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Chapter 4
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Polskaspartan
What universe will John bring to Life?
A new war for the stars
—Star Wars! Of course!” John says with enthusiasm as he decides that right before the Clone Wars would be the perfect setting. Then with the speed and purpose of a TV hacker, he begins typing his divine laws.
• The year is 24 BBY, just two years before the outbreak of the Clone Wars. The galaxy is increasing in instability, with eyes focused far from the unknown regions.
Now with that in place, John begins brainstorming ideas, then it hits him. Using inspiration from his other favorite franchises he could create a species and faction of his very own. Picking out names, a smirk grows across his face as he types them out.
• In a far corner of the unknown regions a new **** has emerged, the American Union Space Command or AUSC. Having fled from a great evil, they arrived here in search of a new home. During transit unfortunately, their **** was scattered.
• The AUSC by 24 BBY has a small but powerful navy. The fleet contains the Mako-Class frigate, the Artemis-Class long range cruiser, the Archer-Class “sniper” frigate, the Phoenix-Class battle/support carrier, and the flagship of the AUSC, the Titan-Class Dreadnought. With two types of star-fighters in use, the Starfury Thunderbolt and Viper Mark II.
After finishing the immediate backstory and navy of his new faction, John begins work on their government, culture, and biology.
• The AUSC can be described in part by the phrase “An army with a state.” They are highly militarized in every sense of the word, with military service seen as being the rite of passage to adulthood. Honor, camaraderie, bravery, integrity, and loyalty are the five values Americans strive to achieve and uphold. Almost to a religious degree..
• The social system of American society is that of equal rights and responsibilities. This system operates on the basis that gender roles should be encouraged, while those who are exceptions are welcomed. Forming a strong sense of tradition and community, yet still adaptable.
• The AUSC is in a manner of speaking, a semi-democratic military dictatorship. This system was adopted when the Emperor emerged shortly after the war with the great evil began. Due to the desperation of fighting a war of extinction, many previous democratic values had to be changed to ensure survival. A simplified version of government today is that planets can govern themselves semi-autonomously as states, but must obey the laws and commands of the federal state aka the military.
• There are actually two who hold supreme authority in the AUSC, the Emperor and the Brood Mother, Gwynevere. While the two supreme leaders are the heads of government, the daily needs of the AUSC are managed by the advisor’s council. This council is made up of individuals appointed personally by the Emperor himself.
Finishing up the governmental structure, John then begins rubbing his chin in deep thought, brainstorming ideas for the American race. Then another admittedly devious smirk appears upon his face. Followed then by light chuckling, which is soon drowned out by the sound of clacking keys.
• The Americans are a mammalian humanoid race which share a striking resemblance to humans. Despite this however, Americans exhibit serval key differences. The first of these differences are that both males and females have what is called an intelligent metabolism. Which strives to keep the body as healthy and fit as possible, this is achieved by metabolism changing itself to burn or expel unneeded proteins and calories with great efficiency. Unlike most other civilized species, the Americans seem to have retained much of their primal traits and even expanded upon them. Which they use, to often frightening levels of success.
The skin of an American has two interesting qualities, the first that it can close up most wounds fairly quickly compared to other species. The second that while closely resembling human skin, many Americans have unique color patterns. The skin’s base color extends from pale to a caramel coloration. The patterns seem to be serve the purpose of offering slight camouflage and attracting a mate.
Both males and females share very high sex drives, just about making the Americans the horniest species in the galaxy, yet disciplined due to their militant culture. Mutual consent is also highly respected, making for very interesting shouting matches right before mating begins. They both also possess a “marking” gland. This gland located on the neck, creates a pheromone only Americans can immediately detect, which quite literally marks the person as taken. Most other species don’t possess the ability to detect this pheromone, which very quickly leads to brutal fights, sense Americans are intensely loyal to their mates.
• Males: they are naturally hard wired to be protectors and fighters. Males possess extremely advanced senses, increased reaction times, enhanced smell, and even detection of electromagnetic signals. Thanks to their metabolism males can build up and maintain muscle strength and endurance, even staying fit well into old age.
When a life or **** scenario is presented, males can enter what is know as the “warrior’s wrath”. During such an event, first the pupils will dilate, changing into a more predatory shape. Then various hormones including adrenaline flood into the body, resulting in berserker like behavior. Nevertheless soldiers of the AUSC have trained to be able to use the warrior’s wrath effectively in combat, if not to a limited degree.
