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Chapter 3
by Hvast
This voice is annoying... back to having fun?
time!
After **** this girl you move into her body leaving the guy alone and go to your home. Here you find your father and offer him to suck his dick. He happily agrees, just like almost any father would, and roughly fuck your mouth. Then he comes all over your face. Seconds later he is hard again and fucks you in your pussy. After all of this, you go and call the police to accuse your father of **** just to be mean.
"Wait? Since when evil spirits have homes and fathers?"
"It is her father. Isn't it obvious, idiot?"
"No. It isn't. If you want it to be obvious, then, for fucking sake, write 'her home', 'her father', 'her face', 'her pussy'. Also, this is better than the last one but still, one paragraph is not enough for a chapter! You need to try harder to arouse any reader."
"I am aroused by writing this!. If others are impotents without imagination it isn't my problem"
"Ok. Whatever. There is no direct rule against that. One question. Why do you want to put that man to jail?"
"I am a malevolent spirit. Isn't it enough to do evil stuff?"
"No. Evil characters should have reasonable motivations, too. You haven't explained yours."
"What? You have just accused me of writing a non-arousing story. Now you want me to do such boring things like backgrounds and character descriptions? Fuck off. I am an evil spirit doing random evil stuff"
"OK. OK. You aren't breaking any rules except the rules of decent writing. You have the right to do so. Bye"
This guy is annoying... Anyway back to the fun! What next?
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