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Chapter 23
by
Felicityjones97
What is James’ reply?
It’s detailed…
His reply came too fast, words jagged with desperation: *Everything. My hands on her hips, her back arching under me. My mouth where she needs it most until she forgets her own name.* A pause. Then: *all the things only a mature, real man can give her.*
The shower cut off upstairs. Silence seeped into the room, thick as the humidity clinging to my skin. I could picture James downstairs—knuckles white around his phone, jaw clenched tight enough to crack molars. His last message burned behind my eyelids: *mature, real man*. A deliberate contrast to every fumbling boy I'd ever shrugged off.
My fingers twitched over the keyboard. *Prove it*, I typed, then deleted. Too eager. Instead: *Boys her age just... take.* The lie tasted bitter—most had been pathetically grateful for any attention—but I needed the comparison. Needed him to spell out exactly how different his hands would feel dragging up my thighs versus some rugby player's **** pawing.

His reply came like a struck match: *I'd make her wait. Make her beg.* The typing bubble pulsed again. *I'd start by tasting every fucking inch—slow, thorough—until she was trembling. Then I'd stop. Wait. Let her ache.* My breath caught. That wasn't in any of the scripts I'd imagined. *Make her look at me. Make her say please.*
Upstairs, Bella's hair dryer whirred to life—a distraction I barely registered. My thighs pressed tighter together, fabric dampening as I typed: *And if she won't beg?* The challenge tasted electric on my tongue.
His response hit like a live wire: *Then she doesn't get to come.* I could almost hear the gravel in his voice, smell the sweat beading along his collar as he imagined denying me.
The hair dryer’s drone cut off abruptly upstairs. Footsteps padded past my door—Bella humming some TikTok tune, oblivious to the detonating tension beneath her childhood home’s roof. My thumbs trembled over the screen as I typed: *Cruel.* Then, before I could stop myself: *You’d really edge her until she cried?*
His reply came fast, the words bruising: *Not crying. Never crying.* A beat. The bubbles pulsed like a heartbeat. *Just squirming. Begging. Saying my name like it’s the only word she knows.* The specificity punched through me—this wasn’t some generic fantasy. He’d thought about this. Planned it. The way my hips would jerk when he pulled away, how my nails would score his shoulders as I pleaded. *Real men don’t make girls cry,* he added, softer now. *We make them shake.*

In another room, a cupboard door slammed. Sarah’s voice floated through, sharp with irritation about missing Tupperware lids. Reality pressed in—the scent of Bella’s vanilla shampoo lingering in the hall, the sticky heat of my phone against my palm. I typed one-handed, the other tracing idle circles on my inner thigh: *And if she’s quiet? What then?* The question was a dare. A whisper of lace riding up as I shifted on the bed.
James’ reply surfaced slowly, each word deliberate: *I’d make her louder.* The certainty coiled low in my stomach. *Open window. Neighbors home. Let her bite my shoulder to stay quiet if she wants.* My breath stuttered—imagining the sting of teeth in flesh, the reckless thrill of being overheard. His next message seared the screen: *But she won’t. Because deep down, she wants them to know who’s inside her, deeper than anyone has ever been and wider than she thought possible.*
The hairdryer kicked on again upstairs, drowning out Sarah’s muffled complaints about the dishwasher. My fingers itched to trail lower, but I **** them still—this was chess, not masturbation. *Sounds like you’ve thought about the logistics,* I typed, injecting deliberate amusement. *Does SilverDaddy87 have a spreadsheet for corrupting teenagers?*
His reply came faster than I expected, the words laced with something darker: *She’s the one dripping sunscreen on my patio furniture and bending over every fucking surface in this house.* The accusation sent a thrill up my spine—*yes*, but not just that. *She’s the one who moved in here and rewired my brain before I even knew her middle name.*
The hair dryer’s buzz faded upstairs. A floorboard creaked—Bella’s familiar tread padding toward her room. I held my breath, waiting for her door to click shut before typing: *Maybe she just wanted to see how far you’d go.* The sent message glowed like a lit fuse. Downstairs, Sarah’s voice rose in sharp frustration—another misplaced kitchen item, another domestic skirmish in their silent war.
James’ reply came in jagged fragments: *She knows. Christ. The way she presses against me ‘accidentally’—hips first, like she’s testing how hard I am.* My stomach swooped, remembering yesterday’s deliberate brush past him in the hallway, the stifled groan when my ass grazed his belt buckle. *And that fucking lip bite,* he added. *Every. Time. She. Speaks.* The spaces between words felt like teeth on skin.
Upstairs, Bella’s bedroom door clicked shut—the sound slicing through the humid air. I pressed my thighs together, fabric whispering as I typed: *Maybe she likes watching you try not to look.* The confession hummed through me, equal parts power and surrender.
James’ reply was instantaneous: *She’s winning.* The raw admission sent a shudder down my spine. *Every time she “adjusts” her top in front of me, every breathy little sigh when she stretches—it’s fucking ****.* The bubbles pulsed again, then: *And how she times it? Right when Sarah’s turned away, when Bella’s texting. Like she’s marking territory.*
Downstairs, Sarah’s heels tapped toward the garden—her afternoon Pinot Grigio ritual. The patio door slid open, then shut with a decisive click. Isolation wrapped around the house like a held breath. I typed slowly, deliberately: *What if she wants you to claim it?* The screen seemed to vibrate with the weight of the unsent message. I hit send just as the pipes groaned—Bella’s shower starting again, steam curling under my door
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Making of Felicity
A 19-year-old woman’s journey into the unknown with her friend’s father
Felicity has to move in with her best friend and her parents when her own parents move away after her A-Level exams, before starting university. At her friend’s house she discovers a desire for older men, through the channel of her best friend’s dad
Updated on May 13, 2026
by Felicityjones97
Created on May 4, 2026
by Felicityjones97
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