The clock strikes midnight

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A heavy silence hangs in the air, thick with unspoken desires and a simmering tension that leaves you breathless. Minutes tick by, each one an eternity as you grapple with the confusing cocktail of emotions churning within you. Shame, frustration, and a flicker of defiance war within you.

Just when you think the night can't get any more surreal, Lulu jolts upright, her eyes gleaming with a mischievous glint. "Midnight," she declares, "The clock has struck twelve, darling. And you know what that means?"

She doesn't wait for an answer, a predatory smile twisting her lips. "Twenty-four hours of complete and utter obedience. Remember our little deal?"

The weight in your stomach intensifies, a bitter cocktail of humiliation and a flicker of morbid curiosity. She stands before you, a stark silhouette bathed in the pale moonlight filtering through the window. Her body, usually a source of comfort and desire, now feels distant, a canvas upon which another man's touch seems to linger.

She gestures dramatically towards her stomach, the milky splatter now a glistening sheen against her tanned skin. The image is both arousing and degrading, a confusing mix that sends a jolt through your already frayed nerves. "First order of business," she purrs, her voice dripping with a cruel amusement. "Let's see how well you follow instructions, shall we?" She again gestures towards her stomach, a single finger tracing a line down the creamy white expanse. "Start with the frosting."

Your throat tightens. The salty tang of her earlier encounter hangs heavy in the air, a constant reminder of your shortcomings. Lick her stomach? The very idea is a foreign concept, a bizarre request that throws you off balance. But the glint in her eyes brooks no argument. This is her game now, and you're a pawn caught in its cruel grip.

"Right," you manage, your voice hoarse.

A triumphant smirk spreads across Lulu's face. She throws her head back and lets out a peal of laughter, the sound both exhilarating and utterly humiliating.

"Excellent," she declares, her voice dripping with mock sincerity. "Now, on your knees, and get to work."

With a sigh that speaks volumes of your defeat, you lean forward, your tongue hesitantly brushing against the sticky saltiness. The taste is a strange mix of cum and sweat, a sickly combination that mirrors the turmoil churning within you. As your tongue explores further, you can't help but notice the way she writhes beneath your touch, a mixture of pleasure and something akin to disgust twisting her features. With each lick, you feel a piece of your dignity chipping away, replaced by a raw vulnerability you've never experienced before.

The humiliation intensifies as she guides you lower, her laughter echoing in your ears. You feel like a puppet on a string, your every movement dictated by her cruel whims. With every agonizing inch, a slow, humiliating pilgrimage towards her core, her moans turn louder, quickly turning into breathless gasps, a mix of arousal and something else entirely. Is it the humiliation you feel reflected back at you? Or perhaps a twisted form of satisfaction at your complete submission?

The line between pleasure and pain blurs even more as you reach the juncture of her thighs, the dampness a stark reminder of what came before. You hesitate, your tongue feeling heavy in your mouth. The very idea of licking the evidence of another man's touch is repugnant, a bitter pill to swallow. But the weight of her gaze, the challenge in her eyes, the memory of her cold, mocking smile, leaves you with little choice. You press on, your tongue a **** explorer in a landscape that should be familiar but now feels utterly foreign. As your tongue grazes the sticky surface, a wave of humiliation washes over you. Each deliberate lick is a stark reminder of your powerlessness, a surrender to her will. The salty taste turning sour in your mouth.

You meticulously clean every nook and cranny, your tongue a **** instrument of her desires. As you reach the single line of frosting that trails down her thigh, a perverse mixture of arousal and self-loathing washes over you. Each deliberate lick feels like a concession, a surrender to her dominance and a stark reminder of your perceived shortcomings.

Just as you're about to finish, a wave of her hand pulls you up. You meet her gaze, expecting a flicker of satisfaction or perhaps a cruel dismissal. Instead, her eyes blaze with a renewed intensity.

"That was barely a lick, darling," she purrs, her voice dripping with mockery. "Think of it as a taste test. Now, the real cleaning begins."

The implication hangs heavy in the air, thick and suffocating. You clench your jaw, the taste of frosting and humiliation a bitter cocktail in your mouth. You know what she's asking, a further descent into a territory that feels increasingly degrading. With a resigned sigh, you steel yourself for another round of humiliation. You lower your head once more, your tongue tentatively exploring the forgotten nooks and crannies. The frosting, a sickly symbol of misplaced sweetness, offers a stark contrast to the raw vulnerability you feel exposed to. "There," she breathes, her voice husky with barely contained desire. "Now, that's more like it." The world narrows down to the press of her heat against your cheek and the suffocating sweetness clinging to your tongue. The line between humiliation and a strange, warped sense of arousal blurs further. The way her hand digs into your hair, the urgency in her voice, it all speaks of a raw desire that transcends the power play she's initiated. You push aside the traitorous heat igniting low in your gut and focus on the task at hand. Your tongue becomes a tool, a **** instrument of her dominance. Every lick is a concession, a tiny chip away at the last vestiges of your pride.

