Marvel's Raucous Rhodan the Ratman: The Were-Bimbo

Susan Storm-Richards sat on her couch in the den outside the kitchen of the Baxter Building's living quarters for the Fantastic Four. She was perusing a five years old issue of "Woman", a magazine dedicated to women published by the Daily Bugle. The heroine was flipping through pages with her legs crossed in her blue uniform and rather nervously bouncing her boot covered foot. She kept rolling her slightly swollen tongue on the upper part of her mouth. A new strange sensation.

Her guest didn't seem to notice. Susan's best friend Crystalia Amaquelin Maximoff, the Inhuman mostly known as Crystal, paced with even more nerves behind her movements than Susan.

"Why don't you just sit down Crys," Sue sighed wanting Crystal to actually leave as soon as possible. She'd managed to send Ben and Alicia to San Francisco on Fantastic Four charity work. So they were gone for two weeks. Meanwhile, Reed had gone to the Fault with Blackbolt, Hank Pym, Tony Stark, T'Challa, Charles Xavier and even Doctor Doom. The self described "Illuminati" was attempting to stop incursions from the Cancerverse once more.

So now Sue just needed to get rid of Johnny. Which is where Crystal came into the picture.

"I shouldn't be doing this," Crystal said looking at her garb. She was wearing tight jeans, cowboy boots, and a tight red flannel shirt. On her head was a cowboy hat. "Is the shirt too tight," she asked buttoning up her top.

"You don't have to sleep with my brother Crys," Susan again reminded her, the blonde heroines head looking at a page of a magazine about mutant fashion. She kept rolling her tongue.

Crystal sighed. "Then why did you give us these tickets to the Pro-mutant Music Fest." It was a coveted concert in Madripoor with acts such as the mutant Rhapsody who played the violin and living single string thinga majig, human pop-star Sugar Kane, mutant rapper Ellegua, Henrietta Hunter (zombie version), Susan's own bestie and celebrity Darla Deering, and headlined by the one and only Lila Cheney.

Sue stated again, "you don't have to fuck Johnny, Crystal."

Crystal shot her head up at her friend's foul language. "Susan Storm!" She laughed crossing her arms. "I'm not gonna...I'm working it out with Pietro," the Inhuman beauty added, referencing her estranged husband.

"Riiiiiight," Sue sighed her foot moving even faster due to anxiousness. "Where is Johnny? Its just a few days!" She huffed. Any other time Johnny would have just gone with the clothes on his back.

Crystal changed the subject. "Is Dazzler really gonna be there?"

Sue finally looked up. "I have it on good authority she IS," the woman confirmed. Darla had informed Susan about a surprise duet with Lila Cheney to end the concert series on the last day.

"Why aren't you going again?" Crystal asked out of curiosity.

The Invisible Woman answered for the third time. "Reed's gone and someone has to be here on standby."

They then debated who was available to assist Susan since Reed, Johnny and Ben were out of town. But this wasn't the first time this had occured.

"I got She-Hulk, Iceman and Scott Lang on call." Sue informed her friend. Assuring he Inhuman that New York was covered.

Crystal laughed while she paced behind the couch. "You gonna fuck Scott...again."

Susan Storm-Richards shook her head. "We just went on a few dates when Reed was thought to be dead. You know that Crystal." She now laughed and adjusted her black rimmed glasses. "But yeah...poor guy wants to fuck me badly." It made Sue smile with pride.

Crystal couldn't believe how "naughty" Sue was since her last trip to the Zone. She'd come back more confident than ever, especially with her sexuality. "You're no fun..." Crystal attacked jokingly. "Here I am about to step out on my hubby with a weekend with your brother."

The Invisible Woman shook her head. "You don't have to sleep with Johnny." Sue reiterated once more. "But do me a favor...." Sue looked up and pulled her black glasses down to look in Crystal's eyes. "Use condoms."

Crystal smiled and blushed. "Uhhh...Johnny likes to uuhhhh...and uhhh...dont get me wrong....I do too, when he.....uhh..." she waved her hands trying to find a way to explain. She just said what she was thinking. "He gets really hot down there and the condoms kind of....uh...melt."

Sue winced. "Gross Crys."

