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Chapter 2 by Long John Silver Long John Silver

So what is happening?

A few words for other authors

If you want to add chapters to my story then please read through the following notes. And if you are only a reader then it won´t hurt you either. They will explain my thought process behind the story and might help you out a bit:

1. If you already read the story you probably realized that I have already established a few rules for how the necklace works. Please do your best to follow these set of rules:

a: You cannot undo someone else´s wishes (but you can build up upon them)

b: You have to voice your wish for it to take effect, even if only in a whisper

c: You cannot make any wishes resulting to one person being able to become the permanent owner of the necklace.

Depending on the progression of the story I might add more rules(also other authors rules of course) or loopholes if they benefit the story.

2. In order to keep the story interesting I think the most important aspect is to frequently change the owner of the necklace, therefore I added the third rule. I never came across a story which would have not benefited from it. And if you happen to get to my last chapter you will realize that I completely left every possibility open to who is gonna get the necklace next. So please do your best to play around with this possibilities.

3. The reason why I think so highly of the third rule is simple. I think the essence of every mind control story lies within making people do what they normally wouldn´t do. If you add the theme of sex to it the result is almost always some kind of humiliation. And some of the best if not the best form of humiliation results from either **** or from the downfall of a person. So if person A uses the necklace to humiliate B, then as soon as B gets the necklace she will seek **** on A. And while B feels safe and reaches a new high, the downfall will only be harder once A gets the necklace back and does her best to seek her ****.

4. I am a big fan of triggers. A story really gets interesting if consequences and small outcomes basically develop themselves. Especially when people forget about them. This can create some humiliating and therefore interesting results (see the last 2 chapters). But don´t overdo it. Too many triggers or not subtle ones can quickly paralyze the story development by creating too many chains. Even I have to hold myself back sometimes :) I might have to drop some kind of reset button someday.

5. If you looked up the character description you saw a bunch of pictures to help your imagination. I actually wanted to add pictures to every chapter (like Swallows999 does) until I realized how time consuming it is. And if you actually want to display reocurring characters it´s basiclly impossible. But if you have the time please add pictures to your chapters, the result can only be beneficial. Also feel free to display the main characters through different pictures than the ones I used as long as they fulfill the basic looks of that person. So take any busty redhead to display Julia!!!

6. There´s nothing more boring and annoying than a whole bunch of text with nothing happening in it and if it´s poorly formatted it´s even worse. Therefore please follow in my footsteps and:

a: use the bold option to display wishes (not their consequences or if somebody simply talks about wishes, only actual wishes) for example: "I wish that you use the bold option."

b: Display the usage of triggers by big letters. If for example a trigger is "Well done" then display it like this: "I have to say this is WELL DONE".

This way people that don´t really care much about the story will have an easier time searching for the more interesting parts (not always of course!).

7. Please no guilty conscience. The most boring turn a mind control themed story can take is if a person suddenly gets a change of heart or falls in love and only uses the power for good stuff. Of course you can use it to build up for a huge downfall but other than that please don´t!

8. You might have also realized that some of my chapters are quite long. Feel free to copy - paste any part of a chapter and use it to create a new one. I don´t mind the story taking a different turn as long as you stay true to my rules(1. a-c) ;)

That´s it from my side. If you like my story then please look up my favorite stories and add chapters to them too. Some of them are really awesome, but have not been updated for quite a while. And even if they are being worked on, there are never too many chapters!

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