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Chapter 7
by Jim_jones
What form does her punishment take?
Around the town, people suddenly start to shrink
John looks around, and sees several people have suddenly started to shrink, recognising them mostly as bullies in the town.
Still reeling from the shock of seeing his mayor disappear, he’s surprised as everything around seems to grow a bit. Confused, he realises that it’s not everything else that’s growing, but him that’s shrinking. John’s not the only one affected by this sudden curse, looking around, he spots Emil, Finn, and Osric, a trio of bullies also shrinking down. He dimly recalls that they used to bully the shortest girl he knew, and figure that perhaps this is just a bit of divine retribution finally come to get them. Although he can’t figured out what he’s done to deserve to shrink himself.
Still slowly shrinking, John decides to return home, figuring he’d rather not potentially dwindle away to nothing where everyone can see. With a bit more effort than usual, he closes the door behind him and slides the bolt into place, the ungreased bolt making a satisfying clunk sound as it stops. With a moment to breathe, he pauses and finds that the shrinking has mercifully finally stopped. Using his meagre furnishings as a reference John estimates that he has lost somewhere around 11 inches of height leaving him exactly 5 feet tall.
Finding that this ordeal has taken a lot out of him and still feeling slightly crushed by the presence of the Goddess, he stumbles to the small kitchen on the side of the single room, grabbing a mug and filling it with water. As he greedily gulps down the sweet cool liquid, he allows some to splash on his face in a vain attempt to wake from this nightmare. Disappointingly, he merely finds himself even wider awake but notices at least that his clothes seem to have shrunk with him. Looking to the far wall at the small selection of other garments confirms that the rest of his wardrobe has shrunk too. Praising the Goddess for this small mercy, he begins to pace back and forth, the overwhelming presence of the Goddess fading away and allowing him to think straight again.
John pushes aside thoughts of where she may have gone from his mind, focusing on the issue at hand. As he does, he spots an out of place scrap of paper on the dining table. His interest piqued as he carefully lifts it up and reads it.
If you are reading this, I have given up my powers. I know not if I will remain aware of what was, or if that young Saethryda girl will have wiped my memory of who I was. If so, know that you used to be me, all powerful God of the universe, but have passed the torch to experience life under another’s thumb. Hopefully this new world will prove enjoyable, and the new Goddess makes interesting changes.
Having only a short time left as my power moves into Her, I have set up a way out if you so desire. The new Goddess will not be aware of this, but a safeguard left by the device that brought you here is now available. If you focus, you should be able to recall the location of a cave where I have left an artifact of great power, shielded from Her gaze. This artifact will allow you to transcend Her power. Should you wish to reclaim your position from Her, simply travel to this cave and reclaim your place in the divine hierarchy.
John rereads the note, shocked and confused he turns it over to see if there is more written on the back but finds only blank white paper. He doesn’t fully comprehend what the note is suggesting, from a young age he’s been raised knowing the Goddess as the one and only creator of all that is. But if what he’s just read is true then he can replace her?
What does our new mortal do?
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The God Creation Device
Your own personal reality
Inspired by a branch over in the Unending BE Addventure (https://addventure.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/1450/1450406.html) to which I’ve contributed a number of chapters. A grey rainy drizzle starts the day as John Doe is awoken for the third time so far by his alarm. Rolling over, he slaps his hand around aimlessly until the noise finally stops. Pushing himself up slightly, eyes reluctantly open, he sees that it’s now 8:20am and he will be late for work if he waits any longer to finally get out of bed. With a big yawn, stretching both arms up above his head, John swings around and lands with a rough thud on the thinly carpeted floor of his ramshackle house in the outer suburbs. Looking around sullenly, he reflects briefly on his situation. 25 years old, working in the same dead end retail job he’s had since he graduated from high school, his apartment is sparsely furnished with the cheapest furniture he could find. Walking over to the bathroom sink to prepare for the day, he sighs at his reflection, “another day, another dollar”. It was his daily mantra to acknowledge his situation and with a wry grin, he noted that it had kept him going this long. John was halfway through squeezing out a thin line of toothpaste to brush his teeth, mentally figuring out how to juggle buying a fresh tube around his upcoming rent until his next pay came through when he was interrupted by a knock at the door. Confused as to who could be paying him a visit at this time, and certainly not having had the funds to purchase anything delivered recently. John figured it was probably something being delivered to the wrong address. Trying to be a good neighbour, he rushed to the door, hoping to stop the mailman from making a wrong delivery. “Wait!” he yelled out as he swung the door open ready to explain the situation. To his incredulous surprise, nobody was there, just a small brown box left atop his doormat. Not immediately seeing a label on the box, John brought it inside to examine it. Setting it down on his table, spinning it every which way, there was no clue as to who it was intended for. Curiosity getting the better of him, he grabbed a knife and sliced through the tape sealing the lid shut. Inside, lying amongst a pile of shredded newspaper was an unusual looking device. No more than two inches long, cylindrical and with a repeating metallic pattern crisscrossing its surface, it was unlike anything he had ever seen before. Figuring that there must be some instructions left with the device, he rummaged around through the newspaper shavings again, finding a crinkled note. The instructions seemed pretty simple, hold the device and imagine a universe to find yourself transported there as an all-powerful deity. It seemed that whoever had sent the device to you had even included some suggestions, fictional worlds, our universe in a different time, and even make your own universe. The possibilities were endless. A couple of warnings were also included, although John figured he didn’t need to take much note of these. The device will vanish once used, only returning should you return to this universe (“yeah right” John thought, “no chance I come back to this life”), as you won’t have the device once you use it, you’ll need to use your powers to return home. Some failsafes had been put in place to protect you from various forms of harm or from getting trapped, but the note warns that the device is a one-of-a-kind test version so may have some bugs not yet fully worked out. Tossing the note over his shoulder, John quickly dons a simple pair of jeans and a t-shirt, clutching the device in his hand he imagines a universe to rule over.
Updated on Sep 12, 2024
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