(NOTES FOR POTENTIAL SUBMISSIONS)

So this first update was rather large because I wanted to get to the first Loop Point before opening up the story to more writers (which we are at). And while I will try to not make TOO many restrictions for this particular tale, there are some basic ground rules I would like to lay out.

1) The Succubi are not trying to kill our (as of this writing) unnamed protagonist, since he is a Rak'Duar and they need him alive. However, if during an escape attempt he should be caught by a Succubus they are free to have some fun with him and fuck him into unconsciousness however they like. If that happens, link the next chapter back to the relevant Loop Point.

2) Loop Points are points in the story where, instead of dying, the protagonist will be sent back to should he ever be defeated by whatever challenge he is currently facing. So keep in mind the protagonist may pass through your area again when writing how the situation plays out. (Think more Lucasarts than Sierra, if that isn't too dated a reference.) You can create a new Loop Point if you feel the protagonist has advanced enough in the story that going all the way back to the start would not make sense or some event occurs that gives him a new area he would be stuck in as he tries to escape further.

3) One of the big events (and which would probably necessitate the creation of a Loop Point) is if you (or I) decide that you want the protagonist to have another sexual encounter with Liliana. Since she plans to fuck him at times to further awaken him as a Rak'Duar an encounter with Liliana would cause his further awakening to happen. I will edit and expand this document to explain what the deal with being a Rak'Duar is should he ever get to the second or third stage of his awakening (or you think of something you want it to be for your particular path) but for now "allows him to survive being sexed by a Succubus" covers the basics and more will be explained in the story itself.

4) Keep in mind our protagonist is physically small and relatively frail (also a bit on the naturally submissive side), so no "and then you just punch out the Succubus" solutions to the problems. He has to be a little more sneaky and clever than that.

That's... all I can think of for now. I hope you enjoy reading this story if you're just a reader and you have fun adding stuff if you're a writer!

Later!