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Chapter 5 by Control Freak Control Freak

What kind of scores do you give Dana?

(Mostly) Honest

You are tempted to give Dana some **** scores just to see what would happen, since you remember what the form letter said about everyone considering your scores to be the absolute truth. You might be able to make her a walking wet dream if you gave her 10s across the board, or make it so that no man would even think of touching her by giving her all 1s. However, you don't think Dana really deserves either of those fates. Plus, some part of you still feels an obligation to do your job the way your mysterious benefactors expected you to... at least for your first test. After all, you'll be performing plenty more inspections in the future where you can try all that stuff out, so you might as well just take this chance to get used to this whole grading system.

You fill in Dana's name and age at the top of the form, then go down the list of criteria, and one by one fill in scores for the ones that you can reasonably say you tested. Since your sister is the first person you're putting scores down for, you don't really have anything to compare her performance to yet, but you do the best you can to be relatively honest, going as far as to add a category yourself in order to be thorough. You finish up by adding a few notes to the bottom of the sheet. Before you sign it though, you take one last look at the form to make sure there wasn't something you missed.


Name: Dana Doe Age: 19

Attractiveness: 7/10

Breasts: 4/10

Mouth: __/10 - Oral Proficiency: __/10

Vagina: 7/10 - Vaginal Proficiency: 5/10

Ass: 7/10 - Anal Proficiency: __/10

Handjob Proficiency: __/10

Vocalization: 9/10

Nipples: 6/10

________________: __/10

________________: __/10

________________: __/10

Additional Notes: Cute tattoo brings her ass up from a 6 to a 7. Should avoid bras to emphasize her nipples, which are tasty and fun to suck.

Inspector's Signature: _______________________________


From what you could tell you didn't miss anything. Sure, you might have exaggerated her vocal score a bit, but her squeals and attempts at dirty talk were so cute you couldn't resist. As for your comments, the first was you doing your sister a favor (not that the tattoo actually hurt anything anyway), and the second one you just really wanted to write down on an official form. Plus, you were curious if Dana would actually take your advice or not. Satisfied with how you filled out the evaluation sheet, you sign the bottom, then take it off the clipboard and slide it onto the table, "Okay, all done."

"Let me see!" Dana says energetically, grabbing the form and reading it over. Your mom walks up to her and looks over her shoulder to read the results as well. You simply sit back and gauge their reactions to try and figure out how they saw the scores.

"This looks really good, Dana," your mom says to her with a smile, "It looks like I shouldn't have been worried about that tattoo after all."

"Yeah, but my breasts didn't score so well," your sister says with a frown, glancing down at her chest and grumbling, "I knew he thought they were too small."

"Oh honey, a 4 isn't so bad," your mother reassures her, "That's only a little below average. Just be thankful that's your lowest score. Besides, look, he thought your nipples were worth a 6, so it's not like you don't have anything to offer up there. If you stop wearing bras you can still probably turn quite a few heads."

"I guess you're right," your sister says with a smile, "I've still got a 7 in Attractiveness and Ass, and a 5 in Vaginal Proficiency is way higher than I thought I'd get for my first time."

"That's the spirit!" your mom says, "I'm sure you can get that score higher next time if your practice hard enough. Even if you don't find a boyfriend to do it with, you can still use a good dildo to..."

Whatever your mom was going to finish that sentence with is drowned out by Dana letting out a high-pitched shriek of happiness.

"Oh my God Mom, look! Look! I scored a 9 on Vocalization!" she says, bouncing on the balls of her feet in excitement.

"That's amazing, sweetie!" your mother says, actually looking a little flush after hearing her daughter squealing in joy, "I told you men like dirty talk, especially with a voice as unbelievably sexy as yours."

You see Dana's face go red, and she holds the paper up to her face in embarrassment, "Moooooooom!"

"I'm sorry, but it's true," your mom says, "I didn't realize it until now, but your screams are enough to send shivers even through me! You have quite the gift, young lady. I mean, just imagine how the boys are going to react to you sweet talking them now!"

"Screw that," Dana said with a big grin, "With a score like this, I might be able to start a singing career! Ooh, or maybe go into acting."

"Let's not get too ahead of ourselves, honey," your mom said, "You need a little more than a sexy voice to do either of those things. Still, it's definitely a possibility... maybe you can try out for America Sings next season and see where it goes."

Hmm, interesting. Dana didn't sound any different to you, but scoring her Vocalization so highly has apparently made her voice alone be seen as incredibly arousing, especially when she starts getting emotional with it. It's hard to imagine how they would have reacted if you gave her a 10 like you originally wanted. You might want to be careful about how easily you dole out scores that high in the future.

"Oh, this has been a fantastic morning," your mom coos, "Both for my young man finally getting a job, and for my little angel getting such high scores on her inspection! I think this calls for a special celebratory breakfast! Who wants pancakes?"

"That sounds great to me!" you say excitedly. Another thing you had realized while watching the two of them talk was how hungry fucking your sister made you.

"Yeah, with any luck it might go straight to my chest," Dana jokes, cupping her bare breasts.

"Alright, two big stacks of pancakes, coming up!" your mom says. She takes the evaluation sheet from Dana, then goes over to the fridge and sticks it on the front with a magnet, "I'll just leave this here until we decide what to do with it. Oh and Dana, you should probably put your clothes back on in case Caitlin gets here early."

"Oh, right, now that the inspection's over it would be kinda weird for her to see me like this," your younger sister said, looking down at herself sheepishly. She rubs a finger across the cum dripping out of her pussy and says, "I'm just going to rinse John's cum off real quick first." And with that, she gathers her clothes off the floor and heads off to the bathroom.


A few minutes later, Dana comes back to the kitchen and sits down next to you. You notice that while she still has her boyshorts on, she's swapped out the baggy shirt for something just a little bit smaller. You aren't entirely sure why, until you notice that her nipples are tenting out slightly beneath it. Apparently she took the nipple comment to heart after all.

"Hey, thanks for not totally failing me on my proficiency," your sister says to you with an appreciative smile, "I'm still not entirely sure I deserved something as high as a 5 for doing so little when you were... you know."

"Yeah, I do," you say with a chuckle, "And don't worry about it, I was being honest. You might have lacked technical skill, but it still felt pretty good to stick my dick in there."

Your sister blushes at this, "R-Really? Well, thanks. Again."

"Pancakes are ready!" your mom says, placing two big syrupy stacks in front of you and your sister, "Eat up!"

As you dig into your breakfast, you think about what you want to do next. It would most likely still be another hour or so before Caitlin showed up, which should give you just enough time to finish eating and regain your strength. On the other hand, you've already been hanging around home for a while, and as fun as it was to have sex with your sister, there was a big open world of women to 'inspect'. Do you really want to put off starting that adventure for another hour or more just to bang another girl you grew up with? After all, it might be easier for you to truly mess around with scores if you could try it out on a stranger you didn't have any emotional attachment to, or even someone you knew but didn't really like a whole lot.

Thankfully, you have about a stack of pancakes' worth of time to think it over.

Will you wait for Caitlin to arrive, or find someone else to inspect?

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