Males possess serval more evolutionary traits then enhanced senses, starting with the brain. It can in conjunction with the eyes and nose read the body language of others to a frightening degree of accuracy. Most likely to quickly detect friend from foe, making lying to an American very difficult.
The bones are on average denser and stronger, being able to withstand much greater stress then humans. In conjunction to the increased muscle mass, males also hit way harder. Males typically stand 6’5 in height and weight of 200lbs. It should be noted that the male genitalia possess unique sensory skin, which can only be triggered by females...
Sexually males are attracted to the opposite sex 100% of the time, currently this is believed to have been another survival method in bedded in their DNA. What males find attractive is also seemingly linked to DNA. These attractions follow serval, specific features, which are found pro-dominantly in female Americans.
• Females: They are by no means delicate flowers, possessing much the same levels of aggression as males on average. This is due to in part for mating purposes, as back in ancient times, only the toughest survived and reproduced. Typically they tend be rather cold and even harsh towards strangers, but if you earn their respect, they will open up.
Women like their counterparts closely cherish the five values, and upon finding a male who demonstrates them, females become hopelessly attracted. The dating process for Americans is unique, being extremely fast in most cases. It starts very subtly, then cascading into primal lust in a matter of minutes or weeks depending on the situation.
This is why the AUSC military has an almost 50/50 gender enlistment, it is the prime mating pool. This due to multiple evolutionary quirks, first of which reside in the brain. Much like males, females possess the friend or foe detection, however this has been adapted to detect the best possible mate as quickly as possible. Females also don’t possess any sort of real orgasm limiter, allowing for them to be continually stimulated, and thanks to their high endurance, very much participating during intercourse.
The breasts of a female are structured to always remain as firm and soft as possible. This is achieved by an organic chainmail-like structure keeping them in place, allowing for much larger breasts without sagging. Their main function is of course to produce milk, which is triggered by the marker pheromone once the women has found a mate.
They can produce up to 2 pints a day and once a child is born, up to a gallon. However once a child can consume solid food, milk production doesn’t stop, instead going back down to 2 pints. And in case of an emergency, the milk is broken back down to provide the woman critical nutrition.
The bone structure is also designed to withstand great amounts of stress, however for females they are triple-jointed. This allows females to move much faster and twist themselves through very tight spaces. Being this flexible allows for women to participate in very exotic positions.
If American women are known for one thing, that’s their famous hourglass figures. The lower half’s of their bodies being much more specialized, for both attraction and offensive uses. For starters it the organic chainmail structures cover much of this area, being used both as hidden armor, and to keep the flesh in perfect form. Examples of these proportions shall be shown here.
The hips are exceptionally wide, allowing for very meaty thighs, which together create one of the finest ass’s in the galaxy. Moving down the legs, they are slightly longer compared to humans, however this only adds to their thick and toned, yet graceful look. The feet themselves also being larger, around size 13s on average, while serving to achieve greater balance, they also function as the perfect way to stimulate a male.
For you see, the toes and sole possess sensory organs that when in contact with the male genitalia, gives powerful pleasure signals. This system seems to operate as a means of keeping Americans of both sexes breeding with each other, sense no other species can copy the pleasure from this organs.
John looks upon the militant, fetishized species he has created with love and care. “Finally the first step is complete, now to finish off some key details...” He trails off while continuing his crusade of typing. He begins writing out a brand new storyline, new characters, and even some spicy sex scenes that would make Game of Thrones seem prudent in comparison.
After what seems like days of spelling out the contents of his mind, John smiles happily at his grand creation. “Computer is everything in order?”
Yes sir, everything checks out. Anything else before I send you in?
Then an idea pops into his mind, looking back up at the computer a look of determination dawns John’s tired face. “I want you to erase all of my memories of this life, and put my essence inside the character..” Pondering for a few seconds, John picks the character he will go through this journey as. “Spartan Koota Anio.”
The computer buffers for a second, seemingly loading the command of its master.
Very well sir, enjoy your new life
Suddenly a cascade of lighting bolts rocket out of the center structure, spreading all across the room. John at first instinctively jumps back, however the bolts move faster. They all slam into him, the energy of creation begins surging through the young man. And just before he blacks out, John once again smiles. ‘Well this life was good, let’s hope the next is even better..’
Then just as quickly as it had began, the thundering lightning disappears. Leaving only a dark, empty room once more.
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