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Chapter 27
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Almax
Alright then! Waitin' for classmates!
(Feedback Results!)
Hey, thanks for everybody who took the time to do those question thingies! 23 people is a way bigger turnout than I expected. SO, here's the results and what I'm gonna do with them, for anybody who wants to know (if not, no worries! I just wanted people to have the option):
What type of chapters do you like? (multiple answers per person):
-16 Votes General Sexy Ones (e.g. Strip Club, Shower, "Apprentices" trying to milk you, Cameron's morning wood)
-14 Votes Sexy Ones where someone "wins" (e.g. Wrestling, Delilah Sexfight, the Arena)
-10 Votes Wholesome ones (e.g. Baking, everything with Newton, Stargazing)
-10 Votes Classmate Interaction (e.g. Food Court with Jace, spending time with Cameron, Classmates during the lectures)
-9 Votes Sweet, sorta romantic ones (e.g. Nora's apartment, Lexi's serenade)
Takeaway: Hey, cool, you guys like most of the stuff pretty evenly! I was worried that some of them might be annoying whenever they popped up. Of course the sexy ones won, so those won't be stopping anytime soon at all, but they weren't gonna anyway. Nice!
What do you think of Cameron?
-6 Votes He's awesome!
-6 Votes He's good.
-5 Votes I'm not decided yet / I don't mind him
-2 Votes Not that much of a fan
-1 Vote I don't like him
Takeaway: Most people like him! There's a bit of a spread (which just means I should still keep the chapters with him and paths about him optional, which I was planning on anyway!), but on the whole he's p good and I don't need to delete the man.
What do you think of Lexi?
-16 Votes She rocks!
-2 Votes She's good.
-5 Votes I'm not decided yet / I don't mind her
-0 Votes Not big on her
-0 Votes I don't like her
Takeaway: Lexi is boppin' and rockin'. Same as with Cameron, I'll keep all of her stuff as optional as planned (but might have a few more optional things to choose from!), and I don't need to get rid of her at all costs. Wooo!
Would you like to see more temporary setting shifts (like in the lectures)?
-9 Votes Yes
-5 Votes Don't mind
-4 Votes No
Takeaway: It'll be an option for the people who want it, and I now know for certain that people who want it exist. BUT it won't be in mandatory events (at least, super infrequently if it is). For the people who answered yes to this, you can buy a TV for $220 from the Furniture Shop and that's where I'm thinking of having stuff like this. So that'll be there for you!
That's all of them. Again, thanks so much for the response! I really wasn't expecting it at all, I was thinking maybe 2 or 3 people with 4 at most. It's so so awesome to see how many people reading this story like it enough to want to let me know what to keep up and what to avoid, especially since the sample pool of people came exclusively from the people who'd reached the deepest point and were in Game Mode (or had clicked the Jump Ahead link, but keep that hush hush). The only way I can thank you with something tangible is to recommend that you go listen to Perfume by Annella. It's a simple offering, but all I can offer at all. I hope that I can keep writing stuff that you want to read, and I hope that if I ever stop you won't be afraid to let me know!
You guys rock a lot. Thank you!
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Becoming a Warrior!
Or trying to!
A young girl decides to follow her dreams of becoming a beacon of hope! If the world will let her, that is... (Game mode is HIGHLY recommended)
Updated on Apr 8, 2026
by Almax
Created on Dec 25, 2019
by Almax
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