In time to change the subject, Susan's phone buzzed on the bar table counter. Crystal walked over. "Who is this? It's like a text...but..." She picked up the phone. "The number has like letters and strange characters."

"Oh that means it's intergalactic. Probably Reed." Susan stated looking down at her magazine. "Do me a favor and read it to me." Sue added. "My code is Mouse!"

Crystal chuckled. "Weird." She flipped open the advanced intergalactic phone created by Reed. The Inhuman youth gasped and put her hand to her mouth. "Not Reed."

A confused Susan turned her head and watched as Crystal displayed the phone screen. A big pink, veiny fleshy tube was being held by a dark black clawed hand. "Huuuhhh," Sue now gasped, and suddenly sounded odd, "that's a cawwque" She blurted out looking at Crystal in a strange ditzy voice. She meant to say cock. The blonde stood up and rushed to Crystal.

"No shit," Crystal laughed and looked at the picture turning away from Sue. She chalked the accent up to Sue's swollen tongue. Sue claimed she must have an infection. "But who's...maybe you're more fun than I thought now." The young hot Inhuman viewed the picture. "Is that an Atlantean dick," she joked. The girl turned her head looking at the strange prick. "Or like a alien...maybe Badoon or Chituari....like it looks like a Chitu."

Susan shook her head. She used her powers to pry the phone from Crystal and floated it over Crystal's head and into her hands. "That number....that's like Gwenpool." Susan sighed. "She likes fucking with me."

Crystal chortled and rolled her eyes. "That bitch is nuts....she's not allowed in Attilan." She looked back to see Susan glancing at the phone. The orange haired heroine moved her head close to Susan's. "That's definitely alien dick...maybe Dire Wraith...or Deviant. Yeah a Deviant! Weird fucks."

Susan shook her head, again unable to control her outburst, she said in a strange accent. "That's a mutated rat cawwwk." Her voice high pitched and sounding like a floozy. "frum Countah Eaaath." She added trying to say 'counter Earth'. Susan coughed trying to regain her voice. "I mean I think."

Crystal gave Susan a glance that implied the Inhuman was weary of the Earth heroine. "Pretty specific knowledge about that caawwwk." The Inhuman mocked Sue's strange accent. "You know this 'mutated rat' from Cowwnter Uurth". Crystal joked again.

The Invisible Woman was still staring at the picture. "I mean...sawt of," the accent came out. "I think Gwenpool fawks him." She exaggerated the word "fucks". She couldn't contain the strange accent.

Crystal was certain now that something was going on. She watched her friend stare at the phone like zombie. The phone in Sue's hand buzzed and Crystal again saw her friend gasp.

Sue's eyes went wide. "Oh my fuckin gaaawd. He's got a caawwk ring." She lifted the phone to show her friend the newest picture, the fleshy pink cocktip with a gold ring slicing throught it. The ring had a red jewel at its center. "It's huge". Sue gazed at her phone bringing it down to her view.

"The ring or the dick?" Crystal asked laughing.

The blonde beauty now laughed. "Both...he's got a huge cawwk but I mean," she pointed to the phone. "With that ring it's....." Susan stopped and gasped. "That's a fawkin Vontsalvant jewel!" Susan shook her head. "This fawker has gawn too faaah this time. That one gem could power Uuurth for yeaaahhs!" Her accent was overtaking the girl.

Crystal craned her head. Now eager to know what was happening.

Suddenly a voice spoke up. "OK Crys," a male voice spoke. "I'm ready." The girls turned to see Johnny in his own jeans, cowboy boots, cowboy hat and flannel walk up with a bag. He helped Crystal grab her own bag and bid farewell to his sister.

Crystal looked at Sue with low eyes. "When we're back you and I are talking Mutated Rat caaawwk." She joked once again insulting the strange accent.

Susan blushed and Johnny shrugged. "Whatever that means." He turned towards the sliding doors to the hallway. "I'm taking Rosebud II," he remarked, speaking of a Fantasti. Four vehicle.

The Invisible Woman helped Crystal get her own bag. "Have fun," she stated and helped her brother and his sometimes lover leave the living quarters. Sue made sure she locked the sliding doors. She was alone. Finally. She was about look at her phone again, when she realized what her brother had said. "ROBERTA?" Sue called. "Lock vehicle bay 13," she added.

