Mind Control School

A Mind Control CHYOA centered around a scholar competition

Chapter 1 by luisvilleda33 luisvilleda33

Hello and welcome, I've been planning this story for a few months, this story is based on a very popular trend on another site (Fiction.live) that is the Mind Control University Stories, i'm sure you probably already know what i'm talking about, but in case you don't i'll leave a link for the (as far as i know) original story, so this story is about a school where everyone has some type of mind control ability and the goal is to enslave as many students as you can without being enslaved, so a common situation i went through when reading this stories is that they never went the way i wanted them to, so that's the main reason i decided to do this story and the other reason is that this is a concenpt that fits perfectly to CHYOA, because so many paths and possibilities can be explored.

So with that context it's very easy to understand what this story is about, so lets start with the specifics, this is the story of a multiversal school for mind controlers, on this school they will learn to grow their abbilities and will have the chance to test them openly with their classmates (More specific rules and guidelines will be given during the first chapters) so normally this would cover a whole school year, but given that i want this story to have choices, different paths, and basically be very interactive, it will be a one month program, because doing a full year day by day with each day having 5-8 different choices would be basically impossible, this school will be both for men and women, so it's important to clarify that there will be M/F, M/M and F/F relationships of all kind, all characters are at least 18 years old, the lore of the other Mind Control University Stories will be partially used but with some changes, to do this experience as interactive as posible i'll use the game option, so i encorauge you to press start game to have the best experience.

I also encourage community teamwork so if you have an idea for a path, you can comment it and i'll try to add it, same goes to criticisim or things you like.

Link to the story that inspired this one: https://fiction.live/stories/Mind-Control-University/uScpa3Z6TKhEjYhta/home

And some final things i wanted to add.

  • English is not my first language so if you find any grammar or spelling mistakes please let me know.
  • I do this for fun so don't expect Pullitzer levels of writing, i'll try my best.
  • And Finally Thank You for reading, i hope you like it.

Updates 23/01/2024

Hey Guys, Happy New Year, i have some updates for this story:

I deleted some branches, i will focus on the one left, the story will no longer need the game mode, and more importantly, i decided to make this story public, so you can add chapters to ongoing branches or start your own branches freely, i'm excited to read your stories and branches, right now i'm working on mine, any new ideas are welcome

¿Who is our Main Character?

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