the right path." She brushed her shoulder against his, deliberately close, and added softly, "You are leading me. That is all the direction I need."
He glanced at her, startled, but she leaned in before doubt could rise. Her lips brushed his cheek, then his mouth, sweet and searching. At first he stiffened, rigid as a wall. She held there, trembling, her devotion poured into the kiss like prayer. Slowly—so slowly—he softened. His hand rose to her waist. The warmth of it made her dizzy.
When they parted she kept his hand in hers. Walking that way, their fingers entwined, filled her with a joy so sharp it hurt. The ether could have been clawing at the bubble, the world collapsing into fog, but she hardly noticed. She had what she had always dreamed of: Joey's skin against hers.
Hours passed. The mist grew thicker, hungrier, shapes pacing them in the haze. But then—the centre revealed itself.
The ruins of the city rose from the fog like a ghost, arches and walls jutting into their bubble of safety. For the first time, she felt sure. This was it. Vaelith would be here.
"Here," she said, tugging Joey to a halt. He leaned against a building, sliding down until he was seated on the cracked stone. His face was pale with exhaustion.
Elorae followed, but instead of taking her own place she lowered herself into his lap, her arms slipping around his neck. His breath caught, but he didn't push her away. She rested against him, cheek close to his, and gazed into his eyes.
This. This was what she had been made for. To believe in him. To hold him. To keep him steady against the void. Every moment of her life had pointed to this union, this quiet miracle.
"My Joey," she whispered, tears shining. "My Lord. You are my world."
And as the ether seethed just beyond their fragile circle, Elorae sat in his lap, certain that she had found paradise in the ruins.
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Mansplain
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The day after Joey's eighteenth birthday he discovers that something has changed. He'd been accused of mansplaining before, but now when he does it, women begin to think that he's right! Where did this power come from, and where will it take him? Let's find out! Note: all characters are over eighteen.
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