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Chapter 4
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24ward
What does she say?
Kim is trying on her wedding dress
"She's down at Estelle's, the wedding gown store downtown. She has a fitting today." she responds fearfully.
I decide to pay Kim a visit. I'm curious whether she'll be wearing white.
Within the hour I've found the shop. The windows are stuffed with mannequins modelling wedding dresses. I walk through the door, and the bell chimes.
Kimberly Karlssen is standing in the middle of the room in a flowing white off-the-shoulder wedding dress. Her blonde hair is up in a ponytail.
The shopgirl helping her with the dress is slim and pretty, with shoulder-length red hair and sparkling green eyes. She turns and eyes me fearfully as I turn the sign in the window from "OPEN" to "Closed" and pull the blinds.
"Hi Dwayne!" Kimberly says with a smile. "What a surprise to see you here! This is my friend Gwen, her mom owns this shop." Kim gives you a little twirl. "What do you think of my dress?"
What do I do?
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Big Man on Campus
My new life as a small-town superstar
A promising young athlete from the ghetto attends college in a whitebread midwestern town.
Updated on Apr 3, 2026
by 24ward
Created on Sep 25, 2005
by 24ward
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