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Chapter 70
by
zonefire
How could you possibly mess this up?
Just go with the flow
“Come in, come in!” Kali ushered you both into the hotel room. “Can I get you something to drink? Tea, coffee, water?”
“I wouldn’t mind some tea.” Blake replied.
“Tea’s fine.” You assured her.
“Jaune… you hate tea.”
Kali laughed and you blushed as Blake’s words. She knew you really well by now. Since she trusted you enough to share everything, obviously she has been observing you too. Kali boiled some water for you two, humming happily as she did so. When she was finished, she pushed a cup to each of you. Sipping it, you had to admit it wasn’t bad… after putting in a lot of sugar. Soda was still better.
“I have so many questions to ask you two!” Kali exclaimed, unable to hold it any longer. “Blake told me you two got together, but how long? What have you done? How did you two get so close?”
“Today WAS supposed to be our first official date.” Blake murmured.
Kali’s eyes widened in horror.
“I’m so sorry! I didn’t realize. I’ll make this up to you. Next time you go out, it’s on me. Dinner, movie, the works.”
“It’s…” You struggled to say fine. Honestly, you were a little disappointed you didn’t get to go out with your sexy Faunus girlfriend. After some samples of what laid in store for you, it was very disheartening. “…understandable. Blake’s been gone for a while and I know you missed her. She’s missed you.”
Blake’s face flushed and she looked away.
“You’re a sweet boy,” Kali’s smile reminded you of Blake’s. Bright and warm when it was honest. “I’m glad she was able to find someone like you. After… her ex…”
“Let’s not speak of Adam.” Blake told her. “Jaune’s a million times better than he will ever be.”
“I’m proud of you for being able to say that. Blake.” Kali continued. “Like I told you over the phone, your father and I do miss you, but seeing you achieve your dream here, that’s really all we could ever want.”
You tuned them out a little to try to respect their privacy. Blake began to open up to her mother and the two of them began to delve into deeper conversation. Your eyes meanwhile, traveled along the older woman’s body. She was hot, no denying it. Kali was like an aged to perfection Blake. Without those age lines on her face, she could easily pass for a twenty something year old. The marks did little to diminish her beauty. Thoughts of claiming her with the marker began to creep into your head.
You tried to push it down. This was for Blake.
“Jaune?” You turned to see Kali addressing you now. “Thank you for letting me talk to Blake for a little bit, but I have something important to ask you.”
“Oh… er sure?” You rubbed the back of your head nervously. “What is it?”
“Want to see Blake’s baby pictures?”
“YES!”
“MOM!”
It was too late as Blake lunged across the table to grab Kali’s Scroll. The woman was much too fast or maybe just use to this, as she yanked her arm back and Blake skidded off the edge of the table. Before you could even react to this hilarious situation, Kali was beside you, scrolling through her favorite pictures.
“This is her in the bath with her favorite toy,” Kali reminisced fondly. “She had it until she was five.”
It took every ounce of restraint to not burst out laughing and you had to slam a hand over your mouth. Baby Blake was splashing in the tub with a large rubber fish in her hand.
“Wow…” That was all you could say.
“Here’s one of my favorite,” Kali continued, swiping to the next picture. A tiny Blake was clutched to Kali’s leg, wearing a pineapple costume. “She was so shy to get on stage.”
“Blake? Shy?” You couldn’t resist laughing. “Not her.”
Blake was glaring at both of you across the table, her face crimson. You felt a little bad for her. Your mom did this to you too with strangers and it was so embarrassing to see your childhood on display. At the same time, you WANTED to see all this. It gave you a peak into Blake’s past. It was also hilarious, but mostly to learn about Blake’s past. No matter who asked, that was your story.
“Maybe that’s enough.” You finally relented, finding your conviction.
“No… it’s fine,” Blake sighed, standing up as her protests had fallen on deaf ears. “I’m going to use the restroom so I don’t have to see this.”
You raised a hand and open your mouth to protest, but she was already gone. You sighed and slumped into your seat.
“I think we upset her.” You mumbled.
“The fact you focus on that proves you’re a good fit for her,” Kali declared softly, causing you to look over at her. “Someone who only cared about pleasing me and not her doesn’t deserve my baby.”
“So this was all a test?” You questioned, completely caught off guard.
“Sort of?” A sly smile formed on Kali’s lips. “It might also be a little bit of **** for her running away and letting me worry about her wellbeing.”
You gulped. Kali was a lot more conniving then you realized.
“Seriously though,” Kali’s voice grew soft and warm again. “I haven’t seen or heard Blake this happy for a long time. Her ex emotionally abused her and it was hard for her to open up to anyone. From what she told me, I have you and her partner Yang to thank for this. I would like to meet her sometime. I also see the way she looks at you, Jaune. She adores and trusts you completely. The fact she told you about her time in the White Fang proves this.”
“When we first talked about our past, we were both kind of ****.” You explained nervously. “In a way, we comforted each other. I was in a similar place with my family as she was. Once she meets my mom, I can assure you, she’ll have her **** for this.”
“You really are a sweet boy,” Kali smiled, patting his cheek. “If I wasn’t married and maybe a little younger, I would just eat you up.”
Your ears were burning as she suddenly hugged you. You would feel her chest against you in the tight embrace. The problem was, you couldn’t concentrate on that. Something made your heart stop as you looked over Kali’s head. The girl had been waiting for the perfect moment. What would be better after the MILF said she wanted to eat you?
Neo had appeared and was smirking, a marker in her hand. It was pointed at Kali and she made some wiggling motions in the air. Neo was telling you that the two of you should write something on the woman. The good part of you wanted to say no, but the other half of your mind screamed at you to take this hot MILF under your control. You could even let Neo write something instead. Her ideas were probably better than yours would be.
Kali hadn’t noticed the silent voyeur yet and Blake hadn’t returned. The timing was perfect.
What do you do?
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Written Ownership
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A lucky protagonist discovers that they have the ability to claim ownership over anything or anyone by writing their name on it.
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