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Chapter 7 by CelebMaster69 CelebMaster69

what's my critique?

Needs Work

"No wonder you're divorced!" I said. "You are bad at this!"

"What did I do wrong?" Veronica asked.

"Everything! You tried going fast! That's a sign of desperation. Work on going slower. That will help show how you want a man's cock, but not so **** that you end up revealing you want only his dick and cum."

"I see," Veronica said. "Any more advice?"

Any more?

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