Chapter 23
by
Moot
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Baby Nessie's first official commercial!
Leonard was the one to begin the commercial, he started narrating. "Have you ever forgotten to change your child's diaper? Ever had that shock when you see the rash that's formed?" He narrated. One of the cameras was hooked to a moving stand, which moved it over and closer to the changing table. Vanessa was having none of this, so she began screaming as loud as she could. "Poo poo! Dirty meanie skungle bungles!!" She yelled along with a bunch of unintelligible words.
"CUT!" The director yelled, holding her hands out wide looking displeased. "Baby Nessie! Only whimpers!" She demanded. "Make me!" Vanessa responded, well aware of how childish that response sounded. "Sir what are we gonna do about this?" The director asked Steven, who had his hand pressed against his mouth in a thought pose.
He turned to Carol with a potential idea. "Are you still doing that thing where you carry the silencing pacifier wherever you go?" He asked her. Carol gleamed, his idea was perfect. "Yes! You never know when you might need it!" She tussled about in through her lab coat pockets. She pulled out a pink pacifier and handed it to Steven, who gave it to the director.
The director walked over to the changing table and shoved the pacifier into Vanessa's mouth mid scream. Shocked, Vanessa tried to spit the pacifier out and continue her outburst. The rubber piece in her mouth expanded and wrapped around her cheeks, making it impossible for her to spit it out. "Mmphphh!!!" She whimpered. The entire production crew clapped and nodded their heads in unison. "From the top!" The director yelled.
The man with the clapperboard slammed it once again. "Stork Industries Diaper Rash Cream commercial. Take two." He said to the camera. "Have you ever forgotten to change your child's diaper? Ever had that shock when you see the rash that's formed?" Leonard said once again. "Well have no fear! For we are here! To make your life much easier!" A spotlight shone toward the right, revealing Gloria. She was holding the white diaper rash cream tube, which the camera zoomed in for in the dolly camera effect.
Gloria walked over to the changing table, as the spotlight followed. "The all new Stork Industries Diaper Rash Cream will get rid of those nasty rashes!" Leonard continued to narrate. Gloria untaped Vanessa's diaper, revealing her actual rash above her pussy. Gloria pulled an overdramatic shocked face, with her hands next to both cheeks. She then quickly opened the tube and squirted a decent amount on the tips of her fingers.
"The cream is easy to use! Simply squirt some on your fingers, and rub the cream all over the necessary parts of your child!" Leonard narrated. Vanessa squealed behind her pacifier as Gloria's cold fingers touched the skin above her pussy. She was slightly aroused, as the woman massaged her pussy and made sure to rub enough cream all over it.
The arousal soon turned into agony, as it started to sting. The rash felt unbearable, as Vanessa wriggled about. "Don't worry about harming your child, our product has been proven to be completely unharmful!" Leonard ironically said, as Vanessa clenched her eyes in pain. Once Gloria finished rubbing the cream, she redid Vanessa's diaper and undid her strap.
Unable to move her legs, Vanessa was powerless to stop the woman from lifting her up from under her armpits. Her legs dangled as she was hoisted up and presented to the camera. Gloria removed the pacifier with her free hand. "I'm not saying it. I'm not saying it. I'm not saying it." Vanessa muttered under breath over and over again, red faced from all the embarrassment that had been filmed.
Gloria leaned her face close to Vanessa's ear. "What's your name?" She asked. "Me Baby Nessie and I'm two!" Vanessa uncontrollably yelled at the camera, holding her two fingers up. The lights all suddenly switched off. "Stork Industries; We look out for our bundles!" Leonard finished the commercial. A huge round of applause and cheering erupted the production room.
Steven and Emily rushed over to the main stage when the lights came back on, both taking a bow. Leonard gave Steven the microphone. "Thank you all for performing a masterpiece for Stork Industries! A revolutionary new age has begun for our company, and it begins, and evolves around Baby Nessie!!" He celebrated with the rest of the crew. Emily shaked Vanessa's right cheek, teasing her while everyone else cooed.
Vanessa stared straight ahead, trying to tune it all out. The embarrassment was too much, her career was over. She'd officially completed her first commercial for her competitor. Steven had won, he'd removed the opposition entirely, but he was far from finished. Vanessa had a long journey of humiliation ahead!
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