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Chapter 2 by fantaghiro
It was:
Katherine, your 50 year old mother
Author's note: I'm shocked that this story has got any attention after so many years. Given the renewed interest, I'm cleaning up some of the old branches. This one was long enough that I'm just created a new branch instead. I'm also switching to 3rd person POV so I can show other characters' inner thoughts. I might miss some edits in that change (from the old branch 2nd person POV).
Gerry froze in the doorway.
His mother, Katherine, and his fiancée, Jackie, stood in the center of the room, staring at one another with an intensity that made the air feel brittle. Neither spoke. Neither even blinked. It was as though some silent revelation had cracked open between them, and Gerry had stumbled into the aftermath.
“Mom? Jackie?” he asked cautiously, stepping closer. “Are you alright?”
No response. They didn’t even look at him. Jackie’s hand rose, almost of its own accord, brushing along Katherine’s cheek, fingertips trembling as though she expected her hand to pass straight through. His mother mirrored the gesture—her palm flattening gently against Jackie’s jaw, sliding down as though tracing a memory on unfamiliar skin.
Gerry’s stomach tightened. Something was wrong.
Jackie caught Katherine’s wrist suddenly, guiding her toward the mirror against the wall. The two women stopped in front of it, standing shoulder to shoulder, eyes darting frantically between their reflections and each other, as though the mirror might give them answers that their own bodies could not.
“Okay, what the hell is happening?” Gerry demanded, crossing the room. He seized Jackie lightly by the shoulders, trying to snap her out of whatever fugue had taken hold. “Hey. Snap out of it!”
Her gaze tore away from the mirror, and for the first time she looked at him. The expression on her face nearly made him recoil—familiar and utterly alien at once. Jackie's lips parted, but the words that came out carried the weight and cadence of someone else entirely.
“Gerald… something very strange has happened.” Her voice quavered, then steadied. “I’m not Jacqueline. I’m your mother.”
The world seemed to tilt beneath his feet. He stumbled back a step, blinking rapidly. “What? What are you talking about? Is this some kind of joke?” His voice broke between disbelief and fear.
Jackie—no, the woman wearing Jackie’s face—looked at him with a sorrow that pierced him to the bone. “No. It’s not a joke. I wish it were.” She turned toward Katherine, who stood silent and wide-eyed, still drinking in her own reflection as though trying to find herself in it. “Jacqueline? Are you… are you alright, dear?”
Katherine blinked, finally dragging her gaze from the mirror. She looked down at her hands, then over the curve of her body, then back at Jackie with a bewildered, childlike expression. “Yes, I think so. But… I’m not dreaming, am I? I’m… really you.”
“Yes,” Jackie whispered from inside Katherine’s mouth. “It would appear so.”
A cold shiver ran through Gerry. He shook his head sharply, as though he could scatter this surreal scene into smoke. “Alright, that’s enough. Both of you. This has gone far enough—”
“Gerry, stop.” The one who looked like Jackie cut across him, her tone firm but pleading. She stepped forward, gripping his arm with **** familiarity. “You know us better than that. You’ve always been perceptive, open-minded. Look closer. _Look _at us, carefully. Can’t you tell we’re telling the truth?”
Her eyes searched his, Katherine’s gaze trapped in Jackie’s face, and for the first time Gerry saw it: the way she held herself, the exact timbre of her voice, the weight of years and memories looking back at him. His mother, inside Jackie’s body.
And across from her—his fiancée, inside his mother’s.
His throat went dry.
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Wedding Day Swap
Your bride swaps bodies with someone you know
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! Premise: You are Gerry (Gerald) Duncan, a 28 year old software developer in good physical health. Today is your wedding day - you are marrying Jackie (Jacqueline) Driscoll, a beautiful woman you've dated since college. Due to an accident with a mysterious wedding gift, Jackie switches bodies with another member of the wedding party shortly before the wedding. The three of you decide to keep the swap secret and go through with the ceremony and honeymoon, hoping to find a way to reverse the transformation later. Themes: Throughout the story the characters will have to deal with the ramifications of the swap. Can Gerry and Jackie carry on their relationship secretly, hiding the swap from everyone else. How will they handle the honeymoon? The early days of the marriage? How will the person in Jackie's body handle this? What about Gerry & Jackie's hopes to quickly have a child? One aspect of the transformation makes the victims comfortable in their new bodies, i.e. they won't go crazy at the shock of the change. I leave it up to the individual author whether or not they gain anything else from the switch (access to skills, memories, knowledge, personality traits, etc.).
Updated on Oct 30, 2025
by fantaghiro
Created on Jan 17, 2021
by fantaghiro
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