for the light

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I awoke to nothing. no light, no sound, no feeling, just void, odd.

I also wasn't worried, no anxiety about what this was no fear of what was to come

was i dead? maybe, but i always thought that when you died that was just it, but I'm still here, thinking about where I am.

so that can't be it. right?

DO NOT AVERT YOUR GAZE MORTAL. what gaze? I can't see anything. WE HAVE SEEN YOUR DESIRES, YOUR DARK FANTASIES. oh yeah the most evil desire, a nap. AND WE HAVE JUDGED YOU WORTHY.

You need but say a word, mortal, and you will be made our champion to bring the treacherous Light to heel. You will become a monstrosity without equal, to despoil their cities, their women, and defile their saints

well shit, more stuff to do. might as well try to stop whoever this is from doing whatever evil plans they have.

All this and more shall be given.

I shouted into the void, hoping whoever was talking would hear me "I ACCEPT YOUR OFFER!"

as I said that I was suddenly pulled into a deep, dark, black place where even the air was thick with malice and hate.

a new voice piped up from behind me. "ayo, got'im!"

the voice from before then began to speak. "please ignore my sister, serial masturbation has left her brain-damaged."

oh great, brain damage, just what I need

the other voice elaborated on it's previous words. "Kek, you fell for Mel's lies."

the voice to whom the nickname mel was likely refering to responded to the other's accusations. "Do not address me by that name! And I've said no lies."

the other voice spoke again. "That 'will become a monstrosity without equal' is not placed after we give anon the god juice, but after he grinds like a loser."

grinding? that sounds like work, eww.

mel began to get angry. "I had but a few moments to deliver the offer, some information was to be inevitably lost!"

"Liar, liar, pants on fire!" taunted the childish voice

and of course they can't stop arguing, I suppose both of them must have brain damage.

"You insufferable...! Deep breaths, Melanoche, deep breaths. Let me illustrate the situation to you, our champion. The world of Ruyanei has been the place of struggle between Light and Dark..."

huh, melanoche, I guess that's mel's full name.

the annoying voice immediately interrupted melanoche with its own simplification of events. "Anime JRPG fantasy world where the monsters were about to win, but then the glowing cocksuckers of Light cheated, and made every hero OP. The Demon King is dead and the monsters have been beaten back. So we're cheating too."

cheating? that sounds bad.

melanoche elaborated on the interrupting voice's account of events. "You neglected to mention that they somehow gained the knowledge to kickstart mankind's technology. But yes, they cheated. And now, we will retaliate: another Demon King is on the rise, we've bolstered the reproductive rates of this monster generation, created as many dungeons on human land as we could, and last but not least, our trump card: you."

I'm the trump card? aw shit.

mel then began to explain. "You see, Dark, our domain, bestows power immediately but plateaus after a while. This is the reason why the immensely powerful Demon Kings get defeated by Heroes. The powers bestowed by Light start off weak, but grow without limit."

the infuriating voice finally did something useful,and explained what they planned to do to me. "Your human soul belongs to Light, and that is what we are going to exploit. We shall make you a monster, but one that can evolve beyond any other by defeating the spawn of men."

the other voice then added some details. "So as to not overwhelm the light of your soul, and render this all but moot, you will start as a creature of lesser power."

"But then...oh ho ho ho...but then..."

"And she calls me a serial masturbator. Anyway! Let's start customizing your body. We could put you into a normal monster, but since your soul is such a special snowflake I'm going to make you into a special snowflake monster." said the annoying voice

aha! I knew they both had brain damage!

the smart one then expalined what to do. "There are four types of monster cores compatible with your soul. Pick one."

as the voice said those words I suddenly felt a rush of knowledge enter my mind, I then spent a moment evaluating my options.

once I was done I finally had a moment to speak. "hmm, humiliating and powerful sound too -y and, arcane is just eww, so I choose seedbed because I don't plan on moving anyways"

I was a bit of a shut-in before.

what, I had anxiety! what's your excuse?

the annoying voice spoke again. "Time to insert the core! I've disabled your sense of pain, you pussy. There's going to be a shitton of blood, so don't be a faggot, don't close your eyes."

_hey that's a slur! and I'm pansexual not gay, you bitc-_and then I suddely felt pain worse than anything I had experienced before. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

while I was screaming my voice out I heard the voice again. There, right through the ribs! now quick! What size do you want to start at? Your first form is the most important, like your first time.

small was good for exp but I don't plan on moving a lot, so no.

human would be comfortable but it's boring.

huge would probably corrupt me, nope.

"massive though, that one is great, it lets me think twice as fast which is just awesome, so yup, I'll take that one"

"ah, going for the flesh wall I see." said the annoying voice, almost reading my mind

"time to choose your species."

is that different from my core?

"lemme guess, erosarkic?"

"right on the money boss"

the voice then began to explain the options for my genetailia. "The 'Essential Package' is just a big human dick. If you have a terminal lack of imagination you can have this. Nothing special about the cum, it's just a cock that fits in a cooch good and breeds well. Your choice, Mr. Vanilla."

I suppose that might work

"The 'Standard Package' is understated. A hyperweapon worthy of a champion of the Dark, knots and flares added at your discretion. Also, you can choose any number of the following: basic tentacles, tentacles with nubs, tentacles with suction cups, tentacles with needle-like injectors, a toxin that causes women's breasts to grow in size, and a toxin that induces lactation. You can improve your cum production up to the point where you can fill a human's digestive tract, resulting in your semen coming out form the other end. Surprisingly nonfatal most of the time."

ooh, growth hormones. me likey

[c]The 'Complete Package'. Multiple dicks of any shape and size, no matter how disproportionate, tentacles of all types and sizes, enough cum to fill swimming pools. It's going to be fun seeing you fuck up humanity with this.

I hope it includes the hormones

"I'll take that one"

"Then you've got these add-ons. The 'Breeding', 'Mindbreak', and 'Ryona' add-ons."

"yup to breeding, no mindbreak and ryona"

those ones are too fucked up for me

"now that we're done with that, it's time for monster powers."

once again my mind filled with knowledge that wasn't mine, I took some more time to look over the options.

hmm, I would take dungeon master if I were evil, or broodsire if i couldn't get it quickly on my own

"I'll take light infusion."

"why would you take that? aren't you working for us?"

ha! no, I'm gonna betray you first chance I get

"I want it for the immunity" I lied

"ooh I get it, those light bitches are gonna be so surprised when you tank a light blast."

hah, suckers!