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Chapter 6 by tobykins tobykins

Do you make any more changes?

Make it make sense.

Looking at the full-body picture, you can't help but find Maddie's appearance a little incongruous. She still looks like a shy, intellectual girl, but with dyed-blonde hair and sizable breasts on full display. You poke around through the app to see if there are any other settings you can use to make her look a little more... consistent.

First of all, you add a few inches to her height. You've always liked your women a little on the taller side.

Next you look under a tab labeled "Presentation." Naturally, the rules listed here pertain to the way Maddie presents herself. The first thing you do is see about changing her haircut. Her awkward bangs are cute on a brunette, but not so much on a blonde. You sift through the haircut options until you find a pixie cut that suits her new color.

Next, you go to the rules governing her fashion preferences. One of these reads, "Prefers to wear a small amount of makeup." That will never work, you think, and you erase it. In its place, you write, "Prefers to wear bright red lipstick every day."

Finally, you notice a section of the app that governs her voice. Naturally there's a rule that reads: "Speaks with a general American accent." Just for fun, you erase this rule and write, "Speaks with a thick New York accent." In addition, you add the rule: "In any given situation, speaks slightly louder than is considered appropriate." That should be interesting to hear.

Anything else before you go?

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