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Chapter 2 by tedwilliams12 tedwilliams12

And now, a little exposition

Q and A

Hey everybody! Ted here!

Since at the moment of writing this I'm about halfway done with Chapter 20, I thought I would leave this off branch to answer any questions or comments you have about the story.

Anything is open for discussion, as long as it actually pertains to the story.

Throw em up in the comments and I will edit this chapter with my answers as the story moves on.

Or don't, it's cool. I understand it isn't for everyone but I thought I would do it for fun.

Thank you for all the views and favorites so far!

8/5/21 - once I finish I may open up the story to public so people can make their own chapters...still deciding on that.

9/2/21 - As I said in the comment section apologies about the extended hiatus on the next chapter. Got a lot of shoes about to drop and they need my full attention. You will meet the brand new Tso soon enough though!

10/26/21 - Thinking of a bonus chapter if we hit 25,000 views. Male Protagonist. That story would not continue until I finish the entire story with Jenna, but I had an idea of how everything would be different in the world where the Franklin's have a son instead of a daughter.

12/24/21 - To answer Monstergirlfan, I don't know to be honest. My original outline was aiming for 5 acts, but now I am finding that I am going a bit further than I thought, taking time with parts of the story originally I was just going to skip but now wanting to flesh out (i.e. the gangs other classmates). I would say the story is maybe a third of the way done, besides the plot, we have a ton of moments to potentially see. And you don't have to wait for long, he is going to have a big chunk of the next chapter!

1/4/22 - To answer Namer1, That could be one way the story goes...I will say that I thought about just writing the typical bimbo transformation story with nothing but sex and brainless babes sucking dick but that didn't feel as interesting or as sexually stimulating to be honest...having a lot more fun adding potential swerves in the plot...I wouldn't worry though...I have some shit planned by the end of this part 3 that will keep you wanting to know what happens next.

1/4/22 - To answer Monstergirlfan, That could ALSO be one way the story goes >:). It isn't ending soon so hang onto your pants!

1/11/22 - To answer Christina, who says it was going to be a happy ending? Or, totally happy ending. An ending different than you think. I am kinda running with the theme from the original Bimbo Factory and Stud Farm but Mathias is the big x factor from that formula...so stay tuned! The next chapter is about a third complete.

1/25/22 - To answer Monstergirlfan, you don't buy a book and immediately read the last page right? Hahahaha, we got a ways to go. That moment is a big one. I promise the lead up to it will be worth it!

1/30/22 - To answer Monstergirlfan, the dreams are coming back...maybe not specifically like your suggestion but they will make a impact before the end of part 3.

2/15/2022 - To answer Monstergirl fan, no worries! That is why I made this branch off chapter. And always stay tuned...I think the end of part 3 will make everybody stick around!!!

2/22/2022 - To answer Monstergirl fan, 5 acts. Maybe a sixth that will be an extended epilogue of sorts. It depends on what real life throws my way between then and now.

3/31/2022 - To answer Monstergilrfan, I always planned for Jenna to go through changes, just what changes and how those would resolved changed over time. Initially it was going to be her being captured by Mathias and the rest of the gang rescuing her, but at around the middle of Part 2 I felt like that was too boring. So I wrote out other endings and how they would fit, and then I came to an idea that would throw a curve into the expected plot.

4/22/2022 - To answer Monstergirlfan, I have, but none of those will be written till I finish up this story. Maybe once and a while a one shot will pop up here and there. Though I started outlining the next story I had in mind, so maybe I will just transition from this to that instead. I don't know, still on hiatus at the moment.

4/23/2022 - To answer Monstergirlfan, oh it isn't cancelled, I am just writing the next section at a much more spread out pace. And by transition I mean maybe I will take a quick break to write the beginning of what will come after Bimbo Factory has come to an end.

8/13/2022 - Long time since I answered these! To not spoil one Monstergirlfan, it may be a sequel to Bimbo Factory, that one is more rough outline than the others. The other two are going to explore a cyberpunk setting and the other maybe some possession themes. If you all want a male protag version of this story it may come a bit farther down the road.

1/8/2023 - To answer Monstergirlfan, not to delve into spoilers, I have 14 more chapters outlined. The events in play will end in ten chapters, and the last half of part four will be epilogues. I don't know when that will be and judging by the amount of time I can dedicate to writing, it won't be for a while.

5/8/2023 - To Answer Monstergirlfan, who has been the life blood of this thread TBH, not really, she is going to have something to do in the ending. She was just meant to be another fly trapped by Mathias. To peak behind the curtain, one of the reasons I took time for this chapter was I was trying to figure out how to tie Athena and the Flight Attendant into the story again. In the end I decided to go a direction I didn't initially expect but works perfectly with the main canon ending I have in mind, and even the two "what ifs" I was going to write when I finish the main story.

What's next?

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