Real world/Technology 2

Every day technology grew more powerful, more encompassing. People just accepted this as the way things were. No one questioned...

Hold on. That's boring, isn't it? Ok how about this? In a world much like ours... No. Still lacks something. Ah yes. The world is a very com... No. Hmmm. Hey voice. Voice?

"What?!"

A little help here.

"Oh good grief. What do you want now?"

I can't think of a good opening. Could you help me?

"Ugh. Fine."

Thank you.

...

Well?

"I'm thinking!"

Oh. Sorry.

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"Ok try this. What is the hook in a movie?"

Uh...

"A character that has an ordinary issue. He/she is like the audience but with some hidden destiny. The typical hero is either picked on or has some sort of birth defect or just bad luck. But the first time we see them, they are simple trying to live an ordinary life. Since I can tell that you seem to be stuck on having the..."

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"...technology being created by some antihero, try having the character be mistreated by society. The technology is their way of getting some form of ****. The character figures out how to make the world suffer the way they were made to suffer. Something goes wrong and the antihero has to either become the hero or fall into the role of villain. Either way the 'meat' of the story is the...well, lets not go into that here as the reader is likely yawning at this point."

Ok. I think I get what you are trying to say. Alright let's do this one more time.