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Chapter 5 by Duke Montefort Duke Montefort

What kind of scores do you give Dana?

She scores poorly

You take Dana to her room to perform the inspection. You close the door and turn to begin the inspection. "I'd better get a good score Bro, if you don't want me to tell Mom about that incident last month," she barks. You ignore that little dig for now your working. You slowly look at her body her breasts are a standard B cup. Her vagina is covered in hair as are her legs. On her ass is a large unsightly tattoo, and a tramp stamp. Her hairstyle is plain straight and poorly died blonde. "Lets try oral," you suggest. "No," she barks. "Ok, then vaginal," suggest, but she turns and looms over you. "You will put 10 on everything," she demands! "I expect a perfect score! I'm your sister, and you will not ruin this for me," she commands. You look down on your sheet and begin to fill in the form.

Name: ___Dana Doe______ Age: 21 Score 4/140 Failure

Attractiveness: 0/10

Breasts: 3/10

Mouth: 0/10 - Oral Proficiency: 0/10

Vagina: 1/10 - Vaginal Proficiency:0/10

Ass: 0/10 - Anal Proficiency: 0/10

Handjob Proficiency: 0/10

Vocalization: 0/10

_______Submissiveness: 0/10

__Lady like behavior_: 0/10

Hairstyle _________: 0/10

Attitude_______: 0_/10

Additional Notes: Attempted ****, Physical threats, refusal to be tested, tramp stamp, unseemly tattoo.

Requirements: Mandatory charm school, Mandatory Etiquette, Mandatory makeover neck down body wax, Mandatory tattoo removal.

Punitive: Chastity device, Probationary ward of parents, Chaperone required in public, Gag mandatory in public Failure to comply 500,000 dollar fine for ward and recipient

Designation Trailer Trash

Inspector's Signature: _John Doe________________________

After finishing the inspection you open the door and shout, "MOM!!!!!!!!!"

Your mother anxiously enters and your begin to inform your relatives, "I am obligated to tell you and your daughter the results. Out of 140 your daughter is 4. " Your mother eyes move from anxious to despair. "She attempted to ****, physical threats, refused to be tested, is unshaven below the neck, and has two tattoos a unseemly tattoo on her ass, and a tramp stamp." Her despair moves to rage, as she smolders to the rest of the results. "MOM! He's lying," Dana whines!

"SILENCE," snaps your Mother.

"She can retake the inspection in six months until then. She is your ward as of this moment, and the following adjustments are required. Mandatory charm school, Obedience training, Makeover, body wax from the neck down, tattoo removal. She has six months to comply. Furthermore, she is legally your ward until next inspection in six months. She is required to wear a chastity belt at all times, She is to be gaged in public, and Chaperoned in public. Failure to comply the ward and caretaker will be fined 500,000 dollars each. I should designate her as untouchable, but this is my first inspection so I'm designating her as trailer trash," you inform her with tears streaming down your cheeks. You hand your mother a copy, and bolt out of the room.

You run to your room, and cry quietly on your bed as your mother give Dana the punishment of a lifetime.

Pick yourself up

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