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Chapter 8 by andycarlisle andycarlisle

Could you? Would you?

"I gotta go..."

(I liked how the last thread started, but I wanted an action at another point so I copied and pasted what I wanted. Obviously... this next part is not my own, it's from tantrikenetic)


You take a deep breath. After this, she is either going to be flattered or angry enough to kill you. Closing your eyes, you get the words out quickly. "I have always been attracted to your body, Melody."

"My body?" Melody a deep red and sinks further into the bubbles. "You mean like...my curves and everything?"

"Yeah...you have a very sexy body." You manage to get the words out before they burn your tongue.

"I know you've looked at me a few times over the years, especially when I'm in my underwear, but I always thought it was natural male reaction." She bit her lower lip subconsiously. "You really like what you see?"

"I meant what I said before, Brittani. You are very enticing."

"I never knew that you..." Her words trailed off and she coughed to clear her throat. "I'm kind of embarrassed for parading around you half-naked so much, now."

"That's why I didn't tell you. I didn't want you to feel awkward around me." You say. She doesn't respond at first and, although she seems flattered and not angry at all, you can't help but assume you made a bad choice. You should have gone with her eyes. "Look, if I made you uncomfortable, I'm sorry. It's just that-"

"No, it's okay Jack." Melody interrupts you. "I'm actually kind of giddy. It's flattering to know that all the times we have mock flirted, that it was actually working for you." She smils nervously, as if unsure of what to say. "But don't you think I'm a little, I dunno, chubby?"

"Chubby?" You ask in confusion. Melody isn't the skinniest girl on campus, but she's a far cry from chubby. She still weighs less than you and, if anything, she has just the right amount of meat on her. "Of course not! Where would you get that kind of... Keith." You finish, the answer coming to you in mid-question. Melody sighs and nods.

That's the last straw. you say to yourself. You can't take it anymore. Keith's ass is grass.

"I gotta go Melody." You say with an edge in your voice.

Melody sees the anger in your eyes and misunderstands. "Did I say something to upset you Jack?"

"No, no, something just came to my attention that I need to take care of. Don't worry, I'll be back in a few." With that, you take one final look at your best friend's body, or a least what's showing, then you notice the scared, sad look in her face. I'll make it up to her when I get back. You then make your way to Keith's apartment.

You pound on Keith's door. "Open up asshole! I need to make words with you right now!"

Keith yanks open his door and glares at you. "What the fuck do you want faggot?? You here because i dumped Melody and now you want a ride on my co-"

He couldn't finish the last word because your uppercut landed square on his jaw, sending onto his ass.

"Where the fuck do you get off telling Melody she's fat, you piece of shit?" You yell walking into his room to close the gap you just made. You see Ms. Blond-tan-and-slutty look in shock trying to cover her breast with her arms and try to figure out why Melody wanted to become that. You make it over to Keith as he recovers from the shock.

You grab him by the collar of his shirt and slam him into the nearsest wall. "Never! EVER! Go near Melody again! Got me? Huh fuckface??" you shout at his face.

"Hey man get the fuck bac-" you punch him in the face again.

"DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I JUST SAID KEITH?" you lower your voice so that only he can hear you. "If uou go near Melody again... their gonna have to feed you through a straw. Got it?" you wait for an answer.

"GOT IT?!?" You shout.

"Yeah, yeah, I got it alright? Just leave!" He whimpers blood streaming from his mouth.

"GOOD!" And with that, you smash your fist into his jaw one more time.

You walk back to your dorm and nurse your right hook. You feel bad that you left Melody alone a the apartment, you hope she forgives you for it. You debate whether or not to tell her what you just did.

You walk into your apartment and Melody runs up and hugs you.

"Jack! I'm so sorry! Whatever I did I'm sorry! Please don't leave again! I can't be alone tonight! I just can't take being alo- OH MY GOD YOUR BLEEDING! There's blood all over your shirt! Are you okay??"

Aw shit! you say to yourself. Keith bled all over your shirt.

"Uh... It's not mine Melody..." you say hoping she doesn't question you.

Does she question you further?

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