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Chapter 8 by hewhoismany
What does Bonnie do now?
Bonnie turns Derek into an overweight nerd.
(Originally written by Mr.Domino on Writing.com)
"Uh, like hellloooooo? I totally said my name was Bonnie, not Jayden!" Bonnie said with a giggle that sent off warning bell's in Derek's mind. The Jessica personality within him knew that when Bonnie giggled like that, she was upset and playing it off as 'like, no big thing'.
"Listen, you're Jayden, my best friend! We're supposed to be guys! And, like, smart! I totally don't want to spend the rest of my life as, like, a bimbo!" Derek pleaded once more, but his last minute appeal fell on deaf ears as Bonnie's eyes narrowed and a frown formed on her pretty face.
"I'm NOT a bimbo! Like, if you don't want to be hot and popular like me, then you can just totally just hang with the losers!" Bonnie said in her Mean Girl voice, and Derek felt his body changing as the coin flashed. The JEssica part of him screamed in terror as she faded away.
Derek immediately felt heavier, and warmer. Looking down at himself he now saw that he was wearing a plain sweater that was draped over several layers of fat that now coated his body. His breasts were still large, though they lacked the firmness that his Jessica body had, now simply bloated from fat. Derek felt a pinch at his wasitline and looked down, seeing a pair of slightly too small jeans materializing across his plump legs and cradling what he knew was a massive posterior. Where once had been designer sandals were now just a pair of ladies's Converse sneakers.
Derek turned to look at his newly enlarged rear and was startled by the mane of impossibly curly, frizzy brown hair that slid into view as he turned. Picking at it with a pudgy hand that that no longer had fabulously manicured and painted nails, he could feel that in place of the silky smooth texture that his hair had while Jessica was now rough and course and barely maintained. He pushed the pair of thick rimmed glasses back up on his nose without even realizing it, and turned to stare at Bonnie as new emotions flooded him.
Gone were the flirty, airy, fun thoughts and desires of Jessica, now the cynical and bitter thoughts of Tabitha took their place, melding with Derek's own in a way that he wasn't sure if he could tell where he ended and Tabitha began. Tabitha liked geeky things, video games, science fiction, and definitely fantasy, and knew more than Derek ever did about Physics. That was the whole reason that, in this version of reality, Bonnie was even being seen with Tabitha, the two girls being enemies. Predator and prey. Bonnie was here at Tabitha's house to tutor her and get her science grades up in return for extra credit, and unofficially so that Bonnie would lay off Tabitha and the rest of the loser girls that she hung out with a little bit.
'Oh god' Derek thought as he looked up Bonnie, realizing that his new body was barely five feet tall. Bonnie smiled evilly with her perfect white teeth, and suddenly Derek was aware of the set of braces and a retainer in his mouth.
"Like, that look totally suits you! You could have totes been a hottie, but now you're a nottie!" Bonnie giggled at her own poor joke as she retrieved a small mirror from nearby, flipping it towards Derek's face, "Here, take a look at yourself 'girlfriend'!"
Derek stared at his new reflection. His face was chubby and absolutely covered in freckles and several pimples and acne. A piggy nose and mouth that seemed just a little too large for his new face and beady eyes that seemed larger because of the glasses. The massive glasses dominated his face, and he quickly pulled them off, only to have the world go entirely blurry to where Bonnie, just two feet away, was a brightly colored blur. Derek slipped the glasses back on and the world swam into focus once more.
"Why?" Derek said, his voice a feminine croak, throaty, husky, not at all like the sing-song perfect voice he had as Jessica, "We're...we're supposed to be friends!"
"Like L O L" Bonnie said, her laugh a cruel cackle, "As if! I would never, like, be friends with you! I'm totally was just here to get my grades up, you dork! But now I like, totally have a party to get to! You could have gone and we could have hung out but now you get to, like, be here all alone! But hey, I'll totes keep my eye out for someone for you! Maybe some other loser than can, um, like what were we talking about? Oh yeah! Like, some other loser that can get caught in your gravototional pull!"
And with that, Bonnie turned and sashayed out of the house with the Coin, leaving Derek/Tabitha alone and on the verge of tears.
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Change in the palm of your hand
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