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Chapter 4 by newfrickinshow1 newfrickinshow1

How'd she do?

Poorly

You continued to sit at your computer for a little bit without even putting your underwear or pants back on. You just sat facing the computer screen shocked with your eyes shifting between the Sex Inspector app and your flaccid, wilted, freshly emptied penis. You didn't need any more confirmation this competition was legit but still got some as your computer screen gave you an alert that your sister had updated her Facebook profile. She was bragging to the world that she had just given you a hand job and her scores should be out at any moment. And it was getting likes, hearts, thumbs up, and a tidal wave of celebratory replies from friends, family, former high school teachers, and even one from your grandmother. Deciding it was time to learn how this shit worked you clicked on the, "Enter Hand Job Participant Scores," button. Seemed simple enough.

It did give you some basic rules for the competition. Apparently after you finish sexual acts with one women, other women wouldn't be willing to do anything until the previous, "contestant," had been officially scored. Something to do with concerns that multiple consecutive partners without official inputs biasing or corrupting your judgment. Apparently for the specialty fetishes you were allowed to, "draft," other men or women into the activity if it was necessary. (Can't judge a woman's ability to take a gang-bang without a gang to bang her after all). Only the primary woman competing at the moment was to be scored though regardless of how many are pulled into service for the current event.

After that was an asterisk note that really caught your eye: "PLEASE BE ADVISED. While others may be called in service of the event, participants other than the judge will NOT receive compensation." Compensation?! A little further looking and you found information. Apparently for every completed, "event," you judged, you were to be paid the equivalent of 125 Euros. That took it to a whole other level. Not only were you basically allowed to fuck any woman on the planet in any way you wanted, but some international government agency was going to pay you to do it. Well, it was time to see if you got that first paycheck right away.

At the top of the next screen there was a bar for the contestant's name so you typed in Millie Ericson. You entered a few more details and the computer began searching until a photograph of your sister appeared on the screen. "Is this the 'Millie Ericson' that needs scoring?" A bit of a surprise there but if all those international agencies were involved it probably wouldn't be that hard to grab a Facebook photo or something. You clicked to confirm it was her and another screen popped up where you could enter her scores and it seemed pretty simple. "On a scale of 1-10 with 1 being terrible and 10 being amazing, please score 'MILLIE ERICSON' along these criteria. (For accuracy and improved rankings, the system will allow you to include up to 1 decimal point for each score.)"

First was enthusiasm. She definitely seemed into it and in fact pushed the issue of giving you a hand job so you decided to give her a 7.5.

After that was 'appearance/presentation' and you gave her a 5.1. Interestingly all categories other than enthusiasm included a section for, "notes, criticisms, advice, praise, or other issues." You didn't want to be mean so you tried to give her a compliment here. "Very cute body but poorly presented. Took off shirt and pants which is a plus but bra and panties were rather boring. Could have scored substantially higher with sexier underwear choices or removing them entirely and performing nude. Hair wasn't styled at all and no makeup also deduct from final presentation score."

Technique: 1.6. (You honestly felt as if you were fudging the numbers in her favor since you didn't want to totally insult her with a 1. You noted, "Very little to no eye contact as eyes remained fixed on member during entire hand job. Even with that her facial expression was one of duty and determination rather than pleasure or joy. Enthusiasm was evident but more smiling or sensual facial expressions would have been a massive improvement. Actual stroke technique was uninspired, rudimentary, and clumsy. Millie lacks experience and it showed. She was able to induce orgasm however so minimum standards for success were met.

Vocalizations: 1.0. Pretty much silent throughout. Dirty talk is one of the best parts of a hand job and she provided none at all.

Money shot Moment. Apparently you're supposed to grade her reaction to the moment you started to cum. Again pretty bad so you scored her a 2.2. "Didn't sense orgasm approaching at all and initial wave of sperm wound up on the floor. After did not aim penis at her face, mouth, or body in any way. Didn't even put her other hand in the way to catch released load and minimize mess. Didn't continue stroking once orgasm started to milk that extra little bit of jizz out of balls but did keep hand on dick throughout most of orgasm. After finishing she stared at cum on hands with appreciation and fascination which did add slightly to her score.

At the bottom was just a section for, "additional notes," so you decided to try and make things sound a little better just because you felt as if you were being a bit mean. "Generally non-sexual girl with limited experience that made itself evident throughout. Cute physique and adorable smile are large pluses for her overall potential and could be great with additional experience if she wishes to work to develop skills further. Strongly recommend further training and practice, more provocative clothing, and development of more vulgar and colorful vocabulary should she wish to improve.

You hit submit and got one more confirmation window:

Enthusiasm: 7.5

Presentation: 5.1

Technique: 1.6

Vocalization: 1.0

Money Shot moment: 2.2

TOTAL SCORE: 17.4/50.

Confirm?

With a sigh you clicked to confirm her score but realized it wasn't probably that big of a deal anyways. Your sister had historically been nonsexual in general and in many respects outright prudish. It's not like she'd be all that concerned about a low hand job score. Of course reality and the clock woke you up from this morning of, "WTF?" moments and you realized a good chunk of the spare time you usually had to get ready for school had been used up. Between the hand job and scoring your sister;s work it was probably time to get up off your ass and take a shower. Getting dressed you headed to the bathroom to shit, shower, shave, brush your teeth and all that stuff before heading downstairs to see the reaction to your sister's score.

How does she react

More fun
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