Fin.

Thanks for reading my first story (that i actually published). I still have several scenes and paths to write, but I'm slowly getting there. I've got two sequel concepts to write as well:

A Day In - where a wife has a relaxing day at home, and her husband mentions that there's a surprise arriving later. Is it a new vacuum cleaner or the pool boy?

A Week Abroad - a husband and wife take a trip to an upscale resort with another couple. Many encounters await them. I haven't decided if it should a beach resort or a ski resort. Vote in the comments.

If you have any other feedback please put it in the comments or a message, for instance:

-Do you like 2nd person, or would 1st or 3rd be better?

-Stick with wife POV, switch to husband, or both?

-I leave the story background very thin on purpose to make it more immersive. Would a prequel leading up to this night be enjoyable? Solo, vouyeur, slight corruption, lingerie, dirty talk, slight SPH...

-Should there be more chapters not spent on sex (backstory, character development), or is the narrative good in its current form? Or do we need more sex?