"Done Mrs. Richards," the soft feminine voice of the Baxter Building's robotics AI assistant responded after executing Sue's order.

'Rosebub' and 'Rosebud II' were time sleds. Johnny didn't need those. Luckily, as Susan watched from a console, her brother took a regular Fantaticar.

Sue sighed in relief. All alone. She picked her phone up. The girl texted "how did you get this number".

"Who cares," was the texted response. "I need my cock sleave...get here!"

Susan actually giggled and her knees went weak. Her pussy had swelled since that first photo. Her pussy dripped and she wondered if Crystad had noticed her holding her legs together to try and stop the dripping pussy.

She again glanced at the photo of the cock ring. She couldn't believe what the gem was. It wasn't really red but a glowing pink. It was a Crystal of Vontsalvant. A gem of immense power. More powerful than Annihilus's control rod. So much so, that the villain always wanted to acquire one.

The young heroine texted her paramour once more. "That gem could power this planet for decades dude! Lol!"

She got a quick response. "Right now all it's gonna to is get stuffed up that tight twat of yours!"

Sue actually laughed out loud, and then quickly made her way to the docking bays following the path her brother had taken minutes ago.

A broken up Fantasticar, with single person pods was in the corner. Susan fired up one and prepared to leave. But before she did, she used her powers to zip her suit down, while she did this she unzipped her boots and kicked them off. With her boots off she then stepped out of her uniform using her powers to assist her. She raised a hand and used her **** powers to hang up her Fantastic Four outfit near the computer console to her right. She stood in her white panties and bra. The girl didn't need clothes where she was going. Not those clothes. She chose a cheap pair of panties. They'd be destroyed soon anyways.

The half naked heroine stepped onto the Fantasticar and opened the doors at the end of the small runway exposing the New York sky. As quickly as she could, the Invisible Woman flew off, making herself and the flying car invisible when the vehicle cleared the building.

Her destination was Louisville Kentucky. Normally such a flight from New York to Lousiville would take two hours, but with the Fantasticar she just needed to reach the Stratosphere. The car shot out thr building and then she guided it up. When she passed the clouds she dropped her invisibility. The heroine then leveled off and she hit the accelerator button. The Fantasticar whooshed forward at a rate close to 800 miles per hour. The trip would last approximately twenty minutes.

Below her, the planet passed by. While many would never get such a view of Earth on the tip of Space, Susan yawned, taking such wonder for granted now. She kept a new field up around herself due to low temperatures. And she pushed the accelerator even further. It made her sick, but she arrived within ten minutes.

The Invisible Woman landed the vehicle outside a large building. The half naked woman exited the craft and pressed a button on her wrisr Comm link. The Fantaticar behind her suddenly took off, programmed to return on its own.

Susan found the entrance that read "Warning SHIELD facility, entry only for SHIELD personnel! Violators will be prosecuted!"

It paid to be a secret SHIELD operative, Sue thought and quickly dialed in a code on the console next to the door. It was a skeleton key code. A light turned green and the door opened with a hiss.

Susan walked down a hallway, bypassing cameras that she knew were off. This building was the former home of "Action Pack" the Kentucky based superhero team created by the 50 state initiative following the Civil War of heroes. It was long abandoned and went unused. Sue wasn't certain where Action Pack was located any longer. Probably training at Camp Hammond, Sue surmised, home of the Initiative and its trainees.

She knew which room her quarry was in. It still shocked her when she gazed on the small round device. A Negative Zone portal. Each Initiative Team was given one and trained on its use. A portal to another dimension. Sitting next to the kitchen, and living room. It still made Susan laugh. Reed had the Four's portal on its own floor, protected by feet of lead metal lining. This is why the Initiative failed. Action Pack themselves had accidentally activated this portal.

Sue knew that this particular portal would not be tracked unless someone came to this facility and checked. Essentially, no one would know it was opened.

The Invisible Woman worked the computer and the portal began to spin. A purple swirling tunnel of energy emerged

Portals observed from outside looked more like elaborately lit tunnels. The Invisible Woman checked the time. Six-thirty PM on a Thursday night. Johnny wasn't going to be home until Sunday night. Ben and Reed weren't due for a week. That meant she had seventy two hours in the Zone. At 2 weeks per hour, Susan could conceivably live 2.7 years in the Zone before anyone even knew. She was giddy with excitement.

