Roadmap, Change log (8/22/21), and Suggestions

Version 8/22/21 - Going to change the update to a date instead of a version number.

Took a bit of time away from this to rethink the variables I was using. Not any issue in what has already happened, but now that I have a few parts in I see a few problems that could emerge down the line and I was adjusting plans.

The starting day is now Saturday instead of Sunday.

Current Goal

Finish Day 1 and Day 2 (Day 2 will be considerably shorter than Day 1, but hopefully more variables based on the choices the player has made)

Next Step

Begin to work on the weekdays. These will involve random elements about what will appear on each play through and I am still working on the best method to do that given what Chyoa offers for coding.

Concerns

This is written in 2nd person. I always feel like my 2nd person writing is lacking. For erotic writing I prefer either 3rd or 1st from the female perspective. If the writing is lacking hopefully someone points it out to me. I might play with switching around perspectives as the story goes.

Is it feasible to actually finish this/am I giving the players the right amount of options to feel like they are making choices without getting overwhelmed.

Will it be too many characters to manage.

Right now the plan is for -

Three main female characters (Buffy, Cordelia, Willow)

Four male characters besides Xander (Angel, Oz, Wesley, Giles)

Three secondary female characters (I'll keep the names a surprise for now)

Three supporting female characters

The main characters appear by far the most frequently. The male characters and secondary appear about half as often. The supporting will be making rarer appearances.

Suggestions

If anyone has suggestions, either now or at any point of the story, feel free to let me know either here or by message. This is a large project and hopefully I'll get some feedback to go along with it. Right now it is in a very bare bones state, but hopefully that will improve soon.