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Chapter 9
by Jim_jones
How does he feel about this
Remembering the note in his pocket, he shows it to her
As Damiana begins to rattle off the list of townsfolk who have been blessed (and cursed) by the Goddess, John quickly concludes that it seems that anyone who was a bully or simply a man over 5 feet tall has been shrunk, and from what she could gather the tallest bully now stands no more than 4 feet tall. Similarly, the women of the town have all grown a minimum of 6 inches and their and beauty increased substantially. While the criteria on which women seem to have been blessed is as yet a mystery, the tone of her voice makes it clear she believes herself to now be the most beautiful woman in town.
Looking around for a spare sheet of paper to write all of this down and see if he can piece together the puzzle, John feels the note that he left in his pocket. Pausing, before looking back to her smiling face, a sense of warmth and trust washed over him, deciding to trust her, John shows the note to Damiana.
“Well?” he asks excitedly. “I don’t get it” she says, “it’s just a blank piece of paper”.
“What!” he exclaims in a mild panic, taking the note back from her confirms that the writing is still there. Perhaps the same protection against it being visible to the Goddess prevents others from seeing it too? Still, John decides after a moment of doubt to read it out to her, figuring he has nothing to lose if she can’t read it anyway. The content is short but shocking and blasphemous, with Damiana frowning as she takes it all in. Her overall expression is otherwise impassive, but her eyes suggest a hint of an emotion, is it concern, or desire he sees. Either way, a wide smile suddenly breaks out on her face as she jumps to her feet.
“Well then, it seems perhaps the Goddess may have given you both a blessing and a curse” she declares. Grabbing a travel pack from its hook on the wall and shoving it into John’s hands, she announces with a clap “we must be off at once, there is no time to waste with a task this important!”
“It isn’t, it’s not… hey! Wait up!” John exclaims as she makes her way outside. “You don’t even know where you’re going” he calls out to her. Turning back, she proclaims with a giggle “well of course not silly, I have to grab supplies for the trip, I’ll meet you at the town square”. John is momentarily taken aback by the confidence of this new Damiana as she continues, “how many days away is this cave anyway?”
Unsure, he focuses as the note instructed and finds inside him a faint power, it’s hard to describe but by trying to pull on it he is able to conjure an image appear in his mind. Shocked, but not wholly surprised given the note, he realise he knows exactly where this cave is.
How far away is the cave?
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The God Creation Device
Your own personal reality
Inspired by a branch over in the Unending BE Addventure (https://addventure.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/1450/1450406.html) to which I’ve contributed a number of chapters. A grey rainy drizzle starts the day as John Doe is awoken for the third time so far by his alarm. Rolling over, he slaps his hand around aimlessly until the noise finally stops. Pushing himself up slightly, eyes reluctantly open, he sees that it’s now 8:20am and he will be late for work if he waits any longer to finally get out of bed. With a big yawn, stretching both arms up above his head, John swings around and lands with a rough thud on the thinly carpeted floor of his ramshackle house in the outer suburbs. Looking around sullenly, he reflects briefly on his situation. 25 years old, working in the same dead end retail job he’s had since he graduated from high school, his apartment is sparsely furnished with the cheapest furniture he could find. Walking over to the bathroom sink to prepare for the day, he sighs at his reflection, “another day, another dollar”. It was his daily mantra to acknowledge his situation and with a wry grin, he noted that it had kept him going this long. John was halfway through squeezing out a thin line of toothpaste to brush his teeth, mentally figuring out how to juggle buying a fresh tube around his upcoming rent until his next pay came through when he was interrupted by a knock at the door. Confused as to who could be paying him a visit at this time, and certainly not having had the funds to purchase anything delivered recently. John figured it was probably something being delivered to the wrong address. Trying to be a good neighbour, he rushed to the door, hoping to stop the mailman from making a wrong delivery. “Wait!” he yelled out as he swung the door open ready to explain the situation. To his incredulous surprise, nobody was there, just a small brown box left atop his doormat. Not immediately seeing a label on the box, John brought it inside to examine it. Setting it down on his table, spinning it every which way, there was no clue as to who it was intended for. Curiosity getting the better of him, he grabbed a knife and sliced through the tape sealing the lid shut. Inside, lying amongst a pile of shredded newspaper was an unusual looking device. No more than two inches long, cylindrical and with a repeating metallic pattern crisscrossing its surface, it was unlike anything he had ever seen before. Figuring that there must be some instructions left with the device, he rummaged around through the newspaper shavings again, finding a crinkled note. The instructions seemed pretty simple, hold the device and imagine a universe to find yourself transported there as an all-powerful deity. It seemed that whoever had sent the device to you had even included some suggestions, fictional worlds, our universe in a different time, and even make your own universe. The possibilities were endless. A couple of warnings were also included, although John figured he didn’t need to take much note of these. The device will vanish once used, only returning should you return to this universe (“yeah right” John thought, “no chance I come back to this life”), as you won’t have the device once you use it, you’ll need to use your powers to return home. Some failsafes had been put in place to protect you from various forms of harm or from getting trapped, but the note warns that the device is a one-of-a-kind test version so may have some bugs not yet fully worked out. Tossing the note over his shoulder, John quickly dons a simple pair of jeans and a t-shirt, clutching the device in his hand he imagines a universe to rule over.
Updated on Sep 12, 2024
by Jim_jones
Created on Aug 16, 2024
by Jim_jones
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