[ACT I] Lina v. Mia, sister and shoe thief

Please note: I am rewriting this story into third person. Until I'm finished, there will be mistakes!

'I guess she's gone out,' Lina thought to herself as she opened the door to her room. She swung her bag of college books off of her shoulder but before she could put it down, she tripped on something hollow sounding, knocking her off balance.

Recovering, she looked down to rub her foot and investigate what she'd tripped on. It was a shiny brown box with Louboutin written on the side; the white tissue strewn over her floor carelessly.

"No!" She picked up the box and put it on her bed carefully, straightening the lid. This meant to her that Mia had once again "borrowed without permission." She sat down for a second and rubbed her temple. She knew that it was just a possession, and in her heart she had to admit that she couldn't wear them herself for more than a few minutes from discomfort.

Lina and her sister Mia came from money, but they'd been taught from a young age not to use it. To Lina, these shoes were a prized possession and she was looking forward to wearing them at her upcoming graduation. At least, after a lot of practice. It frustrated her that Mia had just helped herself to them.

Sat alone, sitting on her bed, Lina had nothing to do but get worked up imagining her sister at one of her silly parties, scuffing up the pristine shoes.

"Lina!" A voice that would be friendly if it weren't from a stranger in Lina's bedroom erupted happily.

Lina turned to look at the source of the noise but none was to be found.

"Hi!"

The voice came from her phone. She looked down to figure out how a call had connected.

"I'm here to help." The voice sounded cheery. "According to my docket, your sister's been quite the naughty one."

Lina could have sworn that the screen flickered when he said 'naughty'. Furious, she decided to turn the thing off.

The voice waited while Lina pressed all of the buttons.

Eventually she gave up and complained, "Ugh! What do you want with me?"

"Simple! I'm here to make you feel better. Give you a chance to teach her a lesson. Says here she's been quite the frustrating one!"

"She? My sister just borrowed my shoes, what is that anyway? Have you feel following me?" Lina looked around for cameras in her room.

"Not exactly. But I have a job to do. What shall we do about your naughty sister? How shall we teach her a lesson?"

"Are you threatening me or my sister?" Lina resumed squeezing the buttons, **** to end this bizarre exchange. "Look, I don't know what you want but you better leave me alone right now."