Take Charlotte ("Live to Tell")

"Ok, that's fine, I think I need to show Charlotte that she's got the completely wrong idea about this." I directed the last comment to the couple on the couch.

"Oh, Brent, no she doesn't." Kaila became angry. "Imogene should have been your dad's problem, but he doesn't like responsibility."

"Do we... Do we have to..." I didn't want to have this fight now, but it seemed inevitable. "I'm sorry I listened to dad's offer."

"Yeah, and I know it would have saved me a lot of grief." Kaila nodded, and I saw her cheeks becoming flushed. "Goddammit Brent... every time."

I stepped quickly to her, pulling Kaila into a tight embrace. She crushed her head into my shoulder, and her arms came up around my back to pull herself tightly against me.

"I love you... dammit. You can't... He should be doing this." Kaila hugged me tightly. "Let's not fight in front of the kids." Kaila sighed. I noticed that Helen and Charlotte had stopped their activity and were looking on with concern.

"Oh, shit... baggage check." Charlotte blurted.

"And that's the kind of crap I really don't need right now, Charlie." Kaila growled against my shoulder. "Seriously, get her the fuck out of here right now. I do not need this shit."

[Note to the Reader: This ending is going to introduce Brent's younger Sister Imogene. It retains the feel of the original story, but adds in the **** elements that people voted for. ]