However, she hesitated at the entrance of the portal. Her cheat heaved from heavy breathing. For most, the transition to the Negative Zone wasn't that unpleasant. Aside from disorientation, and the occasional upset stomach, there was no trauma like g-**** or molecular reconstruction. In fact, some reported a pleasant buzzing sensation throughout the body.

Not for Sue. The Leader, who was now based in the Negative Zone, and a client of Sue's paramour, had given her a Gamma infused salve. It changed her appearance so that the Proctors of Annihilus wouldn't find her. His Ruthless hunters could read biometrics and DNA data. To avoid detection, AGAIN, Sue had used the salve to change her appearance and DNA, even if slightly to avoid biometric readers. The Leader had warned her that continued use would have permanent consequences.

She's simply used too much. And when her positively charged electrons, protons and neutrons were hit with Negative energy, Susan Storm-Richards changed.

With a deep breath, the blonde beauty stepped forward. One bare foot stuck inside the swirling tunnel, over the threshold, and that was all that was needed. Susan was pulled into the tunnel.

For a moment she thought she'd be spared, but she suddenly felt her stomach tighten in pain. She held her stomach seeing a new shredded six-pack of muscles form. Her arms became toned and larger in musculature. Her ass grew and hardened, causing her panties to rip.

"Yaaarrrrgh," Sue shrieked and fell into a fetal position. Her body floated through the Distortion area. Sue felt her jaw stiffen and become more defined. Her cheekbones rose. Her legs became thighs...thick thighs of muscle.

"My fawwking lips," Sue shouted holding her plumping lips which became thick and fat. Her voice changed to a high-pitched shrill octave. Like Janice from Friends crossed with Minnie Mouse and/or Princess Peach from the Mario games. Sue hated it.

She didn't understand why the salve changed her voice, or her legs and ass. She didn't even put them on her legs.

It's because Sue was wrong about why these changes were occurring. In fact, her rat lover used the salve to enhance his prick. It's how Sue found out about the substance. The rats Gamma infused cock had sperm irradiated with Gamma energy.

His cumming inside her, caused her lower body to strengthen. His cumming on her ass and stomach had the same effect. Further, the rat enjoyed putting his cock between her tits.

For that her tits would harden and increase in size. The fabric of her bra shredded as this occured, and her rock hard tits came free.

Her facial changes came from facials. Her throat changed from constant cock sucking of a Gamma infused prick.

It strengthened her already sturdy comically endowed body. Sue, in the Negative Zone, was now near invulnerable from the knees up. She didn't know that yet. She was also strong. She didn't know that either.

Her hair darkened and strengthened from constant Gamma cum blasts.

The biggest changes to her were undetectable on the surface.

Constantly taking gamma cumloads on her head caused changes to her brain. Her nucleus accumbens orbitofrontal cortex the area responsible for pleasure and reward seeking was enhanced.

Her prefrontal cortex and the basal ganglia had shrunk making her more apt to risk taking. Further it dulled her complex decision making.

The same occured to the frontal lobe, which shrank causing a hit to complex thought and self control

The Amygdala, hippocampus, thalmus and hypothalmus changed as well. Her fear and apprehension weren't nearly as strong.

But areas of the thalmus responsible for arousal grew triple in size.

As did the ventral tegmental area responsible for experiences of love and the release of dopamine the pleasure **** created by the brain. It was firing on all cylinders.

The parts of her hypothalmus controlling her libido spiked in activity. Further brain **** like dopamine, known as oxytocin and vassopressin were being constantly pumped into her via the heightened hypothalmus.

When she exited the Distortion area, her changes were complete. She flew her mostly naked body to a floating asteroid to rest. She stood up and streched, ripping away the last pieces of panties.

"Sue Staawm, the Weeaaah-Bimbo." She chuckled. She called herself a were-bimbo. Quite frankly, she was. She was a dumber, hornier, tighter bodied version of herself. 'Very horny, and pretty fucking dumb', Sue would joke.