As you meticulously clean her depths, with a cruel twist of your shared intimacy, Lulu's moans escalate. They're not the **** cries of earlier, but something deeper, a guttural sound that speaks of a primal need. The air around you grows thick with the scent of her arousal, a heady mix that both repulses and excites you. You can taste the sweetness of the elixir mixed with the salty tang of her sweat, a disturbing concoction that mirrors the confusing cocktail of emotions churning within you. With a gasp, Lulu pulls you impossibly close. Her body is a furnace against yours. The air seems to vanish, replaced by the frantic press of her groin against your face. Her hips begin a slow, rhythmic sway against your face, a deliberate provocation that sends a jolt through your already frayed nerves. She controls the pace, her moans growing louder with each thrust of her hips, each **** scrape against your body.

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You can barely breathe, not just from the physical exertion and partial suffocation, but from the suffocating intensity of the moment. As the intensity builds, a single, choked sob escapes her lips. It's a sound that cuts through the haze, a raw vulnerability that catches you off guard. The unexpected sob hangs in the air, a stark counterpoint to the grinding friction of her hips. It throws you off balance, a crack in the facade of dominance she's so carefully constructed. You hesitate, your tongue faltering in its ministrations.

"Don't stop," she gasps, the urgency back in her voice. "Keep going."

Her words are a whiplash, forcing you back into your role as unwilling servant. You clench your jaw and continue, the taste of her sweat and arousal a constant reminder of your humiliation. A moment later, her moans crescendo into a strangled cry, her body tensing beneath you. A wave of pleasure washes over her, a stark contrast to the tremor that runs through you. It's a strange mix of satisfaction and unease, a complex web of emotions you can't untangle.

A guttural moan rips through her, her body tensing and arching against yours. She clutches your head, her grip tight enough to restrict your breathing, but you fight through the discomfort, your sole focus delivering the pleasure she craves. Every fiber of your being screams in protest, but you press on, a **** soldier in this bizarre war of dominance.

A wave of pleasure washes over her, intense and all-consuming. Her hips grind to a halt, her moans fading into ragged breaths.

"A little longer," she commands, her voice regaining its earlier edge. "Just to make sure the job's done properly."

She lets out a shaky laugh, a hint of hysteria lingering in the sound. "See," she breathes, her voice thick with satisfaction. "That wasn't so bad, was it?"

You remain silent, the taste of frosting and her nectar on your tongue. A tense silence hangs in the air, broken only by her ragged gasps for breath.

Finally, with a sigh of what could be contentment or annoyance, she pulls you up by your hair. She leans in close, her lips brushing against your ear. "Good boy," she murmurs, the words laced with a cruel amusement.

Then, in a swift movement that catches you off guard, she closes the distance between your lips in a searing kiss. It's a clash of tongues, a battle for dominance that leaves you breathless. The kiss ends abruptly, leaving you reeling. Her lips are inches from yours, a triumphant glint in her eyes. She holds your face in her hand, not with a lover's touch, but with a grip that speaks of possession.

"Open your mouth," she commands, her voice a low growl that sends shivers down your spine.

There's no room for argument. You obey, a hollow feeling settling in your gut. She leans in close, her eyes narrowed with a cruel amusement. A forceful spray of spit lands squarely on your tongue, the salty wetness a shocking counterpoint to the lingering sweetness of the kiss.

The humiliation is a physical blow. You flinch, the taste revolting, a bitter counterpoint to the lingering sweetness of the kiss. Her eyes hold yours, searching for a reaction, a flicker of defiance. But all she finds is a numb acceptance, a shell of the person you once were.

She holds the position for a moment longer, the power dynamic laid bare. Then, with a satisfied smirk, she shoves you back onto the bed. You land with a thud, the air knocked out of your lungs.

The weight of her actions, both physical and emotional, presses down on you. You lie there, staring up at the ceiling, the taste of her spit a constant reminder of your complete and utter submission. The line between pleasure and pain has blurred entirely, replaced by a suffocating sense of powerlessness.